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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 3 2008, 07:55 PM (75 Views) | |
| Brandon Cee | Feb 3 2008, 07:55 PM Post #1 |
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![]() Si Erutan "Everything in nature is lyrical in its ideal essence, tragic in its fate, and comic in its existence" I've experienced and portrayed it all ...delayed and stalled... it's merely myth to wait for salt to sting wounds and leave a taste ...recieve the hate... people DO just bleed mistakes You see with faith, I believe today is feeding time This sleepless wake - a friends face reading mine Competing, I fight for brawns, but silence is golden Trying to hold love, but the violence will scorn men Torn and broken, I reach for the stars of her sky As I parade myself - keeping my heart in disguise I'd started to die, but never once was it physical We parted in life - she kept her touch very minimal Digital blasphemy's after me and I'm not real at all Nor am I touching lives for now I can feel the fall Reveal what's false and hide truth with wisdom It's not the days of our lives, it's how we live 'em Only the strong few can survive ...you men will die... mostly the wrong cues end a life and know when you sleep sound ...we count... so show them you'll be proud I grew up in these streets - my mother in an insane hell Fixing up my mind and body, nothing else could top that Her love was recieved as she hovered within an eggshell As she split me in two and then danced upon the top half Not that I admired her footwork - the elegance caught me The celobate's are free, no more wicked thoughts please! But I was relatively relevant to what irrelevance taught me So I remembered truth was hidden - and set my heart free But I am still unfinished material ...dumped in a serial... jam-filled and still just as ethereal as my soul was, so why lie more ...I'm bored... my whole being's a guide's war I don't mean to play games. I just mean to speak a bit I have made the most mistakes - come to think of it What's left to say's what I want to say, but lack words We misinterperet love and life - we see it backwards Si Erutan iS naturE Nature is lyrical, tragic, and comic all at once. Life goes on. |
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| LVthugginATL | Feb 3 2008, 07:58 PM Post #2 |
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this shit's deeeeeep man! i love the last verse don't mean to play games. I just mean to speak a bit I have made the most mistakes - come to think of it What's left to say's what I want to say, but lack words We misinterperet love and life - we see it backwards it really hits home! keep the sick licks comin man! |
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| PoEtiK | Feb 3 2008, 11:23 PM Post #3 |
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This is clean rogue.. keep it up |
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| $hin3 | Feb 3 2008, 11:25 PM Post #4 |
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| $USPENCE THE KING | Feb 6 2008, 03:35 PM Post #5 |
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THATS THE REAL SHIT RITE THERE FOREAL NO DOUGT HOLLA ATCHA BOY $USPENCE 1. |
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