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Kami no Shinjutsu; The God of Truth; New project!
Topic Started: Jun 12 2012, 05:20 AM (127 Views)
Zodai
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---PROLOGUE---

"Only in the face of death can humanity realize their true selves"

These were just one of the many lines scratched across the walls of the endless hall...

"The inevitable death; the will to live..."

A cloaked man could be seen walking down the halls,

"Reality is an illusion, crafted by mankind."

His black hair covered his right eye...

"But that begs the question, what is the true reality?"

As a cold smirk came across his face.

"As the immortal face of death, and he of the will to live stand..."

He stepped through the grand doorway, into the long-forgotten sunlight...

"Who is the true god of truth?"

He walked out; to realize the prophecy of the truth.
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---CHAPTER 1---

"All are equal in the face of death"

Tick...Tock...

The quiet chime of the clock echoed across the silent room. The boy sat in the center; unaware of what was around him...

Tick...Tock...

Questions would have been buzzing around in his head; if not he had already tried, each to the same unsuccessful conclusion.

Tick...Tock...

Who was he? Why was he here?

How long has he been here?

Among these laid more abstract questions, as to the meaning of the mysterious phrases that were somehow led into the room.

Tick...Tock...

The personification of death, the reality of truth, the great illusion, Hades, The Black Flames of reality, The Final Prophecy...

Tick...Tock...

The God of Truth.

All these, mere slips of a sentence that had somehow made it into the room overs the weeks. Years? He could not even remember how long it had been since his mind could not recall time itself.

Tick...Tock.

For the first time in a long, long time, the clock stopped.

The boys mind adjusted to the pure silence. Endless darkness, infinite silence. The few moments felt like years, as the silence came to an end.

The next few moments were chaos. The walls came crumbling down; revealing a long-forgotten light. Mysterious objects spilled in through the holes, as the boys eyes met the light for the first time.

The boys hair was a dark brown; contrasting the dark, pale face he held for a long, long time.

He fell backward, the surrounding chaos having no effect on his blank face.

His blue eyes met the sun, as he barely recalled its name.

Hey, you ok?

A lone figure eclipsed the sun from his view. The girl's long hair fell onto his shoulder, as a gentle hand came down, and the abstract shape of a smile could be made out in the darkness.

The boy reached out; as his consciousness faded away...

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Well, it's definitely a bit different from the other stories so far ^_^ What does everyone think?
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ummm, Ditzy Dani?
Does he look like this?
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HOLY CRAP IM DREAMING! IM DREAMING! IM-... DANGIT! I WOKE UP!
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★Fly
★Summon things
★sing and dance in front of a buttload of zombies and slap them afterwards.
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Zodai
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Not quite, Lol.

I'm trying to be vague on details right now, adds to the effect ^_^
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I don't get the part were you mentioned Hades the god of the underworld in Greek mythology is this story like based off Greek mythology?
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Fool. I am Knightmare the everlasting.
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Zodai
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Not quite, but discussing any further would start to venture into spoiler territory :P
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Interesting, I'll keep reading!
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I love Pokemon, I can be a little obsessive so please try to be patient, but I also love fantasy and history.
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Wow; this story is awesome.
Hia XD
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Zodai
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---CHAPTER 2---

"The meaning of life cannot exist without death"

An endless nothingness.

The boys eyes awakened to a white fog, which was as constant as light itself. He struggled to go beyond it, as his body was too weak to move. He could not tell if he were sitting or standing, nor if he were dead or alive.

A question aroused itself in his mind. What is death? This was certainly not a heaven; as there was no sense of freedom in sight. It was no hell either; as if it were, he would most likely be tormented by whatever was locked inside his mind that could induce torture; although the boy had no recollection of anything memorable.

Pure nothingness.

Death is a mere removal from the world. Nothing more, nothing less, he thought. An eternity of only your thoughts to entertain yourself, no possible way to interact with the world.

What of the girl?

The boy was reminded of his last memory within the living world; as the tender hand reached out from what seemed like an eternal distance.

Had she died as well?

The thought crossed into his mind, as images began appearing in his mind. Images of the endless room; a place of shadow and nothingness, not much unlike the place he was in now.

In the images, an unfamiliar figure began to appear. The figure was a human; although he had difficulty discerning any other features at first. The fog slowly began to lift; as the details of the figure became clearer and clearer.

His black hair covered his right eye, as a cold smirk came across his face.

While attempting to discern any other details, the boy was struck with another wave of exhaustion, as his mind faded into nothingness once more.
---CHAPTER 3---

"Eternity is forever, without knowing how long it's been."

Some time later; the boy began to open his eyes once more.

His eyes were met with a blinding light; as they closed on instinct until they had adjusted. The lights overhead began to come into focus, as the room began to take form.

The walls surrounding him were of a pale gray; as the dark spots randomly scattered across them stood out more and more. His body was on a bed; covered by a pure white blanket.

To his right, was an empty chair. The chair seemed to be fairly simple; with a wooden frame and a small, white cushion to add comfort.

To his left, was also a chair. This one, on the other hand, had someone in it.

The man seemed to be in his mid-20's, his hair being a seemingly natural cross between black and dark blue. His dark blue vest hung off to the sides, as his head sleepily fell back with his closed eyes.

The man began to move, as his eyes opened, revealing a dark green hue in them. His pupils began to direct himself toward the boy.

They boy began to direct his eyes toward the man, unknowing of what would happen next.

"Hey! The kid's awake." The mans voice was fairly loud, as it echoed through the halls, onto the unknown.

The boy began to hear footsteps coming from the hall.

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I'm getting tired, so I'mma edit in the rest later.
Edited by Zodai, Jun 17 2012, 10:48 PM.
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