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The Last Disciple; An old story I found in my Hard drive.
Topic Started: Jun 30 2012, 04:46 AM (56 Views)
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Prologue

Rin’Ked has been savaged by a 5000 year war between its inhabitants. The Human Mir’Dar Empire of the West fights ferociously for its survival. The Human Sir’Dar Nomads escape the massacre of Mio’Sar, their home city. The Dwarven Nik’Sa’Tren Clans purge their cities of the Cult of The Dark Ones. The Elven Rin’Ad’Len Tribes fight among themselves while their higher, civilized brothers, the Rik’Sa’Len struggle with their own civil war. All while the Demonic Darke Horde devour the land, leaving the barren, burning ruins of cities and towns behind. But now a hero is born, a hero that will end the war and destroy the Darke Horde and that hero is born in the burning ruins of Ostagar.

Chapter 1

The baby cried the entire time.
“Saleb! The baby is crying what will I do?” Said the Woman in alarm
“I don't know Myrna; give it a bottle or something!” Saleb replied hurriedly.
The carriage bounced on a stone. The baby cried more. Myrna sticks a bottle in the baby’s mouth and it starts sucking on the bottle.
“Saleb, I think it stopped crying!” said Myrna
“Good Myrna. Now let me concentrate on not getting killed. His parents are already dead and I don’t want him to die on a road while we’re bleeding to death in a ditch!” growled Saleb
As a day goes by without much incident, when night approaches they stop at the side of the road. They set up camp and got ready to sleep.
“Saleb?” asked Myrna.
“What is it?” groaned Saleb.
“Where are we going?” Myrna asked.
“Ostagar, it’s a small town on the border of Mir’Dar.” Groaned Saleb
“Oh, and what shall we name the baby?” Asked Myrna
“Sindred, we shall name him Sindred.” Stated Saleb

16 Years Later

The boy ran through the streets and side alleys, he had just come back from school and he was still wearing his school uniform which was a plain white sleeved tunic with brown leather shorts. As he arrived at his door he slowed down and stumbled through.
“Mum, Dad I’m Home!” the boy yelled.
Silence reigned through the house.
“Mum? Dad?” the boy yelled again.
The boy wandered silently around the house which was dark because the lights were switched off to the kitchen. He opened the door and the next thing he knew he was blinded by the lights flicking on.
“Agh! What the!” Mumbled the boy.
“Surprise!!!!!!” Voices yelled around him.
“Huh wha????” Mumbled the boy.
As his eyes adjusted to the light he saw his parents, friends and family around him with party hats on and a birthday cake on the table behind them.
“Happy 17th Birthday Sindred!” They all said.
“Oh, thank you guys.” Sindred said while rubbing his eyes.
As the formalities continued and the games were played and the cake was cut more people streamed out as it got late. When it was nearly evening the only people that were left was his 14 year old sister Mico, his parents Myrna and Saleb and his friends Kira, the twins Markis and Ronic. After listening to the radio for a while Markis and Ronic went back home. Kira was sitting next to Sindred, sitting snugly next to him. She got up and said
“Well I best be going now. See you tomorrow Sindred” while she gave him a kiss on the cheek.

Chapter 2

As Sindred woke up in the morning he groaned. Having slept late last night because the school holidays were about to start. He went to the toilet and did his business and brushed his teeth. He then went down the stairs into the dining room. He greeted his parents a good morning as his sister wasn’t awake yet.
“Go wake up your sister Sindred” his mother asked.
“Not yet.” Replied Sindred
Half way through breakfast Mico came down the stairs. After breakfast his Parents went out to work while leaving Sindred in charge of Mico for the day.
“I’ll go to the marketplace to get us some food okay?” Sindred asked Mico
Mico nodded while reading a book. As Sindred went out and locked the door behind him. The marketplace was a crowded but surprisingly not such a smelly place. As he went to the usual place where he got his lunch he wandered what would happen if this was all taken away by the Darke Horde but unbeknownst to him that was about to happen the day. After buying his lunch and bringing it back home to eat with his sister. As the day went on and his parents got back from work, they were about to go to bed when the unthinkable happened. The Darke Horde reached Ostagar.

Chapter 3

As Sindred was about to go to sleep he heard the loud bangs on the front door. As he got up to go see who it was he was surprised to see Markus and Ronic at the front door, sweating heavily.
“What are you guys doing out here?” Sindred asked
“The Darke Horde, there here!” They both said.
“What!??!!?!? Guys come in! I’ll go wake my family up!” Sindred said panicked.
As Sindred woke his family up his father went into the attic and while getting weapons Saleb saw the devastation across Ostagar. Buildings were burning and there were Fanatics and Foot Soldiers everywhere. As he clambered down Saleb saw that Myrna and Mico had already packed some provisions liked they had discussed before.
"Okay people. Here take these." Saleb says while giving Ronic, Markus, Sindred swords and Mico and Myrna staffs. He had a revolver type lever action rifle for himself. "I assume you guys know how to use those?" He says to Ronic and Markus.
"Yes Mr. Kinsa" They both reply.
"Good. We have to get past the gates and get a carriage to escape to the Capital. Myrna you remember where it is?" Saleb asks
"Yes I do." Myrna replies.
"Ok. Brace on the door on break out and follow me on 3." Saleb says.
"1"
"2"
"3"
"GO!"

Chapter 4

As the group burst out a few Foot Soldiers looked in their direction and set chase. Saleb stopped and fired his rifle into one of them, blasting them off his feet. Saleb raced to catch up to the group while reloading his rifle. When he caught up they were nearly at the stables. They boys already had blood on their swords and were all breathing heavily. When they reached the stables Myrna immediately started preparing the carriage and Mico was starting to hook up two horses to the carriage. Saleb and the boys went over to the Stable Owner's House. There were Foot Soldiers and Fanatics gathered around the burning ruins of the house. As Saleb prepared to fire at the lead Foot Soldier the boys prepared to pounce. As Saleb shot the leader in the head the boys pounced on the rest of them. When they were finished they went back to the carriage and got in. Markus and Ronic were shaking with exhaustion.
"Are you guys alright?" Saleb asked.
"Yeah we're fine" They both said.
"Okay. Myrna let's go! We're all se-" Saleb stopped when an arrow head and it sprouted from his chest.
As Sindred, Markus, Ronic and Mico stared at Saleb who dropped to the floor of the carriage the Fanatic who shot Saleb laughed maniacally.
"D-D-Dad?" Mico whimpered.
Sindred took a much more direct approach as Mico started sobbing. He took the rifle which was loaded and shot, more by luck rather than skill, the Fanatic in the head. As Myrna started the carriage off when they turned over Saleb. He was barely alive and when Myrna called Markus and Ronic to take over, which they without a word. Myrna approached Saleb, he was breathing hard.
”Saleb I’m going to take out the arrow head okay?” Asked Myrna
Saleb nodded and clenched his teeth. Myrna broke of the part with the fletching and pulled out the rest. They could see the pain in Saleb’s eyes but they didn’t say anything. By that time Mico had cried herself to sleep and Myrna was bandaging up Saleb even while he was telling her that he wouldn’t make it and would die before morning. Myrna kept saying that he would make it, more of a reassurance of herself than Saleb. As they stopped a long way away from the burning ruins of Ostagar near a field they set up camp. As Sindred lifted Mico’s sleeping body down into a tent and went back to help Myrna lift Saleb down he couldn’t help but feel sad and angry. Markus and Ronic had already occupied a tent for themselves.
“Sindred, you can go and sleep. I’ll take care of your Father.” Myrna told Sindred kindly.
“No Mother, I want to help you as well.” Sindred replied.
“Oh fine. Just sit over there and wait for me to call you over.” Myrna replied
As Sindred sat on a chair he started to feel drowsy almost immediately. The excitement of the day had drained him of energy and a few seconds later he fell asleep.
As Sindred fell asleep Myrna was tending to Saleb. As Myrna got tired as well and sat on a chair and then she too gave way to sleep. Saleb felt and got weaker he finally saw the world slipping away, giving way to light. Saleb’s heart slowly stopped beating and finally, he took his last breath and closed his eyes, for one last time.

Chapter 5

They found Saleb dead the next morning. Mico cried again and although Myrna didn’t Sindred could see her sorrow in her eyes. Sindred collected the ammunition from Saleb’s body and took possession of the rifle as well. Before they set off they buried Saleb’s body and did the formalities. The ride was quiet and uneventful with a few toilet breaks. They had decided during one night to go to Mid’Ra’Car, the city housing the Mir’Dar’s military’s head quarters. It took 5 days to get there.

Mid’Ra’Car was a noisy city but relatively safe city, at day that is. When night fell all the evil came out. Crime filled the streets and most people stayed in. They had decided to go and try out for the army or some mercenary guild to earn a living. They stayed in a tavern that took up most of the money they had managed to bring, leaving them a measly 40 pieces of Sid’ra, the currency of the Mir’Dar empire. They had only managed to get a small room so some of them had to sleep on the floor. Sindred, Markus and Ronic slept on the floor. When morning arose they skipped breakfast and Sindred, Markus and Ronic went to the local Mercenary’s guild and Mico and Myrna looked for another job at the local weaver’s.

Chapter 6

As the boys entered the dimly lit hallway of the mercenary guild they followed the sign to the recruitment area. They came out into the back field behind the building which there were many recruits sitting around a clearing with two people in it. One was clearly the recruiter while the other was a recruit. They had managed to get close enough to hear what they were saying.
“…tack me, go on, try to kill me. If you succeed then you are of course accepted into the guild. The rest of you will have to come back tomorrow then. Also another way of getting recruited is fighting well enough and managing to stay fighting for 2 minutes.” The Recruiter said.
The recruit stayed silent and drew his sword. He charged at the recruiter and bellowed a war cry. The Recruiter stayed calm and just before the recruit slammed into him he side stepped and slammed the side of his hand into the recruit’s neck. The recruit was sent sprawling into the ground and he was out cold. Other recruits came and pulled him away while Sindred, Ronic and Markus joined the crowd. More fights went on with very few managing to get in the guild. Finally the only ones left were Ronic, Markus and Sindred.
“You three look young for this,” the Recruiter said.
He was right; they were all 17 whilst the other recruits were at least 25.
“Well, alright who’s going first?” the Recruiter asked.
Markus raised his hand up and so the Recruiter chose him. As they drew their swords and started to fight, at once swords clashed with the younger Markus was faster than the 40 year old Recruiter but then the Recruiter’s experience began to come through. The Recruiter threw Markus on to the ground while throwing away his sword, it spearing the ground with a thud. As the Recruiter was about to ask him to surrender he swept the Recruiter’s legs from under him, causing him to fall and drop his sword. As Markus scrambled to claim his sword the Recruiter got up and said
“Lively one aren’t you?”
The Recruiter picked his sword back up and started to approach Markus. Both Ronic and Sindred looked at the clock, 25 seconds left to go. The Recruiter attacked while Markus parried and countered all the time. The last 10 seconds were intense as the Recruiter’s attacks were intensifying. In the last 5 seconds it was glints of steel and the sounds of sword clashing. When the 2 minutes were up and the cloud of dust kicked up by them was cleared the Recruiter was on the ground and Markus pointing both swords at his neck while having a cut on the cheek.
“I guess you’ve won.” mumbled the Recruiter.
Markus dropped the Recruiter’s sword and sheathed his own.
“Go to the infirmary and get your cheek patched up then report to Jokken.” The Recruiter told Markus. He then turned to face Ronic and Sindred. “Alright, now who’s next?”
Ronic raised up his hand.
“Alright lad, come on.” Beckoned the Recruiter
Ronic walked towards the Recruiter while drawing his sword. Swords clashed and Ronic pushed the attack. While peppering the Recruiter with multiple slashes he was also using his body to attack the Recruiter. Ronic punched the Recruiter in the side of the head and he stumbled. As he was about to give a side sweep to the legs of the Recruiter when the Recruiter blocked the attack with his foot and smiled. He then proceeded to kick Ronic down and was about to aim his blade at Ronic’s throat when the two minutes were up.
“Huh, well kid you’ve passed the test.” The Recruiter told Ronic while Ronic got up and started to walk back towards the guild building. The Recruiter turned to Sindred and beckoned him forward

Chapter 7

Sindred slowly walked towards the Recruiter, drawing his own sword at the same time. The first to strike was the Recruiter. As Sindred parried with his own blade he heard the Recruiter say
“Since you’re the last one here, the fight is only over when one of us gives up. Okay?”
Sindred nodded in agreement, now it was a fight to exhaustion. Sindred started to send several blows but all of them were parried, the Recruiter stabbed and slashed but were all blocked. Then Sindred knocked away the legs of the Recruiter and kicked him in the side while slashing him across his chest plate, making an opening through the armor. The Recruiter kicked him off and slashed him across the cheek and chest, both cut deep, drawing first blood. As Sindred scrambled away with his blood dripping onto
the sand the Recruiter got back up. All of a sudden Sindred kneeled down, bowing his head low.
“All ready given up?” the Recruiter asked
Sindred stayed silent as the Recruiter approached him
“All you need to say is ‘I Give up Sir’ to go home”
Sindred suddenly looked up with a smile on his face. The Recruiter looked at him curiously and suddenly he was blinded by the sand that was thrown in his face, he was so surprised that he dropped his sword, allowing Sindred to pick it up, but then the Recruiter blindly started to punch and hit Sindred several times sending him sprawling to the ground. Although blinded he knew he was winning but didn’t let his guard down. Sindred groaned in pain as he felt the bruises on his body and head but got back up and slashed the Recruiter across the chest, opening a shallow cut across his chest but still drawing blood. As the Recruiter dropped to his knees Sindred felt dizzy because of the blood dripping from his cheek. As the Recruiter said the words “I Give Up” Sindred dropped to the ground and fell unconscious from blood loss and exhaustion.


Chapter 8

Sindred woke up in the Infirmary of the mercenary guild. As the world turned from blurriness into sharp focus he felt throbbing pains from all over his body. He touched his cheek and felt the jolt of pain go through him. As he tried to sit upright he saw an assistant go to call the doctor. As he fell back down from the pain he saw the doctor coming to help him. When the doctor helped him to sit up right he asked “How long has it been since I came here” and the doctor replied “It’s been 5 days.” After a while the doctor let Sindred go out to Jokken’s office. As he pushed open the door he saw Jokken sitting in a chair, waiting.
“Come sit down.” Jokken commanded
Sindred sat down in the chair that was in front of Jokken’s desk.
“Welcome to Black Steel. I can tell you that Ronic and Markus have been accepted formally and that they are currently on a mission with their Battle Group. Your equipment has been transferred to your room and that your Battle Brother is waiting to see who you are.” Jokken said. “Your room is the last door on the left, down the corridor, number 15B.”
Sindred nodded and waited.
“You may go now” Jokken told him
Sindred got up and went to his room. He opened up the door and went inside. At first he thought it was empty until a head popped over the top bunk.
“Hey. You must be Sindred. I’m Nikre. I’m your Battle Brother.” Nikre said. Sindred nodded and went over to his locker and opened it. Inside were his possessions and a set of blackened steel and leather armor. As he took them out and put them on he marveled at, actually, how comfortable it was. He took out a new steel long sword which was blackened as well. As he sheathed it in it’s scabbard and clipped it to his belt. He then took out his rifle, which earned a comment from Nikre, and clipped it to his back. He then exited the room after unclipping his rifle and sword and putting them back into the locker and locking it. He went to the mess hall to grab a bite to eat.

Chapter 9

The Mess Hall was like what it was called, quite messy. there were various mercenaries eating and talking to each other. There was one group he already disliked from the look of them. They were brutish looking people with the biggest of them looking like the leader. Sindred looked away as the leader looked at him and the rest of his group. Sindred lined up for the thick meaty soup they served for their meals. After a while of waiting he got his bowl of the thick soup. As he sat down at a table that was empty. While observing the soup's contents, which seems to contain a mixture of soup, lamb's meat, beef and chicken and some spices. It actually didn't taste all that bad thought Sindred. Suddenly with almost all of the soup was splashed onto him and he flinched as the steaming soup burned his exposed skin. He looked up to see the leader of the brutes.
"Hey, newbie. Time to pay your respects. Give all the money you have on you to me."
Sindred chose to stare and one of the brutes slapped him across the face. Sindred's anger and rage started to build up.
"Hey, newbie, you listening? Are you listening to Loki?" the leader, Loki asked.
Sindred continued to be silent as Loki started to push him around. His blood started to boil until he snapped. One of Loki's boys tried to punch Sindred but Sindred caught his fist and having been trained in his village more extensively in fighting, broke his wrist. As Sindred brought down more of Loki's boys he finally took down the last of them, leaving six groaning bodies on the floor. He then started sizing Loki off.

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Edited by RCJJ, Jun 30 2012, 07:36 PM.
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Note it was from quite a while back.
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