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| AD Machine | Jun 1 2017, 10:07 AM Post #1 |
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Eagle Scout
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This is a pretty long CEC fic I have on my computer. ******************************************* “Well guys, it’s officially time to start our first ever cross-country road trip!”, Chuck announced as he started the band’s tour bus. “Just think, in 7 days, we’ll have driven across the entire USA!” “And, we’ll be touring all over the place!”, Jasper said, rolling down his window. “Fairs, parties, oh, maybe even the Super Bowl!” he added.He paused a moment and thought, and said, “Hmmm, that’s over, so how do y’all feel about a whole bunch o’ Chuck E. Cheese’s restaurants?” “But that’s-a where we always are!”, Pasqually groaned. “Ia wanted to-a perform in-a Little Italy!” “Don’t worry Pasqually, we’ll get out a little bit!”, Chuck said. “In fact, I've booked us a special gig tonight!" “Well, I personally want to go to as many malls as I can!”, Helen chimed in, looking at a brochure for Parmatown Mall, which, as the brochure advertised, was The biggest, newest, shiniest mall in Ohio! “Why? Once you’ve seen one mall, you’ve seen them all, at least to me”, Munch said, looking at Helen, confused. “I mean, yeah, the food court’s great and all, but other than that...I just don’t get it. It’s just stores...right?”. He looked down at his shoes bashfully. “Wow Munch, I certainly hope April never finds out you were trash-talking malls!”, Helen said, shooting Munch a glare. “I thought April loved malls!”, she added. Munch fell opened his mouth as if to add something, but fell silent. “Break it up guys! I-a don’t-a wanna fight in-a the first ten-a minutes of the a trip!”, Pasqually groaned, holding his head. “You said it Pasqually!”, Chuck said, pulling the van onto the highway. “Let’s just enjoy this time we’ve got in each other’s company”, he added, looking in the mirror at the band. “Arizona!”, Munch announced two hours later as the van rolled down the highway. “That makes ten!”, he announced to the bus. Unfortunately, nobody was really paying him any attention. Chuck was looking at the road, Jasper was strumming his guitar, humming Tokens to Ride, Helen was looking at more mall brochures, and Pasqually was reading a cookbook. “Amazing Munch”, Helen mumbled, unenthusiastic. “Aren’t you a little, I don’t know, old to be playing the license plate game?” “Oh…..”, Munch said sadly, “I’ll stop”. After a moment, he looked towards Chuck’s seat, and asked, “So, Chuck, how’re things going with Mitzi?” “Umm, Munch”, Jasper cut in, “Ixnay on the Mitzi-ay!”, he said jerking his head in Helen’s direction. Helen just looked out the window, sighing loudly. “Was that Pig Latin?”, Chuck asked. Jasper nodded, so he said, “That was pretty good”. Jasper gave a little bow and Munch clapped softly. |
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| Mr. Munch | Aug 25 2017, 04:26 PM Post #21 |
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I meant is he a character from somewhere? I probably should've asked that instead to make it more specific.
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| Homestar | Aug 26 2017, 12:55 PM Post #22 |
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from homestar runner |
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| CEC Indiana | Sep 17 2017, 02:49 PM Post #23 |
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Will this be continued? |
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| AD Machine | Sep 18 2017, 03:12 PM Post #24 |
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Eagle Scout
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Nope, sorry. Unless Mr.Munch wants to continue it, I got nothing for this story |
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| Mr. Munch | Sep 18 2017, 08:13 PM Post #25 |
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Wait, so you didn't write anymore after that part? And sure, I'll finish it! Thanks, AD.
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| Mr. Munch | Oct 28 2017, 03:30 PM Post #26 |
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“Whoa!” Helen and Pasqually cried as Munch ran into them. “What's wrong Munch?” Helen asked, but Munch didn't seem to stop nor hear her as he kept running. “What's gotten into him?” Pasqually asked, watching as Munch got further away. “I don't know.” Helen replied with a shrug, “But maybe we should continue shopping and find out later.” Pasqually groaned. “Do we have to?” He complained, “Can't we just do something else?” “Like what?” Helen asked, her hands on her hips. “Isn't there anything else to do besides just shop at a mall?” Pasqually asked with a shrug, “I mean, there has to be! ...Right?” “Well considering some - if not most - stores are closed, no.” Helen replied, “But what are we waiting for? C'mon! Let's go!” As she again pulled Pasqually along with her, Pasqually let out a groan. Meanwhile, as Munch was running, he saw Chuck and Jasper, and as he skidded to a stop, he accidentally slipped and fell backwards, landing on the floor. Jasper chuckled upon seeing this. “Whoa there, big fella!” Jasper said, “Be careful!” Chuck rolled his eyes. “Chuck E., it's terrible!” Munch said, ignoring Jasper's remark as he got back up on his feet, “I went to the food court, only to see there was no food, and I ran into this old man who said that the mall is being torn down and rebuilt with open-air stores!” “And...?” Chuck asked, trying to get Munch to explain why he acted like it was a bad thing. “And I'm hungry!” Munch said, trying not to completely panic. “Well I suppose we can get Helen and let her know that you're hungry.” Chuck said, bringing a hand to his chin. Now I think I REALLY hate malls... Munch thought, Well, malls that don't have food, anyway. “Well we'd better go then if we're gonna tell Helen about Munch.” Jasper suggested, beginning to head in the opposite direction from where Munch had come from, “C'mon, Chuck.” “Uh, I actually saw Helen with Pasqually back that way.” Munch pointed out as he used his thumb to point behind him. “Well what're we waiting for?” Jasper asked as he turned around and started heading in that direction, “Let's go!” Munch and Chuck just nodded before following Jasper, Munch going ahead of Jasper to lead the way. Helen and Pasqually had just exited the store they had entered earlier when Munch arrived with Chuck and Jasper. “Oh hey guys!” Helen greeted them with a smile, “How's the mall?” “Uh, we seem to have a tiny problem...” Chuck said. “What is it?” Helen asked. “Well Munch, he... He's hungry.” Chuck explained, “And he just went to the food court just to see that every food store was closed, since they're going to be taking down the mall and rebuilding it with open-air stores.” “Then does he wanna go get something to eat?” Helen asked. Munch nodded. “Yes please.” Munch said with a nod. “Well I suppose we can go to a restaurant.” Helen said, smiling at Munch, “But after that we have to come back here so I can get that wonderful perfume I've always wanted! 'Cause that's where I was going to head to next.” “You mean you haven't bought it yet?” Jasper asked, looking a bit shocked. “No, not yet.” Helen replied, looking at him, “None of the stores I've been to have it.” Dang. Munch thought, looking down at the floor. “But so Munch can eat, let's go!” Helen said, “Besides, I'm starting to feel a little hungry too!” “Me three.” Jasper agreed. “Me four!” Pasqually said with a giggle. “Where do you guys wanna go?” Helen asked, looking at the guys, “Just don't choose any place that sells chicken. Please.” She still doesn't know that Chuck E. Cheese's sells chicken? Munch thought, Well I guess it's for the best... “Well we can head over to an all-you-can-eat restaurant that sells everything.” Pasqually said with a smile, “I mean, that's an option, right?” “Well I guess so.” Helen replied with a shrug, “But I'm getting myself a fresh salad, and that's it.” “And I'm getting myself a pizza!” Munch said with a smile. “Make that eleven.” Jasper added before chuckling. Munch laughed. “Well I can't help that I'm so hungry!” Munch said before his stomach growled, making it look as if it was agreeing with him, causing everyone to giggle. “Well let's go already!” Pasqually said, smiling at his bandmates as he waved at them to come on. Everyone nodded before following Pasqually all the way back to the mall's exit. |
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| CEC Indiana | Nov 9 2017, 03:54 PM Post #27 |
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Nice update! |
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| AD Machine | Nov 21 2017, 11:20 AM Post #28 |
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Decided to update because why not. PS: Antonio's is a real place at the mall. **************************** They finally settled on Antonio's a pizza place at the end of the mall's plaza. As they walked, they walked past a familiar sign. "Hey look!", Munch announced, "It's a Chuck E. Cheese's!" "Really? I didn't notice!", Jasper said sarcastically. He looked over at Chuck, doing his best to look exhausted and said, "We don't have to do a show here, do we?" "Umm...no", Chuck said, drawing a small cheer from Jasper. "In fact, I didn't even know they had one in Parma". "Well, I guess-a it turns out-a they do", Pasqually said. He stopped walking as he looked in the window, causing the band to stop as well. "Ooh, look! They've-a gotta the bright wall colors!" "That's wonderful and all, but, in case you forgot, we're going to get dinner", Munch said, tugging on Pasqually's arm in an attempt to get them moving. "Munch's right! The faster we eat, the faster we resume shopping!", Helen said. Munch looked at her grouchily, and they continued walking to Antonio's. After the hostess seated them at the outdoor patio, and Chuck excused himself to answer a phone call, Munch threw back his head and sniffed. "Man! I don't remember the last time we were at a pizza place THIS nice! We should find someplace to eat tomorrow that's this nice" "Yeah!", Jasper said. He took a sip of his root beer, and said, "Hey, I saw an ad that some country band's playin' in Indiana. We should stop there tomorrow". "What band?", Pasqually asked, studying the menu. "Um...Texas Critters, somethin' like that", Jasper shrugged. "Hey Chuck, whatta say we see a local band tomorrow in Indiana?" he asked, as Chuck sat back down. "That sounds awesome, only one thing...our time in Parma has...erm...been extended", Chuck said, looking grim. "Oh no...", Munch groaned "Don't tell me", Jasper said. "Yep. That was the CEC down the road. They want us to play tonight", Chuck said. Pasqually looked like Christmas had come early. "What're you so excited about Pasqually?", Helen asked later, once their pizza had come out. "We get to-a see the bright wall-a colors!", Pasqually said with a giggle. |
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| CEC Indiana | Nov 21 2017, 03:48 PM Post #29 |
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I guess I'll read the next update because that's my state. Jokes aside, this was a good update.
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| AD Machine | Nov 30 2017, 11:20 AM Post #30 |
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Eagle Scout
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After finishing their meal at Antonio's, the band quickly walked the distance to the Chuck E. Cheese's. Chuck paused a moment before going inside, turning towards the band. "Alright, we're only slotted for one song per, so let's roll!" They walked inside, and were greeted by the young man working Kid Check. "We're here to perform for y'all", Jasper said, slinging his guitar over his shoulder. "I'm sorry, who are you?", the greeter asked. "I didn't think we booked any bands for tonight", he finished, looking serious. "Well, that's done. Let's leave", Munch said, promptly turning around. "I'm kidding!", the attendant said. "Yeah, you guys are in the showroom in about 10 minutes. I'm Alex, call me if you need anything", he said, lowering the rope to let them in. "He-a seemed nice!", Pasqually said, rolling his drum kit through the gameroom. "I-a like this store!" "Yeah, we know. The pretty wall colors", Helen snapped. "Actually, they are kinda pretty", Chuck said, tapping the mic. "I kinda like this one too, Helen". Helen looked at him bitterly. After the promised 10 minutes, the show began with Chuck doing a solo on Disco Inferno. It went well through Jasper's rocking cover of Friends in Low Places, even Pasqually's giggle-inducing Giant Armadillo Named Phil. However, once Helen took the mic, things started to go sour. The rest of the band kicked into Hot Sauce, but Helen just stood there, still as a statue. "Uh, Helen..the song", Jasper whispered. Helen still didn't move. |
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| CEC Indiana | Nov 30 2017, 03:54 PM Post #31 |
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Nice update! |
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| Mr. Munch | Feb 28 2018, 02:07 AM Post #32 |
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Thanks for the updates, AD! Are you going to update this or are you out of ideas? If you need me to take it from here either PM me or just say so here and if you can tell me how you'd like Helen to act in a spoiler on here (or in a PM, whichever you prefer), that'd give me an idea on how to portray her in the next update. That is, if you need me to handle the next update.
Edited by Mr. Munch, Feb 28 2018, 02:13 AM.
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I probably should've asked that instead to make it more specific.

And sure, I'll finish it!
Thanks, AD.

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