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Dawn Break- The first Nightmare[Pt1.]; First story
Topic Started: Jun 13 2012, 02:24 PM (169 Views)
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It, was just another day in New York City for a kid named nick. His dad was over seas and his mom owned a mechanic shop, he was just left with twenty-five dollars and some food for the day. Then all he heard was ringing and his eyes fluttered.
"Were the..." Said nick as he noticed the destroyed remains of NYC around him, smouldering around him were there was not much remains of it, but only skeletons and ashes.
[To Be Contunued
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ummm, Ditzy Dani?
Looking for this?
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HOLY CRAP IM DREAMING! IM DREAMING! IM-... DANGIT! I WOKE UP!
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★Summon things
★sing and dance in front of a buttload of zombies and slap them afterwards.
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@chichi
Thanks a lot, I'm happy that you were able to find a picture I was interested in.
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ummm, Ditzy Dani?
Np. Can I be in the story?
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Sure what do you want your name to be?
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ummm, Ditzy Dani?
Andi. She's eleven.
HOLY CRAP IM DREAMING! IM DREAMING! IM-... DANGIT! I WOKE UP!
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★sing and dance in front of a buttload of zombies and slap them afterwards.
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Haha, Good starting. Thats a good hook that you can use to get readers interested, but it kinda confused me the part where he said "then all he heard was ringing and his eyes fluttered." That doesnt make much sense, could you clarify because its sounds like he blinking and everything was different all of a sudden.
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Derp, the thing is after you survived a explosion you should die from your hearing would be just some ringing of bells (that are horribly tuned) in your ears.
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