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The Forgotten Squad Book 1 Part 2; End of the book is here! Going to have a second book! Same book, same author.
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For all of you wondering why theres a part two on part one i reached the max limit to the amount of characters (letters) i could have which is about I dont know 5,000+ or something. This is the same book but on a different topic

[Chapter Twelve]

[Objectives: Unknown]
[Rules of engagement: Unknown]

I woke up to find a new helmet and vest on my dresser. I put the helmet on and a H.U.D Came up. “That’s new” I said. I put on the vest and my vitals showed up on the HUD. “Whoa. What is this thing.” Its also came with a full body suit, gloves, pads for elbows and knees, shoes and gun holsters. I put my guns in the hostlers and put the rest of the gear on. When I got the full body suit, gloves, pads for elbows and knees, and shoes on a yellow tint shows up around my HUD. “Lemme try something” I take off one of the pads off and the Yellow Tint darkened a bit. “Oh so its like extra armor! What’s so special about these holsters?” I took out my USP 45. Handgun and saw a part of the HUD light up. It displayed A cross hair wherever I pointed the gun, gun name, ammo in clip and the amount of magazines I had. “Ok I’m officially liking this new gear!” I put the handgun back in its holster and put the grenades that were under the full body suit and put them in the pockets I usually put them in. Instantly three flash bangs and two hand grenades showed up on the HUD. “BEST. GEAR. EVER! But who put this here? And Why?” I find a note on my dresser.

‘I decided to get some new armor for you and you team. Don’t know if you’ll miss the old gear but I hope this makes up for it. Round up your team and meet me in the shooting range for some gear testing.

New General.
Josipa Pešut’

“Oh so this is from the new general? Glad she thought to give us new gear! Can’t wait to test this stuff out!” I say. I head out of my room and wake up the others. I let them put on the new gear and gawk at the HUD. Five minutes later we met Josipa at the shooting range. “Good you showed up!” She says “Well your note told me to round up my team and meet you here. You are the new general. I want to make me and my new team a good example in your eyes.” It may have been a trick of the eye but I thought I saw Josipa blush a little bit. I instantly dismissed the thought. A GENERAL interested in a mere soldier like me? Unlikely. I made a mental note to talk to her about it later. “As you can see you guys got some new gear. I hope you like it because we are not going back to the old gear. Even if we do its highly unlikely. I brought you here to test the gear out. We need to make sure it works before we take it out into the field. Ready your weapons.” I hear the clatter of weapons as I see the rest of my team raise there’s and I bring my own up. “Already customized it I see Kekka. Geez you sure do love you guns.” Rollins says “Hey I’m a soldier. I shoot things. I have to have a good gun to shoot things don’t I? Well.” I hold up my ACR to where the whole team can see it “This is that gun. I’s not a techie like you Rollins.” “FIRE!” Josipa says and bullets go everywhere. One actually nicked me in the eyebrow from the shooter next to me. He looked to be a recruit with our outdated armor on and shooting a AK-47 that kept hitting him in the face every time he shot it. I resisted the urge to snicker at the recruit so I told him and showed him how to hold the gun to where it wouldn’t hit him in the face every time he shot. I noticed on my HUD that when I shot a bullet a slash that looked like a bullet went away. I unloaded a full mag and a red flashing RELOAD sign showed on my HUD. This was straight out of a video game. After about an hour we finished up with the gear testing and headed off for breakfast. I got a pancake, eggs, and coffee. But I did make my breakfast myself because what the base has for food shouldn’t even be classified as food. I headed to my room wanting to catch up with some of my friends online to find the new general, Josipa, in my room with her back turned to me. I set my breakfast on the dresser and ask “Why are you in my room. Were you waiting for me?” she jumps and whirls around “My god you scared me. Yes I was waiting for you. Do you know someone that goes by Blitz?” She asked “Yeah. Why?” “He just showed up at the base entrance asked for clearance to enter. He’s been out there for about two hours. I’d go check on him. Is he in your team?” “Yeaaaaaaah.” “Then you need to get him.” “Why?” “We need to get him geared with some new stuff. Oh and we also need two extra soldiers. Can you get one more for your team?” “Yeah. Why?” “I Have a feeling we are going to have a big fight soon. Might as well be prepared. I’ll let you eat your breakfast. See you at mission briefing.” And with that she left. I head for the doors to the outside to find Blitz there. Tapping his foot impatiently. “What took you so long?” He asks. Annoyance clear in his voice. “Wasn’t informed you were out here till the new general told me.” Martins face went from annoyed to confused. “Did you say NEW general?” “Buddy. We got A LOT to catch you up on. C’mon I wanna show you the new gear the general got us.”

[End Of Chapter Twelve]

P.S Finally! I came through. It is now currently 3:21 in the morning where I am. Dates 3-29-13. Had a nice day. Finished this late and to the real life counter part of Josipa Pešut I hope you did good on your performance. Cant wait to you talk you again today! Hope my viewers thought this chapter was a good one. Ill have the next chapter up within at least a week. Hope ya keep reading my book guys! Love ya!

[Chapter Thirteen]

[Objectives: Find a new member for Striker Squad]
[Rules of engagement: Conceal weapons, if needed]

“Kekka I need you to find another member for Striker Squad.” Josipa said. “Isn’t four members enough?” “Yes but I need a specialist for the next mission. He’ll be kinda hard to miss.” She started to walk off then turned around and said “Oh and watch your back. If he doesn’t trust you he’ll literally blow your balls off.” And with that she left. ‘Blow my balls off? What kind of person is this? Wait. She didn’t tell me where I can find this person. Better go after her.’ I went in the general direction of where she went to find myself in her quarters. “What are you doing here Kekka?” “You didn’t tell me where to find this person.” “Oh yeah right. Sorry. You know the town about fifty miles out right?” “Yeah” “Try there. If you don’t find him report back to me.” “Yes ma’am” I said as I walked out her quarters and headed for mine. I undressed and put on the outfit I had on when I recruited Blitz. I grabbed a pistol holder, hid it inside my jacket out of sight, and put my pistol in it. I went out to the back and got in my Black red striped Camaro. I put the keys in the ignition and the car roars to life. “That sound never gets old.” I say as I pull out of the lot and towards the town. When I got there I see somebody running down the street screaming random things. ‘That must be him.’ I thought. ‘I mean she did say hard to miss.’ I pull my car to the side of the road and call Josipa. “Hey Josipa what do we need a guy that runs down streets screaming random things?” I say over the phone. “This mans name is Jason. He’s like all of your members and you mixed together but not with the same skill in each field. More like even in all.” She says over the phone “Kind of like a jack of all trades?” “Yep.” “Ok ill go get him.” I say then hang up the phone and drive after Jason. “JASON!” I yell. He slows down and I stop next to him. “Hello. How are you doing today sir? Do you need me for anything.” “Yes I do. Would you like to help us kill some Russians?” “Do I get to blow their balls off if I want to?” “Your choice in how you kill them.” “Sweet. Sure then.” “Alright. Get in and ill drive you to the base." When there I led him inside and introduced him to his new ‘Boss’ and showed him his quarters. “Gear up. You have training. Do you know how to handle a gun Jason?” “Do people know how to eat hotdogs? Of course I know how!” “Ok meet me at the shooting range when your geared up.” “Yes sir.” Five minutes later I have him shoot some targets with a gun of his choice. I wasn’t surprised when I saw all of his shots in the balls of the targets. “What is it with you and shooting peoples balls?” “I don’t know. Humor?” “Yeah well cut the humor. We actually need to kill them not make them die of embarrassment and blood loss.” “Yeah yeah ok.” Jason picks up his gun and continues to fire at the targets. “You have a good aim. Tomorrow we will do advanced training. Good luck” I say to him as I walk off towards my room. As I get to the door I see Josipa waiting for me. “Why are you here?” I ask her. “I wanted to see how the training was going with Jason” she replies. “Ah ok. Jason is a good shot. Tomorrow we will be doing the advanced training, that of which I don’t think you have seen,” “I have seen advanced training” she says, cutting in. “so we can wish him good luck. Though he keeps shooting the targets in the balls. He says for humor but I think otherwise.” “Well good job. Ill see you tomorrow at advanced training.” She says as she walks off. I open the door to my room and collapse on it.

[End of chapter thirteen]

Editors note: MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOD its been awhile. Im SOO sorry for the late late late late posting of this chapter! I have so much going on in school and with my friends so I didn’t have time to finish chap 13. So sorry guys hope you forgive me! And the forgotten squad part 2 is the same book and same author but on a different post. Sorry if you guys are confused about that. Well I hope to get chapter 14 up within a week or two so see ya then!

[Chapter Fourteen]

[Objectives: Put Jason through advanced training]
[Rules of engagement: None. This is training]

The next morning I woke up to popping of gunfire. A little annoyed I put on some clothes to see what was going on. I turn the corner to see Jason firing shots at the targets while moving from side to side while the targets were moving. I checked his shots and he was missing quite a lot of them. “Hey Jason. What are you doing?” I asked him. “Practicing my aim. I don’t think I’m the best and I know that some to most of the targets are going to be moving.” “Some are yes. But most are stationary.” “Is it ok if I still practice?” “Yeah go right ahead. I’ll see you in about two to three hours. Hope your ready!” I tell him as I walk off. I looked around and it seemed I wasn’t the only one awakened by Jason’s training. I see soldier’s walking around some half-dressed and some fully dressed. All seemed a little ticked off but didn’t let it show. Once I got back to my quarters I went to take my morning shower as I always do. About fifteen minutes later I step out and get dressed. Not knowing what to do for a hour or two. So I head off to sleep.

[Two hours later]

Yawning as I wake up I head to the observation deck and sit as I wait for Jason to come. Josipa and the rest of the high ranks join me. About ten minutes later I see Jason walk to the door to enter the Advanced Training course. As the instructor preps him I start talking with the other people in the room. Once the instructor gives the all clear I see Jason take off into the new course. As he’s running two targets pop up on either side of him and fire blank shells. He slides, shooting both of the targets. One through the chest, the other through the head. I see a round object, about the size of a rock, fly through the air and land near him. He picks it up, and throws it back, ducking behind cover as he does. The object, a smoke grenade, explodes, creating a screen of smoke that’s almost impossible to see through. Three targets move through the fog, Jason crouches, shooting two through the head, then rushing and stabbing the other in the chest. Removing his knife he moves on. Switching to his Secondary he heads to the sniping area. Putting down his primary he picks up the sniper, scopes, and fires off three to four shots. One missing. Firing again and hitting his target he picks up his previous primary, slings it, and pulls out his pistol. Crouching low he ducks behind cover while five targets wait for him. Unpinning a grenade he throws it into the group of targets, hitting all but one. He ducks out of cover and shoots the last one with his pistol. I reach for the microphone. “Jason. You have passed the advanced course! What would you like to be called?” I say. “Jason is fine. Thanks.” He replies. “Well then, Jason. Welcome to Striker Squad!” “Thank you! Where do I go now?” “Head to your quarters. We will brief you tomorrow on your first mission with the team.” “Alright. See ya then.” He says then walks out of the room. I leave the observation deck and head back to my quarters. ‘We have a new member.’ I think ‘Hopefully he can perform well. Because we need him for this next mission.’

[End of Chapter Fourteen]

P.S: I’m so very sorry for the EXTREMLY late release of the fourteenth chapter. My intentions were to work on it over the summer but obviously that didn’t work. And school has been keeping me from finishing the fourteenth chapter. I will TRY and get the fifteenth chapter out in the next week or two. Again I’m sorry for the late, late, EXTREMLY late, chapter fourteen! Hope you guys still actually read this! Well that’s all I have to say! Bye!

[Chapter Fifteen]

[Objectives: Raid ERTF base in search for information]
[Rules Of Engagement: None]

You know that saying, ‘your life flashes before your eyes when you’re about to die?’ Yeah. What they say is true. I saw everything, past and present, flash before my eyes as the bullet went through my chest. I bet your wondering. How did this happen? Why is this happening? Well. Let me show you.

[Eight hours earlier]

“KEKKA! ARE YOU GEARED FOR THAT RAID?” Jason shouted from afar. “YEAH I AM!” I shouted back.

“GOOD! WE LEAVE IN AN HOUR!”

“ALL RIGHT!”

I check over my gear for I’d say the twentieth time making sure I have everything in order, and that everything works. Satisfied with my twentieth check I set my gear down and think of a way to pass the time until it’s time to head out. I decide I’ll go out driving for a while. Grabbing my car keys I head out towards the parking lot. Stepping out into the cool air I get into my Camaro. Turning it on I pull out of the parking lot, and head towards the town I picked Jason up in. It’s a nice little town with a Hotel, Grocery Store, School and most amenities that larger towns have. I had thought once I could live here, but that was before I got drafted for Striker Squad. I drive around for a while, watching the kids play on the playground, and looking at the scenery. Forty five minutes pass by and I start back towards the base. It’s about a fifteen minute drive so I should get back in time, and fifteen minutes later I do. I turn off my car and rush in through the back entrance, grab my gear, strap it on, and find the rest of the team. “Ah Kekka, you made it!” Josipa says. “Yeah sorry I’m running a little late. I didn’t notice the time.”
“Not a problem. Let’s head out!”
We all climb aboard the helicopter and start towards out destination.

[Two hours later]

We finally arrive just outside the ERTF base that holds information we need. “George, wait here. I’ll radio for you if we need a quick escape.” Josipa says. “Wait, you’re coming with us? Why?” I ask. “Yeah, I’m not a coward. I fight with the squad I command.” She says. “Oh, well I didn’t know that. And I don’t know how I didn’t notice you geared. Anyway, let’s move out!” I say. All of us getting out of the helicopter, we head towards the base. Two guards patrol the entrance with four sentries mounted on light machine guns on posts. I have Cho take out two of the four sentries, and then the guards. Leaving the two sentries. Looking around at my team I notice Josipa is not with us. Whipping my head to the sentries I see one fall off his post, and the other flop backwards hitting the ground as a pool of blood forms around him and Josipa standing over the bloody sentry. I motion for my team to follow me towards her. “How did you… When did you... HOW DID YOU DO THAT!?” I ask astonished. “While the guards and two sentries were focused on you I snuck around and got the last two.” She says. “Oh. Ok that makes se-“ I was interrupted by a gunshot, then a piercing pain in the middle of my chest. I start falling towards the ground and hear another shot and the man who shot me, lies dead on the ground. That’s all I see before I black out.

[Five hours later]

Groaning I wake up in the infirmary. Looking around I see Josipa sitting in a chair across from me. “What happened?” I ask as I sit up in pain. “Oh, you’re awake. A soldier shot you through the chest while we were talking. Rollins was able to kill him but we abandoned the mission and headed straight back here.” Josipa replies. “Oh. So that was the pain…” I say. Then I notice Mayna. “May? What are you doing here?” I ask curious. “We may have divorced but that doesn’t mean I can’t come see you when you’re in pain.” She says, answering my question. “Oh. Well that’s kind of you. Didn’t expect a visit from you, but it’s a kind gesture.” I say. “Well I best be going. Hope you recover. Goodbye.” She says as she walks out the room. “Visit from the ex-wife. That wasn’t expected. I’ll get going as well. Let you get your rest. Doctor says you should be well in three or so months. The bullet didn’t hit anything but skim a bone and go out your back. You’re lucky if anything. See you later I guess.” Josipa says walking out of the room.

[Two months later]

The doctor said I made a faster recovery than most. I healed up in two months instead of the estimated three months. Josipa and May came by every now and again, Josipa being the most common to come. The rest of the squad, not including Josipa this time as she said she wanted to stay and make sure I didn’t die, went back to the base and got the information we needed. As it turns out ERTF wasn’t even that big. The three, maybe four bases we had eliminated was all they had. But we also found out a bigger threat. The Syndicate, a massive organization meant to terrorize the U.S. And we were meant to stop it.

[End of Book one]

Authors note: Yes I know what you’re thinking, ‘wow, you’re off on your release date again Spencer.’ And yes I know I am, but my computer broke and I just now got a new one. And I also wanted to make the last chapter the best chapter so I worked hard on it. Hope you guys enjoyed it and I will get started on book two: fall of syndicate. Oh, and most of the people in this book are based off REAL people. Like Josipa, in life she is my girlfriend, in this book she is the general, Jason, a very good friend in life, reckless and funny in this book, Martin is my brother, and Wolfe was a backstabbing friend who I do not talk to anymore. Again hope you enjoyed and have a nice day.

Edited by Spwilhelm, Nov 21 2013, 01:39 PM.
The many links to the Parts and Books of The Forgotten Squad series below.
The Forgotten Squad Book 1 Part 1: http://w11.zetaboards.com/RBLX_Bookwriter_club/topic/8020410/1/?x=0#post8081036
The Forgotten Squad Book 1 Part 2: http://w11.zetaboards.com/RBLX_Bookwriter_club/topic/8655777/1/#new
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Chapter Thirteen is out! Same book same Author! Check my signature for Part 1 & 2!
The many links to the Parts and Books of The Forgotten Squad series below.
The Forgotten Squad Book 1 Part 1: http://w11.zetaboards.com/RBLX_Bookwriter_club/topic/8020410/1/?x=0#post8081036
The Forgotten Squad Book 1 Part 2: http://w11.zetaboards.com/RBLX_Bookwriter_club/topic/8655777/1/#new
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Chapter fourteen is out! Check below for part one!
The many links to the Parts and Books of The Forgotten Squad series below.
The Forgotten Squad Book 1 Part 1: http://w11.zetaboards.com/RBLX_Bookwriter_club/topic/8020410/1/?x=0#post8081036
The Forgotten Squad Book 1 Part 2: http://w11.zetaboards.com/RBLX_Bookwriter_club/topic/8655777/1/#new
***NEW*** The Forgotten Squad Book 2: Fall of Syndicate: http://w11.zetaboards.com/RBLX_Bookwriter_club/topic/9615685/1/#poll438680
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End of book is here! Check signature for part 1 if you want to read part 1!
The many links to the Parts and Books of The Forgotten Squad series below.
The Forgotten Squad Book 1 Part 1: http://w11.zetaboards.com/RBLX_Bookwriter_club/topic/8020410/1/?x=0#post8081036
The Forgotten Squad Book 1 Part 2: http://w11.zetaboards.com/RBLX_Bookwriter_club/topic/8655777/1/#new
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