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Quarantine
Topic Started: Jun 13 2012, 12:11 PM (152 Views)
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I am sitting, alone, in a cellar. Three bullets in my revolver, none in my rifle. A baseball bat, a few cans of food, some fresh water, that's all I have. It's been a week, a week since I entered this damn place, thinking it would be a good idea to hide here. When I stepped in, I saw an empty cellar, no windows, no sign of life. I took one step and the door closed. Isolation, worst thing you can do to a human. I tried getting out, beating the door, exploring this whole place for another exit, but noting succeed.I came in here to hide, hide from them. They aren't zombies, they are worse. They can run, jump, swim, and they travel in packs. Anyone on the surface is dead. I could be the last on alive in the US. Only the United States... after a mere two days they started evacuations, knowing they couldn't control it. They took the people with no criminal record, or people who could pay, and left the rest to rot. The US has turned into one big quarantine zone, expect instead of keeping the disease out, it is trapping the disease in...
I'm sure after a few weeks they will bomb the place, just waiting for the one's who they left to die or escape. I envy those who do escape, free from the torments of the zone, because I'm in here, fighting insanity. The worst fight you can ever fucking fight, is the one were you have to battle yourself.
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ummm, Ditzy Dani?
Can I be in it? In the same cellar?
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brown hair, blue eyes, thirteen, tallish, and scared.
HOLY CRAP IM DREAMING! IM DREAMING! IM-... DANGIT! I WOKE UP!
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★sing and dance in front of a buttload of zombies and slap them afterwards.
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Hey, would you be offended if I wrote a post-apocalyptic story like this one?
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wow. I can't wit to hear the rest.
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chichi87
Jun 13 2012, 04:55 PM
Can I be in it? In the same cellar?
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that's you^^^
that's me↓↓↓
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brown hair, blue eyes, thirteen, tallish, and scared.
I GOT THE BIGGER CELLAR HA! Lol
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chichi87
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ummm, Ditzy Dani?
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Jun 13 2012, 06:31 PM
chichi87
Jun 13 2012, 04:55 PM
Can I be in it? In the same cellar?
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that's you^^^
that's me↓↓↓
Posted Image
brown hair, blue eyes, thirteen, tallish, and scared.
I GOT THE BIGGER CELLAR HA! Lol
Whats that mean...
HOLY CRAP IM DREAMING! IM DREAMING! IM-... DANGIT! I WOKE UP!
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Lucid dream goals:
★Fly
★Summon things
★sing and dance in front of a buttload of zombies and slap them afterwards.
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Zodai
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Totally not a power freak!
Really quick...

"They took the people with no criminal record, or people who could pay, and left the rest to rot."

That seems a bit poorly worded >_< Maybe editing for clarity would help, Lol. Makes it seem like either only criminals were left behind, yet they also left behind anyone who could pay...

Does that mean non-criminals were left behind too? That everyone could come, aside that they weren't a criminal, but criminals who COULD pay got to go? Does it mean the main character is a criminal of some sort?

Sorry, it's confusing >_<

Otherwise, great work. I assume you're going to do some form of morality check in this one? XD.
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