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After The Flash...
Topic Started: Aug 4 2012, 10:36 AM (285 Views)
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After the flash…

[Introduction]

I’m running as fast as I can through the forest. I finally get to a clearing. I look behind me to see if the wolves are still following me, but the forest turned into a wasteland. I looked around and I see a lake. I start walking to the lake, but then I start running without noticing it. I jump straight into it.

When I get out of the lake, there are three wolves looking at me. I turn around, to see the lake gone, and the biggest one growls at me. I stop in my tracks. Suddenly, a beeping noise goes off. I wake up and realize it was my alarm clock.

Yes! I think to myself. It was February 10, 2064. I am turning eleven today. I jump up and go downstairs. My mom is there and she is making me some pancakes.
“Mom?”
“Yes Alex?”
“I’m still going with Dad, right?”
“Yes, you are. He’s still in the bed.”
I run upstairs and jump on his bed.
“Dad!!! Get up!!!”
I shake him awake. He groans and gets up.
“Dad! When are we going to go!?”
“Alright, Alex, around 7 o’clock.”
“Okay.”
I jump off the bed and run downstairs. I quickly eat my breakfast. I let Fell, my dog, outside. I call my friend and we talk for 20 minutes. I tell her I’m going to the US Marine Corps base where my dad is stationed. She says she has to go. I hang up and my dad walks downstairs.
“Ready Alex?”
“Yep!”
He kisses my mom and we walk out the door. We both get in the car and we finally get to the Marine base. We walk to the door and my dad shows the guards his ID card. We walk in and I look around at all the people.
“Alex, stay with me, okay?”
“Alright, dad.”
We go up a big elevator and we walk to his office. We walk in and there is one guy sitting in my dad’s chair and another standing next to the door.

“Alex, wait outside.”
“Okay”
I sit down next to a chair and play with my IPhone. I hear yelling in the room, and then the door slams open. Two guys are holding on to my dad. He gets free and goes over to me.
“Alex! Listen to me! Tell your mom The Flash will happen!”
I nod.
“Alex tell your mom, are you listening to me!”
I nod again.
“Tell your mom…”
Then the two guys took him away. A guy takes me to the parking lot and we get in a car and he drives me home.
I barge though the door.
“MOM! MOM!”
She comes downstairs.
“What is it?”
“Dad got taken away! He told me to tell you that the flash will happen!”
“Calm down, Alex”
“Dad told me that the flash will happen.”
I said calmer. We sit in silence.
“Mom?”
“Yes Alex?”
“What will happen to dad?”
“I don’t know. I’m sorry.”









[Chapter one]
[The Flash]

Early next morning my mom got me up.
“You’re not going to school, okay?”
“Okay, mom.”
“Get dressed, we’re going some where.”
I got dressed and went downstairs. I heard my mom talking to other people on the phone. She rushes in and pours me a bowl of cereal. I eat my cereal.
“We have to leave now.”
We get in the car and drive to a safe house with other people there.

I realized I left Fell at home.
“Mom! I forgot Fell at home!”
“Alex, can’t this wait?”
“Mom, he’s my dog!”
“Fine.”
We got back in the car and drive home. My mom franticly checks her watch several times. When we got there I got Fell and put him on his leash. I walked outside and everything went white, then black.

“She’s dead, Martin!”
“She can’t be! You’ve seen the photo! It’s her! I told her dad I would take care of her!”
“It could be another person! I’m sorry, she’s dead!”
“Can you just check her one more time?”
“Fine, once more then she is officially dead. Oh my god… She’s alive!”
I open my eyes to see two men staring at me. One of them had black, spiky hair, blue eyes, and a black bandana. He was holding a gun in one hand and a helmet in the other. The other man looked like a medic.
“What is your name?”
“I’m Alex Wolfe.”
“Well hello, Alex, I’m Dr. Jack. This is DockTown.”
“And I’m Martin.”
“H…hi Martin, and Dr. Jack.”
They help me up and I stumble. I regain my balance and strength.
“What is today’s date?”
“February 10, 2066, sweetheart.”
I push him up to a wall.
”Don’t call me sweetheart.”
He pushes me away.
“Today is my birthday. I’m turning thirteen.”
“Well happy birthday.”
We walk to an ammo store and sit inside.
“Want to hear how the flash happened?”
I nod.
“It started with the military wanting to make “Supermen”. Something went wrong and all the “Supermen” Turned into mutants. The mutants destroyed the factory and the flash happened.”

“My dad, I think, got turned into one.”
“What was his name?”
“Jack Wolfe.”
Martin has a look of guilt.
“I knew him. Well it’s late, better get to bed.”
Martin shows me to my room and I fall asleep.

I wake up with a bunch of people in my room.
“What the?”
Someone comes into the room.
“Alright! Everyone out!”
I get up and start to walk out the door.
“Not you.”
He stops me from walking out.
“Sit.”
I sit on the bed.
“Stay here”

He comes back with a plate.
“Eat some eggs.”
I take them and eat. I loom up and realize that it was the guy from before.
“What’s your name again?”
“Martin, and your Alex.”
“I knew that.”
He looks out the window and then comes and sits down next to me. He looks at me.
“What?”
“Alex, I knew your father. We worked together. Before he got taken away, he told me to take care of you. We worked on the project that caused the flash. It was called Project X.”
I just stare at him.

He looks at my hand and sees blood.
“What did you do to your hand?”
I remember last night, I was punching the wall. I look at the wall with blood stains. He looks there too.
“God Alex.”
“I remember every day my dad could have not come home. Now he’s dead.”
Martin puts his arm around me.
“He isn’t dead, Alex. We could find him.”
“I jut met you!”
“I made a promise to your dad to take care of you.”
I get up and leave.

“Do you have a shooting range?”
“Yup.”
He walks and I follow him.
“What kind of guns do you like? Sniper Rifles, Assault, Submachine, Shotgun, Pistol, or Revolver? You can pick a primary and secondary, and you can choose a Knife.”
I pick up a Sniper Rifle, Duel Revolver, and pick up a knife I recognize.
“I know this.”
“It was your father’s. Now, start training!”

I get out the Sniper Rifle and lay down. I shoot and miss the target. Martin says nothing. I shoot again just holding the gun closer to my body and I hit the target. I do that again and again, for two whole clips. I go to a different range and try out one Revolver. I skim the edge of the target.
“Here, hold it like this.”
Martin fixes my hands to make it more accurate. I shoot the target and almost hit the bull’s eye. I get the other one and hold them up.
“No, no, no. if you hold it like that, they’ll fly out of your hands.”
He fixes my hands again. “No, there is a lot of re…”
I shoot and they fly out of my hands and hit martin.
“…coil.”
“Sorry!”
I run over to him. I look at him.
“Wait, I remember seeing you in the office, when my dad took me there. You were sitting in the office across.”
He says nothing and gives me the guns.
“Dinner time, lets go.”
He gets up and I hold all the guns and the knife in my hands.

When we walk back everyone was at the Food Hall. I throw all my stuff on my bed and walk to a mirror.
“Oh my god.” I quickly find a mid-clean cloth and wipe my face. I fix my hair and go to the shop. I find some wastelander clothes and some gear. I go up to the cash register. He looks at my stuff. Then he looks at me. Martin walks in.
“Alex, where the hell were you?”
He looks at me and sees I look different.
“Thirteen Credits.”
Martin pays him, and I walk back to my room.
“Put it on, then come out.”
I nod and put the stuff on, and put my Revolvers in the holsters and put my Sniper Rifle on my back and my knife on my boot. I walk out and we walk to the Food Hall. I get a tray and get some food. I sit down next to Martin. I eat in silence.
“You look different.”
I nod.

When dinner was done Martin walked me to my room.
“Get to bed, you need sleep in this kind of place.”
I walk to my bed and lay down.
“Martin, why do you not sleep?”
“I just don’t.”
He looks into a box and I hear him mummer something. When I fall asleep I think about what could be in the box. I wake up in a jungle. There are no sounds, just my breathing. It turns into a lake and I start drowning. I see a dog coming to rescue me. He swims over then it gets eaten by a monster. I swim to the shore and the water turns into lava. I get caught into the lava and die, die a horrible death.











[Chapter Two]
[The Hotel]

Martin wakes me up before dawn.
“Get up. We’re going to a new base, so no one tracks you.”
I get up and realize I am in the same clothes as yesterday. I put my Revolvers back and the Sniper Rifle and put my boots on with the knife still there. We walk for a long time. We finally enter the city. We only walk about two blocks to find a base named “The Hotel”. We walk inside and it’s deserted.
“Well, this is the hotel.
“I can see that…”

We hear banging at the door.
“Get behind me.”
I get behind Martin and six SEALs in armor come in though the door.
“Hello, Martin.”
“What do you want? Leave!”
“Why so soon?”
“I command you to leave”
“What authority do you have?”
“I’m the General of the US Marine Corps.”
“Show me a badge.”
Martin gives him the badge.
“Well Mr. Jackson, this is fake.”
Martin stays silent.
“Code three!”
All the SEALs point their gun at me and Martin.
“Let us have the girl and we’ll leave.”
Martin pushes me to them and they put a bag over my head. Then, they start kicking me until I’m bleeding and on the ground.
“No! Alex! Don’t hurt her!”
I hear a gunshot then a scream not coming from me. Then, nothing.

I wake up to my screams.
“Shut up!”
I stop screaming.
“Now you’re going to kill Martin.”
“No.”
He goes up to me and chokes me lightly.
“Little girl.”
I look at his face and realizing he looks familiar. He puts a bag over my face. He starts to choke me harder. I start coughing.
“I’ll kill him!”
“Oh, I know you won’t.”
“I will! I promise!”
He pushes me back and I fall into water. I climb out, all wet. And he stabs me with a sleep dart.

I wake up chained to a chair. The room is black like midnight with no moon and no stars. Is this just a dream? I ask myself. I see a light. It gets closer to me and bigger. All it does is get bigger and bigger until the room is like a bright sunny day. Just white. Nothing else. I see a dark figure running to me. Is it going to kill me? I wish it would. I wish I could die! Everyone dies! I just want to right now! I think. It jumps on me and I feel like I’m at home, in my backyard playing with my dog, Fell, and my dad. My mom would watch us and tell us to come inside to eat lunch.
“Heh. Good times.”
The figure licks me and he barks.
“Fell! Fell it’s you!”
He barks again recognizing my voice. I try to hug him, but I can’t move. “Boy! Fell! I love you! Fell!”
He keeps licking me, then I hear footsteps. Loud, boot footsteps. Getting closer. Closer, until Fell yelps and everything goes black.

“Hello?”
I know I’m still awake. A TV screen comes on and it shows Fell in a glass cage with water in it. I look at him. He’s so scared, like me. He doesn’t know what’s going on, like me. So terrified, like me.
“Fell! No! Don’t hurt him!”
As the water level gets higher, I scream louder. The water is over his head and he can’t breath.

I rip out from the chair, and twist the neck of the guard. I watch him fall to the ground, dieing. I almost feel his pain. I shake it from my head and get his gun. I go to the first door and I look in it. Nothing, just boxes. I go to the second door and open it. Just pictures. Something catches my eye. A young man, he had black spiky hair, blue eyes, and the same black bandana as Martin. I walked into the room and picked up the picture. I look at it.
“Martin…”
I throw it at the wall and walk out.

I walk up to a big door with a lock on it. I grab the lock, and rip it off. I barge in and see about three people. I go up to the first one, no one noticing me, I break his neck and shoot the next guy. I run up to the last guy and kill him with a knife. I run over to Fell and break the glass. I pick him up and he’s already dead.

I hug him once more and hear footsteps. The same foot steps from before.
“You! You go and kill my dog!”
“I’m sorry! Martin made me! He let you come here, he made me do this to you! Martin killed your father!”
I go up to him and choke him.
“Shut up!”
“He did! He killed your father!”
I choke him harder.
“Shut up!”
I get tazed in my back and I fall to the ground. He steps on my hand. “Get off!”
I scream in pain until it is bloody and he steps off. He gets a katana and makes a small cut of my face. Then I bite his leg.
“Hey!”
He makes the cut bigger.
“Martin is making me do this!”
He turns around and leaves with a smirk on his face. I get up and hold my face. I walk to a drawer and open it. Yes! I think. There is cloth in it. I get the cloth out from the drawer and rap my hand and tape my face. I walk to the door and it comes crashing down on the floor.

I walk out and look at my surroundings. I see TrackTown. I go in TrackTown and go to the entrance to the city.
“I remember Martin saying that the hotel was in the city.”
I walk through the city and find the hotel. I walk in and go up to martin.
“Alex! Alex, I missed you!”
I run to him and hit him in the head.
“What? What did I do?”
I push him up to a wall and stab him in the leg with a knife.
“Alex!”
He pushes me away and I fall on my arm. I scream.



[Chapter Three]
[Megan]

I get up and punch Martin in the face. He backs away and hold on to my arm. I fall to the ground and close my eyes to hide the pain. Martin picks me up and puts me in a chair.
“Look, I don’t want to hurt you.”
He hugs me.
“I’m just glad your back”

“Do you know what they did to me!?”
He walks away, ignoring me. When he comes back, I am in full tears and he raps up my arm.
“You broke your arm. Just don’t hurt me, and I won’t have to hurt you.”
He walks to him room.
“It’s like he can’t die.” I whisper to myself.
I fall asleep in the chair. I wake up in the middle of the night.
“No dreams, I guess. Just waking up in the night.”
I see Martin over at the window looking outside. I get up and walk over to him.
“Can’t sleep?”
“No, I just don’t want to sleep.”
“Are you, mad at me for what I did?”
Martin looks at his leg, then hides it.
“No.”
Martin gets up and walks away.
“Go to sleep.”

The next morning we walk back to DockTown.
“Old DockTown, nice to be back.”
We walk in and there is a girl sitting at the bar.
“Megan! Is that you!?”
She looks at me and walks over.
“How do you know my name?”
“It’s me Alex. Alex Wolfe.”
“Alex? Oh my gosh! Alex!”
“Martin, this is my mom’s best friend’s daughter, Megan.”
He shakes hands with her.
“What happened to you, Alex?”
“Oh, it’s nothing.”

“So, how’ve you been, Megan?”
“I’m good, you?”
“Could be better.”
“So, how old are you?”
“I’m thirteen.”
“Oh, the last time I saw you, you were eleven! I’m twenty six.”
I walk over to people and talk to them.
“So, Martin, you got a good kid on your hands.”
“I know the powers she has, Megan. We both have seen the photo.”
“I know that, but still, she’s a good kid.”
“Her father was great too.”
They both look at me and see I’m having a good time.
“We can’t make her do this.”
“She’s been through a lot, I think she can handle it, Megan.”
“She’s been through too much.”
“I know she can do this.”

An alarm goes off. I walk over to Martin.
“What’s going on?”
Martin and Megan just look at me.
“Figure it out.”
I walk to other people and ask them. They tell me to figure it out. I go up to a man with grey hair and a beard.
“Why won’t anyone tell me anything?”
“You, my kid, have a great future out there.”
I turn around and everyone is gone. I look down and pick up a piece of paper. I read it.
“Your training is starting today. Figure out what is happening. –M”
I look around and think this is a joke.

I walk over to the railing of DockTown and see a person with a mask on. She walks up the dock. She takes her mask off and it’s my mom.
“Mom! Get in!” I walk over to the dock. She walks over to me. She hits me in the face, then the arm. “What was that?” I block her next punch.

I'm on Chapter 4.
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ummm, Ditzy Dani?
It's good. Please continue
HOLY CRAP IM DREAMING! IM DREAMING! IM-... DANGIT! I WOKE UP!
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Im dah char martin 83 sooo cool that ima in a book!!!! >:3 ^_^ B-)
Though i did not say most to all of dis stuff xD
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Chap 4 is almost done!
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Hey Guys. Im a good friend of alex's (You can even ask her) and i would like to share this book that ive been working on with you guys. Id like for oyu to post the link on twitter and facebook if you can. Its a great book and called The Forgotten Squad. Its about a Squad Named Striker squad (Yes IK it sounds weird but i would gladly take Squad Name suggestions). Follow them on their adventure as they fight the E.R.T.F (Elite Russian Task Force) in a waging war in the U.S.A. Rollins Houtier is the Techie, Jones Butabi Is the Demoman, Sgt Kekka Is their leader and Alex Wolfe Is their general. Show this book to your friend and use the poll please! Heres the link! Hope you enjoy! http://w11.zetaboards.com/RBLX_Bookwriter_club/topic/8020410/1/
Crap. Forgot Cho the sniper sorry xD

Cho Chatiney
Yeah...
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The many links to the Parts and Books of The Forgotten Squad series below.
The Forgotten Squad Book 1 Part 1: http://w11.zetaboards.com/RBLX_Bookwriter_club/topic/8020410/1/?x=0#post8081036
The Forgotten Squad Book 1 Part 2: http://w11.zetaboards.com/RBLX_Bookwriter_club/topic/8655777/1/#new
***NEW*** The Forgotten Squad Book 2: Fall of Syndicate: http://w11.zetaboards.com/RBLX_Bookwriter_club/topic/9615685/1/#poll438680
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I knew someone would make a story about this! lol
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