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| zZThunderStorm | Jun 26 2012, 03:35 PM Post #1 |
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Hi,my name is Jake.I will tell you stuff about me.First of,I am not a freak.Or a murder,I am just normal and have to defend myself in sitition like the one that occured lately.You probalary don't get me,so I will tell you the real story now,and what I'm doing next.I know I am talking to much so I should start the story. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 1:The News Danger I was brushing my teeth and seeing my ginger hair on the mirrior.My blue eyes glistened from the reflection.I went down stairs knowing my mum making my favourite breakfeast.It was Pan Cakes.I was really hungry,so this is a good match.I went upstairs to wear my white shirt and my jeans. "Honey,come down stairs.I made you your favourite breakfeast."Mum shouted softly. I went down stairs and and saw my pancakes.I quickely ran to the brown table and sat down.I started eating,it tasted delicous...I kept on eating faster and faster with-out realising until I finished my food. "I made this since it's you 15th birthday."Mum said with a smile. "Mum..."I said in a deep voice. I always didn't like birthday parties when I was little,I began hating it when I was 4.It was when my friend invited me to his birthday,he began to show off and made fun of me.I wasn't friends with him from that day. "Don't worry,I didn't make a birthday party for you,I knew you hate birthdays."Mum said sadly. I went to the living room,it's bright white walls were kind of annoying..I sat down on the black couch.I opened the T.V and it was news. "Hello people,you must hear what has happened,a doctor made a illegal experiment.We will be back after the short break."The News man said. "Mum,you heard that?"I asked her. "I heard everything."She said with a shocked face as she sat down. "Were back,as we said,a doctor made a illegal experiment and tried it on himself.The effect turned him to a zombie."The news reporter said. Mum and I had our mouths opened. "At least he didn't do it in Australia"Mum said. Oh no,when ever mum says stuff like it turns out to be the opposite. "Yes,the doctor was from Australia and that makes things lucky for the other countries.No-"He said has he put his two fingers on his ears. "At least there not in Sydney!"Mum pointed at the T.V. "MUM,NOOOOOOO!"I shouted. "It seems that it's at Sydney,and thats all from James Kreta but I do advise you,pack up and leave Australia or stay in your house!"He said as the News finished. Aww man,this just gets better and better,for the zombie.Plus school starts tomorrow because this is the end of the weekend. I went upstairs to check my email on Google and it said stuff like "Zombies come to Life!".This zombie thing is getting serious.I was thinking to much at the same time and I got tired.I slept on my bed not knowing what will be happening that evening.I woke up and saw the time on my computer,4:34? I must of slept for 5 hours,wonder what I am having for dinner.I went down stairs to see my mum making dinner. "Mum,what's for dinner?"I asked. "My special chicken!"she said. "Okay."I said as I sat down on the couch. I opened the T.V and more news was happening. "Hello people,today some swats went to where the zombie was and some got infected.It seems that when the zombie bites you or scratches you and you turn to a zombie."He said. "Mum,you should come,more zombie stuff"I said. Mum came and sat next too me. "You better be aware tonight,zombies might infect you while your sleeping.I recommend that you should keep a weapon nearby to defend yourselves for the up coming danger. "Okay,time for bed Jake."Mum said. That night I didn't sleep at all.I was imaging getting bitten by a zombie or my bests friends getting bitten.This morning I went down stairs to see our home was safe but covered with crosses.We usually do this for Christmas but now?I went up stairs to wear my school uniform.I got my blue shirt and wore my black pants. "Mum,I'm gonna eat an apple and walk to school if thats okay with you." I asked. "Sure,but make sure you have someone with you."She said. This zombie thing is like fully forgotten,was it a long dream? Probably not but at least there's no zombies on the street.I went to Jim's house.Jim was my best friend.I knocked on the door and saw Jim. "Hey,wanna walk to school today?"I asked. "Sure thing."Jim answered. We walked as I ate my apple. "Did you all the zombie stuff yesterday?"I asked. "Yeah,all the channels were talking about the zombie stuff"He said. We continued walking to school until we saw the gate. "Jake,you think the school is talking about the zombie problem?"Jim asked. "Of course,it might be the only thing the school is talking about."I said. Edited by zZThunderStorm, Jun 27 2012, 02:48 AM.
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| MrPotatoHead99 | Jun 27 2012, 10:51 AM Post #2 |
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VERY GOOD... But you might want to check your Grammar, Punctuation and Spelling... Apart from that, sounds good! |
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