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Ti Amo Part 2
Topic Started: Feb 3 2008, 06:57 PM (36 Views)
LVthugginATL
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the chains that once linked us
have turned to a great wall between us
you called me your lover, your friend
but now i'm watching as it end...
ssssame old story again and again
we get attached to someone and then
somethin tragic occurs, when we aren't aware
brings life to a halt, i cannot bare
the sight of seeing you with a new
man, does he love you as much as i do
as long as you're happy and your love is pure
i'll try and make due, so long as our friendship is sure
and remains in tact, cuz if i lose that too
then it'd kill me, boo
we had something special, sorta still do
so please as you walk off our beaten path
blaze a new trail, but hold your wrath
i'll be waiting right where you left
the trail's still warm where your foot last crept...
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Brandon Cee
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I liked this one as well. The thing is, you slowed your flow down for part 2 and I think it's smart becasue the second half is where all your emotion and whole-heartedness comes out. Nicely written. Keep at it bud.
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