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Dawn Break: The first Nightmare; Part 3/?[still decideing how long it is going to be]
Topic Started: Jun 14 2012, 03:19 PM (223 Views)
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Nick kneeled down beside a human that had armor around it that was made out of it's flesh, then back at a 50.cal that landed into its back and killed it.
"I'm guessing it came from that building right there."nick pointed to a small store and then saw a scope flash, he started running to it and noticed more of the mutated humans coming and he went into a all out run for the building. He saw the first mutated human come from the block but this one was different. He had a weapon instead of a clawed arm.
"No time to lose gotta attack" Nick said as he jumped into the buliding, he saw a eleven year old girl with a assult rifle.
"I suppose your the one who saved my life?" The girl just nodded and got back to killing the mutated humans
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Nick joined in and got 5 infected down when he noticed there was a rumbling noise about five blocks down.
"Great just great why is it always a berserker" The girl said.
"A what?!" Replied nick as he saw something much big about the size of a semi-truck come around the corner and make a terrifying roar that was a lot like a banshee and a yell of a human.
"Never mind that just shoot!" Said the girl.
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ummm, Ditzy Dani?
I love it so far
Her how she looks in the story
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Her as a kid
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Her with a gun next to a desceased friend also; age change. She's nick's age.
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HOLY CRAP IM DREAMING! IM DREAMING! IM-... DANGIT! I WOKE UP!
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The berserker fell down after about 5 shots to the eyes(but it couldn't see).
"So I'm nick what's your name?"Said nick softly.
"Well hi nick my name is Andi." Andi had dark hair and blue eyes and she was wearing a hoodie with nick's guessing a white blouse but he wasn't sure.
"So Andi, what are we doing now that we fought that berserker?" Nick calmly said.
"Nick I really don't know after all the more populated areas have more infected but the less populated aren't as dangerous." Andi said to nick.
"Andi I just woke up how long have I been asleep?" Nick said.
"Around three days, hungry?" Andi had a gram-cracker in her hand and was holding it out to nick.
"Sure I really am hungry

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." Nick said as he took the cracker and put it into his mouth. After that nick got some rest and fell asleep for the night, which Andi thought was weird because he's been sleeping for the past three days, but Andi didn't care and decided to stare out into the remains of the city hoping they could get out safely.
Edited by toticool, Jun 14 2012, 06:01 PM.
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ummm, Ditzy Dani?
Love it
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"Nick, wake up nick." Andi shouted at nick in the morning."Nick you've been asleep for awhile can you wake up?"Nick's eyes opened and he saw Andi standing beside him telling him to get up and he heard gunshots.
"Ok, what's going on."Nick reached for his 9mm pistol and his hands instead touched a m16.
"Thought that those 9mm weren't strong enough grab some gear were leaving now!"Andi yelled and kept on taking down infected, while nick got up and started to head to the door with Andi. When they reached the door they started running away from the infected with them not know of something worse in there way.
When they finally took a break they sat at a street corner in Midwest Harlem.
"I can't believe this Andi were the only survivors of a nuke I just can't believe this" Nick said with some sorrow in his voice.
"You'll get used to it running from the infected with only a gun and a friend." Andi replied. Then they heard something and got up and looked around, when they heard a banshee screaming, they got prepared to attack what they thought was a berserker but was twice as big and was a mix of all the infected.
"What the hell is that thing!" Yelled nick over the gunfire.
"Stop talking more gunshots!" Yelled Andi back.
This new thing has a gun on top and claws as legs and was on all four legs like a dog but nick noticed orange glowing spikes in his skin and shot one.
"Found it's week spot hit the orange"Nick said as he shot the spikes.
Finally the new infected was down but it wasn't easy nick was hurt during the attack and was still bleeding heavily.
"Am I gonna make it?" Said nick to Andi softly with tears in his eyes.
"I don't know nick just wait, hopefully you will be fine." Said Andi.
(I'm adding more to this before I start a new part)
They went into a apartment for Nick's protection.
Andi set nick on a bed and he started dozing off
Nick finally had his eyes closed and asleep.
"I really hope your going to be ok nick I just can't kill all of these infected alone." She opened a window and scouted the area through binoculars.
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Nick got up around midnight and took his watch. After awhile he heard a yell and gunfire.
"Get your god damn claws off me!" yelled someone while he wasted his bullets on the target. Nick shot five bullets into the mutant and invited the person up.
"Well, at least I ain't the only survivor" Said the boy.
"My name's nick and the girl's name is Andi." Said nick.
"Well, I don't care I'm going to the military base 5 kilometers from here."Said the boy.
The boy thanked nick and went towards the base.
The next morning nick told Andi about the kid.
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I am quitting on finishing this story, I have school now and thus having no time to write.
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