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| Ti Amo Part 2 | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 3 2008, 06:57 PM (36 Views) | |
| LVthugginATL | Feb 3 2008, 06:57 PM Post #1 |
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the chains that once linked us have turned to a great wall between us you called me your lover, your friend but now i'm watching as it end... ssssame old story again and again we get attached to someone and then somethin tragic occurs, when we aren't aware brings life to a halt, i cannot bare the sight of seeing you with a new man, does he love you as much as i do as long as you're happy and your love is pure i'll try and make due, so long as our friendship is sure and remains in tact, cuz if i lose that too then it'd kill me, boo we had something special, sorta still do so please as you walk off our beaten path blaze a new trail, but hold your wrath i'll be waiting right where you left the trail's still warm where your foot last crept... |
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| Brandon Cee | Feb 3 2008, 07:34 PM Post #2 |
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I liked this one as well. The thing is, you slowed your flow down for part 2 and I think it's smart becasue the second half is where all your emotion and whole-heartedness comes out. Nicely written. Keep at it bud. |
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