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The Wall: Chapter 1; Chapter 1: The Wall
Topic Started: Jul 5 2012, 12:15 PM (99 Views)
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They thought it would be the end, But it birthed a new world. A world where you don't get a second chance if you make a mistake, Instead you get death.

In 2390 a advanced alien race invaded earth, The humans fought bravely but were outmanned and outgunned. No one figured out why they were here, Minerals, Water, colonization, Or even for plant life. All these theories didn't help at all. Instead earth was nearly destroyed by the aliens advanced weapons and tech, They though it would be the end but no. It birthed a new world, A beastly world with the ruins of old earth scattered across. Mankind wasn't all stupid, They had the smarts to hide. Unpredicted a small group of eight had banded together, They built a wall, Protecting the south from any alien remnants, For once in many years... Mankind possibly has a chance of survival.

Alex watched as small dust storm glided over the dry and desolate floor. It had been six days ago when a friend of his died, Eaten by cannibalistic aliens. "Eyy alex! give us a hand down here!" Shouted Carter from below the wall. Alex looked down, They nearly had small village behind the wall, Barracks, An armory, A "potty" area, And a few wells. As alex hurried down he heard a noise, A sizzle noise, He's heard it before. "WE GOT SOME ARMED GEEKS!" Shouted don from atop the wall. Geeks, What they called the aliens, The armed ones.
Alex looked around and eyed the armory, He dashed towards it and quickly swung open the door. Aks, Umps, Glocks, and other weapons and ammo were on steel shelves on the walls.

Don stomped in, His usual slicked back red hair and dirty undershirt were both drenched in sweat. As for his torn slacks and combat boots, They were covered in dust. He grabbed a Ak and eyed Alex,
"Ou' gonna Stan' Aroun' all day?" He said scratchily

Lily sprinted in, Her messy red hair reflected light and caused usually causes someone to get there eyes burn't, Her tactical vest was unzipped a bit at the top and her short shorts were covered in as much dust as her ragged nikes. "dude, Seriously you gotta cut your hair!" She shouted while grabbing her crossbow.

Tim and Starchy walked in, They were twins. They both shared a vary cheesy mullet and wore the same riot armor. They grabbed a few Shot guns then headed out "You got something in yer' teeth there, Alex" They both said aloud leaving.

Sarge walked in, He was a massive brute, We wore a army tank top with baggy pants and sulky boots. "What you doin RUNT! We got company!" He said spitting in alex's face. He grabbed his Gatling gun and walked out.

Carter headed in, His torn and stained button shirt was almost soaked in sweat, He wasn't wearing any pants but just spongebob boxers and army boots "I just woke up." he said grabbing a sniper rifle and leaving.

Dan walked in, He claimed that his suit was worth 200 dollars before the carnage but it must not be worth much now. Its torn up and ragged. "Wassup lil' Alex" He said grabbing a double barrel and walking out.

Then there was alex who was rummaging through a lead chest. "here it is!" he said brushing his black hair out of his face, He wore his usual. A hoodie with the sleeves cut off and hole covered jeans with sneakers.

As Alex left the armory he saw the opponent, A large pack of aliens in there blue armor. Each one wielded a a weird looking pistol that packed a punch. Don began to fire, As well as Zoe and the twins. Sarge charged at them whacking one in the face, Alex reached into his jacked and pulled out a glock. He began firing, It took a horde of bullets just to pierce the armor, Eventually one started spewing a thick blue liquid. He fell to the ground with a thud. The others kept pushing on but sarge tackled one and whacked it in the face with his bare hands. The alien started spewing the liquid as well. Then the last one retreated shouting
"Ikna! vauich struuu Knia viaw!"

" WOOOT WOOOT!" shouted Don. "
YEAHHHHHH" ahouted the twins headbutting each other.
"AWWWWW YEAH YAH" Shouted Zoe.
"BOO TO THE YAH!" Shouted Carter putting his ragged jeans on.

They were fools to take this day as a victory, For more was still to come.


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accidentaly added a " after don ignore that please
Edited by pimpBAM2, Jul 5 2012, 12:36 PM.
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JirachitheGreat
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It's alright, but you said his friend was eaten by cannibalistic Aliens.
Cannibalistic means someone who eats their own race, not someone eating a human.
I love Pokemon, I can be a little obsessive so please try to be patient, but I also love fantasy and history.
Jirachi+Litwick=Birthday Duo.
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pimpBAM2
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Oh my bad, And sorry if i have horrible grammer
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It's alright, it's not that awful.
I love Pokemon, I can be a little obsessive so please try to be patient, but I also love fantasy and history.
Jirachi+Litwick=Birthday Duo.
http://jirachithegreat.deviantart.com/
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