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| My English Story; LOL | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Nov 16 2006, 09:26 PM (181 Views) | |
| Mudkip | Nov 16 2006, 09:26 PM Post #1 |
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Hai! Hai! Hai! Hai! 1! 2! 1! 2!
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It's some ending I had to make up for a stupid story. It's a little hard to read because Invisionfree gets rid of indents in the paragraphs: “On guard, Rainsford.” They both quickly drew their swords from two conveniently placed umbrella racks. “It is a fight to the death,” declared Zaroff. “Indeed,” replied Rainsford. They started to powerfully cling their swords together as furiously as two drunk people in a bar fight. They weren’t paying attention to where they were going, and ended up falling out of Zaroff’s open window. However, even as they were plummeting, they still fiercely fought each other. Rainsford took a small look down, as did Zaroff. “OMG!” they both screamed in unison as they tightly hugged each other on the way down. As they plummeted to certain death, a big bird flew into Zaroff’s eye, blinding him. “Hmm, it appears that birds are more dangerous than everyone says,” stated Zaroff with a bird stuck in his eye. They both, instead of hitting the hard ground, landed in a conveniently placed pine tree. Without a second hesitation, they both started to harshly clang their swords together. Just as Zaroff thought he would win, he was smoked in the face by a conveniently swinging branch. “OMG! That hurt! Now branches are more dangerous than jaguars!” screamed the general. “Ha ha!” yelled Rainsford proudly. “It appears that I am severely pwning you!” “Not for long!” declared Zaroff. “I have a good plan!” Then, Zaroff pulled out a small pistol and shot the ground. “Ha ha! Look how scared you look!” boasted Zaroff. “Oh…that was my last bullet…” “Looks like you lose,” stated Rainsford as he was just about to stab Zaroff. But just then, Zaroff jumped out of the way and quickly grabbed his sword. “I bet you didn’t see that coming!” yelled Zaroff. “No, I didn’t,” shamefully stated Rainsford. Zaroff was about to stab Rainsford, but he slipped into the conveniently placed river. “Oh noes!” screamed Zaroff as he hit the icy water. “LOL!” laughed Rainsford as the ground gave out beneath him. “Noooo…” trailed on Rainsford. They both were in the cold water, trying to swim to shore. They had to do it quickly, because they were both heading towards a huge waterfall. “It looks like we’re done for!” yelled Rainsford. “It appears so, my old chap,” said Zaroff. “We have to settle this, once and for all,” declared Rainsford. “Indeed,” stated Zaroff. They both started to fiercely punch each other. One strong punch from Rainsford knocked Zaroff out. “Yes!” boasted Rainsford. But this happiness lasted only for a short time, as he quickly plummeted off the huge waterfall. He fearfully thought it was the end of him, but then he got caught in a conveniently placed vine, which conveniently snapped and brought him to safety. “I’m free!” yelled Rainsford as he swiftly ran into a conveniently placed tree. He then ran off to Zaroff’s ‘house’. He had never slept in a better bed, Rainsford decided. XD. It might need a few changes before I hand it in though. Might need to lose the internet slang. |
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| Ho-oh | Nov 16 2006, 09:30 PM Post #2 |
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Somewhere over the rainbow...
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Yeah I was going to say it's pretty good but you must lose the internet jargon. |
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| Mudkip | Nov 16 2006, 09:35 PM Post #3 |
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Hai! Hai! Hai! Hai! 1! 2! 1! 2!
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Ok. I replaced all of the internet slang with what they mean (Except LOL, which I replaced with "Ha ha"...I don't know any other words that sound like someone laughing) |
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| Ho-oh | Nov 16 2006, 09:38 PM Post #4 |
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Somewhere over the rainbow...
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instead of laughed, why don't you try "cackled" that sounds more menacing. |
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| Mudkip | Nov 16 2006, 09:39 PM Post #5 |
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Hai! Hai! Hai! Hai! 1! 2! 1! 2!
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Because the dude's not evil. He's just insane...like me! |
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| Ho-oh | Nov 16 2006, 09:42 PM Post #6 |
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Somewhere over the rainbow...
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Oh ok. LOL |
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| Mew | Nov 16 2006, 09:59 PM Post #7 |
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Mew Hunter
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Yeah. words like "OMG", "LOL", "oh noes", and "pwning" don't go well with English teachers. Otherwise it's good. seems to move quickly though. |
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| Mudkip | Nov 16 2006, 10:01 PM Post #8 |
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Hai! Hai! Hai! Hai! 1! 2! 1! 2!
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...Oh crap. I forgot to take out the word "Pwning" >_> |
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| Mew | Nov 16 2006, 10:01 PM Post #9 |
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Mew Hunter
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ZOMFG! Only 24 more posts till I get another pip! *goes on posting spree* |
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| Ho-oh | Nov 16 2006, 10:02 PM Post #10 |
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Somewhere over the rainbow...
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^^Becoming a force of habit? |
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| Mew | Nov 16 2006, 10:03 PM Post #11 |
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Mew Hunter
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getting another pip or going on a posting spree? I'm falling out of the posting spree habit. I'm not on here *quite* so much anymore. |
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| Ho-oh | Nov 16 2006, 10:04 PM Post #12 |
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Somewhere over the rainbow...
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Really? I can't tell. You seem to always be on. |
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| Mew | Nov 16 2006, 10:08 PM Post #13 |
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Mew Hunter
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I woulda been on this time yesterday, but instead of pokemon I played final fantasy which I can't be on the same time at the compy. |
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