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| Jason, Zombie Slayer; This is the first chapter: 8 Pages | |
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| MrPotatoHead99 | Jun 22 2012, 09:44 AM Post #1 |
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Chapter One: Nightmares Jason was injured. Too injured to even crawl away from the death that was sure to follow. It was coming. He saw it coming, the snarl on its face reaching its gnarled ears. “No…please…don’t.” It was on top of him… And then he woke up. The same nightmare, every night. He was beginning to think that something was up. He’d tried everything, from hypnotism to simply not going to sleep. But there was no hiding from this nightmare. “Jason, darling, time for school!” His mum. Typical. She was oblivious to the nightmares Jason was having. “Coming, mum!” He was fed up of not being able to tell anyone. He knew even his best friend Cole would tease him. But Cole wouldn’t be laughing if he had the nightmares. He’s scared of everything. Even our teacher, Mrs Chap, and she is the nicest teacher in the school. Then he heard a noise coming from his bed. Oh, just his phone. Jason picked up his stylish new IPhone, and read the text message from the unknown number; “They are coming.” That was it. They are coming. Somehow he knew this linked to his nightmares. He couldn’t explain how, he just knew. *** “How was your day at school, honey?” Jason heard the voice coming from the kitchen. “Fine.” Jason replied unenthusiastically. It wasn’t. His biggest crush, Charlotte, had just got another boyfriend. It depressed him to think that every other girl in the school was swooning over him, except the one he really liked. He picked up the remote and turned on the telly. “And in other news, there has been an outbreak of a biological illness in Oxford, England. Scientists have told us it turns victims into zombies. They’ve strongly advised citizens to stay inside until this is all sorted out.” Then it cut to a picture of what the infected victim looks like, and what Jason saw made his heart stop. They looked exactly like the creatures in Jason’s dream. He was going to tell his mum, but then the phone rang. Jason picked it up. It was Cole. “Hey Jase, have you seen the news? I’ve heard that it spreads by the zombies biting you, so if you come across one -” That was all Jason heard until another, dark, menacing voice started saying “They are coming.” Those three words were the last things he needed right now. Nothing else followed, so Jason hung up. This wasn’t going to help his nightmare problem at all. He didn’t know how he was going to get to sleep again after today’s events. Jason woke with a start. He was right… the recent events have not helped his nightmares in any way. It was Friday. Finally, the last school day of the week. Today he had PE, his favourite lesson. And another bonus, it was cricket. The best sport in the world, as long as he was concerned. It wasn’t Cole’s best sport though. He can’t even throw a ball, let alone catch it. “Jason, are you going to eat breakfast or not?” Mum’s voice came up the stairs. “I guess.” “What’s the matter Jason? You’re not having any problems at school are you?” “No mum, I’m fine. Just. Fine.” Jason replied. He packed his items for school. Lunch, pencil case, class books, and locker keys. He had everything ready, so he left for school, not knowing the terror of what was going to come… The rest of the chapter: Jason’s first lesson was maths with Mr Halli. Mr Halli was the most boring a person could be, and in the most boring subject in school, they make a perfect pair. But Jason didn’t think that. Nor did Cole. They were sitting at the back of the classroom, so Mr Halli didn’t notice them talking to each other, not listening to him. “Jason! What’s x if 8x is 64?” Come Mr Halli’s voice from the front of the classroom. “Err…um…wait let me think-” “8!” Cole’s voice cut across Jason’s. “Correct. But I asked Jason. So why did you feel the need to shout out? That’s a ten minute detention at break time.” “But – no – argh!” Cole was annoyed. He needed to finish his English homework at break time, but now he had detention. “Well, after that little ordeal, can someone please tell me what I mean by 17x equals 34?” After a long maths lesson, it was finally time for PE. Jason walked to the changing rooms with Cole, talking about the news report. “Apparently it’s spreading so quickly, it’s already hit Shrivenham. It won’t be long before it gets to Swindon.” Cole explained. “We’d better be prepared.” Then they arrived at the changing rooms, got changed and headed off for the cricket strip. Jason and Cole were on the same team, along with Nigel, Alex and Harry. Nigel went up first to bat. He managed to hit the ball, but it was caught straightaway. “Jason, you’re up next.” Nigel uttered. Jason could tell he was annoyed. The first bowl went wide, so two runs for Jason already. The second bowl was right on target, and Jason smacked it with all his might and the ball went spinning off into the distance. Jason started running towards the opposite stumps, then back, then forth, then back, until he got six runs and got bored. “AAAAHHHHH!” Jason recognised that scream. It was Charlotte’s voice. She was on the field next to the cricket strips, so Jason ran to see what the matter was. When Jason got to her, he asked why she’d screamed. All she did was point in the direction of the school gates. Jason gazed at the school gates. He could see… people… no, they were – “ZOMBIES!!!” Typical Cole. The best thing to do was stay calm, and then Cole does the exact opposite. But Jason could see them clearly now, they were coming closer every second. Jason had an idea. He rushed back over to the cricket strip, grabbed a bat, and swung it at one of the zombie’s heads. The zombie was instantly killed. Jason watched the head as it rolled to a stop by his feet. “Yaaaaaay!” A big cheer rose up from behind him. Suddenly everyone was surging forward, grabbing bats, stumps, even the balls. “Charge!” Harry yelled. Several students ran forward, wielding their stumps and bats. As soon as Harry got by a zombie, it bit his left arm. “Argh, no!” He bawled. “Tell my parents I –” His pleas were cut short when the most repulsive transformation took place. His skin turned a dull green colour, and his teeth grew until they were as long and as sharp as toothpicks. Jason didn’t want to hurt his friend, but he had to. He closed his eyes and took a wild swing at Harry. Harry’s skull shattered with a huge crack. “Get back into the school! Barricade all the doors and windows!” Jason instructed. “Go go go!” As soon as Jason said that, everyone stampeded to get inside first. Jason kept back, keeping any zombies at bay. Jason was assisted by Alex, who was impaling zombies with his well sharpened stump. As soon as everyone was safe inside, Jason started to make for the school. He turned around to see if Alex was coming, but all he saw was several zombies crawling all over him. “Alex – no!” Jason was stunned that this great friend had gone down. Jason turned back around and staggered towards school. Edited by MrPotatoHead99, Jun 22 2012, 10:46 AM.
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| Snipe15 | Jun 22 2012, 05:09 PM Post #2 |
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It was a pretty good story, there are a few details that maybe need some touching up on. (Ex. "He’d tried everything, from hypnotism to simply not going to sleep. But there was no hiding from this nightmare." How would his mom not know about this? Moms are hard to keep secrets from.) |
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| MrPotatoHead99 | Jun 23 2012, 10:46 AM Post #3 |
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Thank you for the compliment, but Jason is someone who hides things away, hoping that by doing that, the problems will stop. |
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| Snipe15 | Jun 23 2012, 11:19 AM Post #4 |
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ok sounds good. |
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| PBPanda221 | Jun 23 2012, 07:17 PM Post #5 |
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awesome. I like it, yet it seems very fast paced. the only thing is I live in america, not england, so im not very familiar with the game cricket, but it sounds somewhat like baseball..... Edited by PBPanda221, Jun 23 2012, 07:18 PM.
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| MrPotatoHead99 | Jun 23 2012, 11:51 PM Post #6 |
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It's sort of like baseball, but I don't really understand baseball. Thank you for the compliment, but is it being fast paced a good thing or a bad thing? |
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| MrPotatoHead99 | Jun 26 2012, 10:43 AM Post #7 |
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I will be posting the second chapter soon |
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| zZThunderStorm | Jun 26 2012, 03:05 PM Post #8 |
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I wanna read more. I changed it after I read what you said XD Don't worry,just please write more... Edited by zZThunderStorm, Jun 28 2012, 12:02 AM.
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| MrPotatoHead99 | Jun 27 2012, 10:52 AM Post #9 |
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What do you mean by: "It's not good,but you did it for one thing so,it's still epic" |
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| MrPotatoHead99 | Jul 2 2012, 08:42 AM Post #10 |
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Oh, thank you! I'm still writing the second chapter, I haven't put much into it yet, I haven't had much time... Edited by MrPotatoHead99, Jul 2 2012, 08:43 AM.
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