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| Cookie Craziness; Inspired by Mr.Munch | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Nov 28 2016, 06:35 PM (462 Views) | |
| AD Machine | Nov 28 2016, 06:35 PM Post #1 |
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"Munch!!!" April shouted as she discovered the empty cookie tray "Did you make more cookies?" Munch asked as he ran into the kitchen, looking around. He then stopped and sniffed. "Uh, April, I don't smell cookies. So, why did you call me in here?" "Did you eat these cookies?" April asked. "What cookies?" Munch asked innocently, making his eyes go as wide as they could, hoping to play innocent. "The ones from this tray!" April shouted. "The ones that were for the kids at the orphanage" "Umm... no" Munch said, trying to hide the frosting on his teeth. "What's that on your teeth?" April asked. "Nothing" Munch whimpered. "Is that frosting?" April demanded. She then looked closely and shouted "Mr. Munch, you ate those cookies!" She threw the tray down and looked furiously at Munch, "Can't we have one thing that you don't devour the second it appears?" she yelled, poking him in the stomach. "Well, I am called Mr. Munch....." Munch began "Oh, don't give me that excuse again!" April snapped, cutting him off. "Every time this happens, you mention your name, and I fall for it!" she yelled at him. "I'm done Munch" she said. "April?" Munch asked as she pushed past him. "What do you mean, done?" he asked as she stomped upstairs and Munch then heard loud thumping noises, then a moment later, April came downstairs carrying Munch's suitcase. "What is all this?" he asked as she thrust the suitcase into his hands. |
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| Mr. Munch | Nov 28 2016, 08:48 PM Post #2 |
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Wow. I don't think April would be that harsh. But this is pretty good and I'm glad I inspired this, please continue. I wanna see what happens next. ![]() Oh, and just in case, I like where the story is going and it should be good...so you don't have to change anything. Besides, I'm pretty sure if April were ticked off enough, she would do that. But seriously, I love where the plot is going so far and I'm dying to read more of this. I can't wait for the next chapter or stop thinking about how it's going to turn out. I'm just so curious and excited to see.
Edited by Mr. Munch, Nov 29 2016, 01:17 AM.
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| AD Machine | Nov 29 2016, 10:00 AM Post #3 |
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"It means you're taking a little vacation. Away from here" she said, pushing him towards the door. "But, what about Christmas?" Munch asked as he stepped out the door. "If you can prove that you've changed, you can come back for Christmas" April snapped, slamming the door behind him. "Well, now what?" Munch asked himself as he walked down the street. He sat down on a curb and said "I know! I'll call Chuck E! Maybe he'll know what to do!" He called Chuck E and got "Hi, you've reached Chuck E. Cheese. Leave a message and I'll get back to ya" "Hi Chuck E. April kicked me out! What can I do? Please, help!" Munch said before hanging up. A moment later, he called Jasper, thinking "Oh, please home Jasper, please!" "Yeah?" Jasper asked, picking up. "Oh, Jasper! Thank goodness!" Munch said "What's wrong buddy?" Jasper asked. "April kicked me out for eating Christmas cookies!" Munch cried into the phone. "And she said I have to stop eating everything in order to get back in!" he cried "Munch, buddy. I can't help you there" Jasper said sadly. "WHAT?" Munch yelled so loud birds nesting on a nearby tree flew away. "Why not?" "Because, I'm in Texas right now with Harmony" he said. "Oh, I know! Try calling Pasqually, maybe he'll help you" "Um, OK. I'll try that, I guess" Munch said."See ya Jasper" "Good luck buddy" Jasper said and hung up. "Time to call Pasqually...wait. Pasqually's mad at me too for eating all those pizzas last week!" Munch said as he walked a little farther down the block, "But I suppose considering it's the Holidays, he should be over it" |
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| Mr. Munch | Nov 29 2016, 10:39 AM Post #4 |
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Please update!
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| AD Machine | Dec 6 2016, 11:02 AM Post #5 |
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I'm back! ****************** "Hello?" Pasqually asked as he picked up the phone. "Pasqually! Oh, thank goodness! I need help!" Munch shouted into the phone. "What-a happened Munch?" Pasqually asked, taking a pizza out of the oven while balancing his phone between his shoulder and his ear. "April kicked me out!" he said, "She said I eat too much!" "I've been-a trying to tell you that for years!" Pasqually said. "THIS ISN'T THE TIME FOR COMMENTARY!" Munch yelled into the phone. "So, could you help me?" "Alright, come by the store, and we'll see what we can do" Pasqually said while hanging up. |
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| Mr. Munch | Dec 6 2016, 12:37 PM Post #6 |
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Yay!! I wonder what'll happen next! Well, better wait and see. And thank you for updating! I know you're busy (mostly because you told me on that PM about this story) and I am willing to wait for the next update, because I know you're busy and you probably don't have lots of time. But seriously, I like when Munch says “This isn't time for commentary” after Pasqually says that Munch eating too much is what he's been trying to tell him... XD Keep up the good work, AD!
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| AD Machine | Dec 6 2016, 06:04 PM Post #7 |
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Thanks. Lot of off-forum drama got in the way ********************* Munch arrived outside of Chuck E. Cheese's and said "Well, wonder what Pasqually's got cookin' in there for me" He walked inside and the Kid Check lady said "You the pizza eater?" "Yeah, I'm here to see Pasqually" Munch said. The lady dropped the rope, and he walked across the store to the kitchen. "Um, Pasqually? I'm here now" he said nervosly, remembering his last encounter in a kitchen with Pasqually. "Oh, hello Munch! Have-a a pizza!" Pasqually said, walking towards him with a steaming pepperoni pizza. "Well, don't mind if I do" Munch said, tension melting away. As he reached for it, Pasqually tackled him and sent him flying across the kitchen! "Ow! Pasqually, what was that for?" he groaned as he got up. "You wanna win-a your girl back or you wanna eat?" Pasqually asked, standing over Munch. "Is both an option?" Munch asked. "No!" Pasqually said. "So, which-a one you want, the girl the pizza?" " I wanna win April back!" Munch said. "Good, now-a the fun begins!" Pasqually said, an evil glint in his eyes. Edited by AD Machine, Dec 6 2016, 06:04 PM.
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| Mr. Munch | Dec 6 2016, 07:16 PM Post #8 |
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Oh, gosh... Wonder what Pasqually's gonna do to the guy. XD With the evil glint in his eyes I know it can't be good... Probably getting revenge for what Munch did last time. But I shall wait and see!
Edited by Mr. Munch, Dec 6 2016, 07:18 PM.
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| Mr. Munch | Dec 8 2016, 11:39 PM Post #9 |
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Please update! Or is there more off-forum drama? If so I can wait. Especially if you're busy I can wait, too.
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| AD Machine | Dec 9 2016, 09:18 AM Post #10 |
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Drama, drama, lots of drama |
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| Mr. Munch | Dec 9 2016, 02:57 PM Post #11 |
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Well I hope it gets resolved soon! By the way, how did you get involved in the off-forum drama? If you don't wanna talk about it here, you can PM me. Unless you don't wanna talk about it at all, then that's fine too.
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| Mr. Munch | Nov 19 2017, 04:34 AM Post #12 |
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I should be updating this sometime tomorrow! So be sure to look out for it! Maybe around 3:30, or 6:00 PM my time.
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| Mr. Ruxpin | Nov 19 2017, 12:31 PM Post #13 |
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"MUUUNCH!!!" *throws Munch across the table* |
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| Mr. Munch | Nov 20 2017, 04:55 PM Post #14 |
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lol
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| Mr. Munch | Dec 22 2017, 10:08 PM Post #15 |
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Sorry about the wait. Guess I didn't feel like updating, or I just forgot what my idea was (maybe both), but here it is. After Munch's answer, Pasqually smirked before placing the pizza down on a counter. “Uh, are you just putting it down or trying to help me?” Munch asked, glancing at the pizza before looking back at Pasqually, “Because I don't see how this is supposed to help me if you are.” “You'll see, Mr. Munch.” Pasqually said, the same smirk on his face, “You'll see...” “Uh, okay...” Munch said, looking a little confused before looking back at the pizza. “You can't eat it, by the way.” Pasqually mentioned. “I know.” Munch said, “You already told me.” “Good.” Pasqually said, turning around to get a bag to seal the pizza in. It was then that Munch realized he was hungry. Oh, great... Munch thought, looking away from the pizza and towards where Pasqually headed off, Now I'm hungry... Getting April back is gonna be harder than I thought! He then glanced back at the pizza. Maybe one little nibble... He then thought, but decided against it, No, one “little nibble” always turns out to be more than a nibble! I can't eat it! I already got myself in trouble with April... “I'm back, Munch!” Pasqually called as he came back, seeing the pizza in one piece as Munch looked at him. “Good job on not eating the pizza in one bite!” Pasqually said, smiling at Munch. “Yeah I was thinking about taking a nibble but I decided I already got myself in trouble with April...” Munch explained, looking down at the floor, “And if food is how you're going to train me to get April back, that's gonna be harder than I thought!” “Why?” Pasqually asked, tilting his head a bit to the side. “Well...you may already know this but...right now I'm hungry!” Munch mentioned, feeling that Pasqually may have already known that since he always mentions being hungry. “Well if you're gonna get April back, we have to do it the hard way.” Pasqually explained to him, “'Cause if you want her back, you have to stop eating everything.” He then began to recall catching Munch eating all the pizza last time before smirking. “And I do mean everything...” Munch gulped. “Uh, okay.” He said, “But how am I gonna do that? I can't stop eating completely!” “Well I'm not saying that.” Pasqually mentioned, his smirk now fading into a smile, “I'm just saying that you should stop eating what's lying out.” “But it looks so good!” Munch said, a shocked expression on his face, “I can't help but eat it!” To be continued...
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| CEC Indiana | Dec 23 2017, 01:04 PM Post #16 |
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Nice update! |
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4:59 AM Jul 11
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I don't think April would be that harsh.
But this is pretty good and I'm glad I inspired this, please continue.
I wanna see what happens next.

But I shall wait and see!
If so I can wait.



4:59 AM Jul 11
