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Si Erutan
Topic Started: Feb 3 2008, 07:55 PM (75 Views)
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Si Erutan

"Everything in nature is lyrical in its ideal essence, tragic in its fate, and comic in its existence"

I've experienced and portrayed it all
...delayed and stalled...
it's merely myth to wait for salt
to sting wounds and leave a taste
...recieve the hate...
people DO just bleed mistakes


You see with faith, I believe today is feeding time
This sleepless wake - a friends face reading mine
Competing, I fight for brawns, but silence is golden
Trying to hold love, but the violence will scorn men
Torn and broken, I reach for the stars of her sky
As I parade myself - keeping my heart in disguise
I'd started to die, but never once was it physical
We parted in life - she kept her touch very minimal
Digital blasphemy's after me and I'm not real at all
Nor am I touching lives for now I can feel the fall
Reveal what's false and hide truth with wisdom
It's not the days of our lives, it's how we live 'em

Only the strong few can survive
...you men will die...
mostly the wrong cues end a life
and know when you sleep sound
...we count...
so show them you'll be proud


I grew up in these streets - my mother in an insane hell
Fixing up my mind and body, nothing else could top that
Her love was recieved as she hovered within an eggshell
As she split me in two and then danced upon the top half
Not that I admired her footwork - the elegance caught me
The celobate's are free, no more wicked thoughts please!
But I was relatively relevant to what irrelevance taught me
So I remembered truth was hidden - and set my heart free

But I am still unfinished material
...dumped in a serial...
jam-filled and still just as ethereal
as my soul was, so why lie more
...I'm bored...
my whole being's a guide's war


I don't mean to play games. I just mean to speak a bit
I have made the most mistakes - come to think of it
What's left to say's what I want to say, but lack words
We misinterperet love and life - we see it backwards

Si Erutan iS naturE

Nature is lyrical, tragic, and comic all at once. Life goes on.
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this shit's deeeeeep man!
i love the last verse

don't mean to play games. I just mean to speak a bit
I have made the most mistakes - come to think of it
What's left to say's what I want to say, but lack words
We misinterperet love and life - we see it backwards


it really hits home!
keep the sick licks comin man!
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This is clean rogue.. keep it up
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