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The Ruined World; Post-Apoc novel based around the ending I thought of.
Topic Started: Jul 18 2012, 05:57 AM (119 Views)
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The Ruined World

Prologue

The Sun rose over the desert Wasteland. Very few settlements were made here, even less were able to survive without lack of food, water or medicine. The date was 2134AD. Months were long forgotten but people recorded it as the fifteenth Month of the hundred and twenty second year. The World was racked by plagues, wars and death. The world population dropped and humanity nearly became extinct, if not for one treaty that was to last forever. The Surviving remnants of the governments of the world agreed to stop fighting to save the world, but the damage had been done. Droughts, Floods, Typhoons and Tornadoes. Cities and Towns were torn from their foundations and smashed apart. People barely survived. They try to rebuild but none of them know how, none till now.

Chapter 1

It was dawn over the small settlement but many of the people who lived there were awake. The Settlement was fortunate enough to find one of the better off sub urban areas of Pre Disaster homes. They had set up a strong wall big and menacing enough to keep away curious people and most raiders. The Guards were propped up in the watch towers while the survivors were going about their daily business buying what they could from the merchant stalls and the merchants that were packing up to move on to another settlement. Though not one of the larger Colony-Cities that had been set up in the ruins of cities this settlement was certainly big enough to be considered a Settlement-Town.

Two boys that looked around the age of seventeen walked through the marketplace, bags were in their hands. The bags looked around half full, filled with cans and bottles. The boys were looking for food and supplies for their sister and mother. Their father had gone missing several months before on a scavenging run but turned up after two months when a patrol found his rotting carcass in a ditch with most of his gear having been torn from him and pieces of his flesh having been eaten by wasteland animals. Their mother was still recovering from grief while they and their sister were hiding it. Their sister was a year younger, pretty face and a good physique while the boys themselves were quite well built and both wanted to protect their sister and mother and were both naturally jokers but can be serious at times. It was nearly nightfall when they had found everything they needed. They returned home just as the sun fell under the horizon and the moon had started to rise. The boys walked up to the door step, aside from a few holes in the walls that were covered with sheet metal, it looked like a normal house, if you count Pre Disaster homes as normal. They unlocked and opened the door, locking it behind them. The smell of cooking meat as well as the sizzle of fat on a fire told them that their mother and sister were already cooking their dinner. They walked into the kitchen area of the house and saw their mother huddling over the cooking fire, cooking the meat on a grill.
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