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| Jackie's Life | |
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| 17dogmaster | Jun 11 2012, 05:22 PM Post #1 |
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Chapter one, Part one: Stuck with "Ricky" Jackie tried to shake the tears from her eyes, but it didn't work. "Shut up, Louie," she said finally, although it came out as a whisper. Louie laughed. "What?" he said in a tone that mocked her very being. "You ARE fat." Next to him, Arthur laughed. But it wasn't exactly a real laugh. It was a fake one. One that meant he did not side with Louie's point of view one bit. She turned to face Sarah. "Tommorrow, bring the earplugs for us, please," Jackie told her. Then she looked acrost the room at Mark. "Ricky!" she shouted, trying to get his atttention. Without turning around, he raised one hand and gave a half-hearted sigh of, "Ricko." Jackie sighed and turned back to her work. Things had changed with since Mark had become friends with Louie. He was a different, crueler person. However, trying to ignore that fact, she kicked Arthur. He frowned and kicked back. They were simply wasting time. She looked at the clock to see exactly how much time they were wasting. She then shuddered. These days, she was frightened, almost terrified to leave her classroom. Why? Because of two people named Hope and Emma. They were the popular crew, and tormented anyone who wasn't one of their crew of liers and so called, "Perfect People." So they would tease, pick and prod at every little abnormality about Brianna, Sarah and Jackie, who were all strangely tall and quiet. Jackie, suddenly stressed, stopped her little kicking game with Arthur and went back to work. She liked being able to see her cousin, Kristina everyday, but she couldn't help but think that none of this would have ever happened at Central Valley. But there was no going back. That school was closed for good. |
| I have writer's block at the moment >.< | |
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| Sucram174 | Jun 11 2012, 06:25 PM Post #2 |
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Sorry, but I found this boring... |
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| 17dogmaster | Jun 11 2012, 07:25 PM Post #3 |
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Ouch. Probably because this is non-fiction, and all this acctually happened. |
| I have writer's block at the moment >.< | |
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| chichi87 | Jun 13 2012, 04:32 PM Post #4 |
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ummm, Ditzy Dani?
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O.o looking for sumthin |
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HOLY CRAP IM DREAMING! IM DREAMING! IM-... DANGIT! I WOKE UP! Spoiler: click to toggle Lucid dream goals: ★Fly ★Summon things ★sing and dance in front of a buttload of zombies and slap them afterwards. | |
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| 17dogmaster | Jun 16 2012, 04:55 PM Post #5 |
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I just realized this isn't the full chapter. I'll continue it now. Everything seemed to be perfect and bright the fateful day of September 16th. All went well throughout the day, and when they got onto the bus, Mark sat next to Jackie. They talked for quite some time untill Jackie remembered her promise to Sarah. Ok, Jackie thought, frowning. No big deal. Just ask. "Hey, umm, Mark?" He looked over with a cute little smile. "What?" Jackie paused for a moment, regretting what she was about to do. "Well, erm..I gotta ask..Will you go out with me?" Mark sat for a moment. Instead of replying with the usual 'No', he said, "What if I say yes?" Jackie grinned, her heart racing. "I'll be REALLY happy." Mark raised an eyebrow and asked another question. "And what if I say no?" Jackie's smile disappeared. "I don't know." Mark casually shrugged and stopped talking. Jackie got the message. "Okay. I understand." She moved out of his seat. Mark started biting his thumb. Jackie rolled her eyes. He's really an idiot, she thought. A cute idiot. He took the thumb away from his lips and strted smiling. That was when Jackie realised what he was saying. "Yes? Are you saying YES?" He nodded. Jackie tried her hardest to keep from squealing. She was smiling too wide for her face. Two days later, Mark broke up with her. "I think Arthur is cute!" Brianna told Jackie one day. Jackie started walking towards him. "I'm telling!" Jackie yelled back at her. Brianna yelled playfully, and began running after her. By the time she made it, Jackie had already told. Arthur looked up at her half-smiling. Brianna's face turned bright pink. Jackie rolled her eyes and glanced at Mark, who was sitting right next to Arthur. She didn't even bother to say Ricky. About a week later, Brianna asked out Arthur. His answer was no. Brianna frowned, and said, "Well, if I payed you $20, would you go out with me for a month?" Arthur frowned and nodded. Brianna smiled. "How long for $60?" Student Council elections came soon, and Brianna ran for President. Jackie sat next to Sarah and one of her newer friends, Kaitlynn. Mark and Arthur came to sit with them. When Brianna got on stage, Jackie got a great idea. "Wave at her, Arthur. It'll be funny." Arthur nodded, then grinned and waved at her. In front of the whole school, Brianna's face turned super red. Almost no one noticed except for Jackie and everyone around her. Laughing, Jackie gave Arthur a high-five. This was right before things began to change. This was before October. Chapter Two, Part One: "Forgetting you" Jackie and Mark had grown more and more apart. At this point, they had stopped talking almost completely. They may say a few words or laugh at one of Arthur's jokes, but other than that, Mark was nothing more than a stranger. All that was guaranteed to stay that way that cold, lonely October day. Jackie was still unhappy about her breakup with Mark. So when Mark called Arthur over in line, Jackie payed almost no attention. Mark whispered something into Arthur's ear. Then Arthur laughed, turning to Jackie. "Ha, that sucks for you! Mark's going out with Sally now! Boy, he sure got over you quick!" Arthur had said it jokingly, but those words hit Jackie hard. She shrugged, trying to smile, mostly because she wasn't sure if she wanted to start bawling like a baby or punch Mark in the face. During class, Jackie quietly cried. At that moment, she thought she loved him. Not because she did, but because she had nothing else to rely on. At this new school, all she had was Mark, Sarah, and Brianna.Now that Mark was gone, nothing could go anywhere but downhill. Atleast that's what Jackie thought. On the bus two days later, Jackie and Brianna sat behind Mark and Gabe, another person from Central Valley. Jackie was doing her homework, and Brianna was eavesdropping on Gabe and Mark's conversation. Her eyes got big and she leaned away from the seat. "Jackie! Mark broke up with Sally!" Brianna whispered. Jackie turned and grinned at her. "Really??" Brianna had her ear pressed back up against the seat. After another minute, she began frowning. "Ummm..He's going out with Sue though.." Jackie stopped smiling. "Really, is he just trying to kill me?" Brianna shook her head and then leaned so she could see through Jackie's hair to the tears on her face. "Jackie, it's just Mark. Believe me, you'd be better as friends. Get over him, Jackie. Try and forget about Mark." Jackie slowly spoke. "It's not that easy, Brianna. But for you, one of my best friends, I can try." Jackie really did try for Brianna in the days following. By the time two weeks passed and Mark was still with Sue, he had slipped out of her mind. Seeing Mark as anything ever more than a friend, or even a friend, was a distant memory, drifting in the wind. Edited by 17dogmaster, Jun 16 2012, 09:36 PM.
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| Bro | Jun 16 2012, 09:46 PM Post #6 |
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AWEsoooooome |
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| PBPanda221 | Jun 17 2012, 10:44 AM Post #7 |
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love it! |
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| 17dogmaster | Jun 17 2012, 01:25 PM Post #8 |
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Chapter Three, Part One: Moving On to Someone New Jackie sat in class, staring at her desk. She didn't know who she was anymore. She had just lost Mark and still wasn't completely over that. Most things seemed to be okay, but a nagging thought kept pushing into her mind. On the bus earlier, Jackie had looked at Mark, and something odd happened. Nothing. Her heart didn't pound, she wasn't at a loss for words. She just sat there, and Jackie had realized something. Mark WAS a stranger. They got to school, and Jackie was absolutely unhappy. She looked at Jon; Nothing. Allen; Nothing. Ian, Charles, Charlie. Every time she got the same result. But then, Jackie thought to look at Arthur. Instead of the normal, friendly boy she had always seen before, she saw his eyes. His eyes were such a deep brown that they looked almost black. After his eyes, she began to notice everything else about him. His laugh. His smile. Arthur was perfect. As Jackie thought this, Arthur turned around and smiled at her. Jackie sank into her chair, smiling uncontrolably. Arthur is perfect, she told herself. In every single way. Hope and Emma still terrorized Jackie. Every single day they found a new way to make Jackie's day go from good to bad. This day, they had a perfectly sweet, innocent chant. Except that it wasn't so innocent. Jackie didn't listen to the words, but only the evil, snarky tone they used while chanting it. Jackie ran over to the grass field and kicked the backstop hard enough that the teachers turned around to see what happened. "I hate them," Jackie hissed unhappily. Sarah and Brianna looked a bit worried that Jackie had lost her mind. Charles and Darren came over to be nice, and made them all laugh. Jackie began wiping away her angry tears. Hope decided to ruin the moment, because Emma liked Charles and was begining to throw a tantum. Jackie didn't mind, because Charles did get annoying. But she was sick and tired of not ever being able to have a good day. Jackie wanted to live the good life like Sue, Sam V. and Heather. Jackie wanted to be someone else. |
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