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Anyway, welcome to the ROBLOX Bookwriters club! This is essentially the site for the ROBLOX group, bookwriters club. Since we all know that ROBLOX's filter can be fairly strict, to the point where you have to use fancy wording to tell your readers the age of your characters, we made this to free our bookwriting capabilities. Message me, and I can run through your book for filtered words, then post it on the forums!

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Marching; The continuation of the poem "March".
Topic Started: Nov 4 2012, 07:08 AM (68 Views)
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BUZZ!

I awoke to hear a strange sound in my ear,and put my hand to the spot it was once touching.I found a throbbing sensation piercing my ear,and screeched from the agony.And that's how I began feeling this way.

When I was two months old,a bee had stung me.When I was eleven months old,another bee stung me.When I turned one years old,a bee stung me.From there on out,my entire life was just a stupid little bee sting,agitating my entire being on this Earth.

-Before-

I used to have a life.My mother was a ragged piece of trash,but she did care.She was actually pretty good for somebody like her!But she wasn't exactly what some idiot would call "cool".A better word for her would be "broken".

I remember....I remember how I was her lifelong accomplishment.An alien in a laboratory.Before I went to school each morning,she sang me a lullaby.
Edited by Unigraph3.5, Nov 7 2012, 04:16 PM.
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i honestly have no idea where this may go, it sounds kinda ok right now, pretty short. you should work on it, right now its too short to give any real critizism
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