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| April Meets Munch; April meets Munch after ending up in the woods. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 5 2017, 11:34 PM (301 Views) | |
| Mr. Munch | Jul 5 2017, 11:34 PM Post #1 |
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Constructive criticism or any advice you guys can give me for writing (despite the stuff I looked up online last night) would be appreciated, like if you notice something missing or wrong with the story as I write it. It was a nice, warm sunny day as April walked through the woods she had arrived in after being sent from her home planet. The wind was blowing, but despite it being sunny out, the green trees were blocking most of the sun, most of the trees, however, having no leaves from being dead or some even being cut down due to some logging being done in the area. April shivered, hugging herself as the cold wind caressed her light purple fur, her wondering why her species had seemingly thick, shaggy fur that was actually thinner than anyone who saw it would think. But judging how her species' fur looked thick, it was just the amount of fur that grew out that made it look thick. Man it's cold out here... April thought, noticing some of her light yellow hair hanging in front of her face, though it was short - not long - and covered only a small inch of her right eye, And it's lonely out here, too... I-It's like there's no other life out here but m-me. She started to walk through the forest slowly, looking at the scenery of the dense forest. “H-Hello?!” She called out to see if there was anyone there besides her, her arms still wrapped around herself, “A-Anyone here besides me?!” Suddenly she heard a noise like the sound of a monkey doing a few short howls. April quickly turned her head towards where she heard the noise, her heart beating faster due to her adrenaline going up, her breathing becoming heavier to match her fear as she started walking a bit faster, looking around as if trying to find a way out of the woods she was in - which she was. W-What was that!? She thought, hoping she could get out of there faster, I-I just hope I can get out of here, and fast! I-I never heard these kinda sounds o-on my planet... E-Ever. As she walked faster out of the woods, she heard laughter as if a monkey were laughing at her. O-Oh gosh... She thought, feeling even more scared than before, I-I don't know where that sound is coming from but it sure is creeping me out!! And it was true that she didn't know what was making those noises due to being so new to Earth, so it creeped her out just hearing those unknown-to-her-universe sounds. As she started sprinting - breathing even harder than she was before - hearing a twig snap beneath her feet caused her to let out a squeak from fear and lose her balance by trying to force herself to go faster - which her body couldn't keep up with - making her stumble and fall. I can't go on like this anymore... April thought, just lying on the ground and panting, I-I give up... Suddenly she closed her eyes, beginning to feel a bit tired. A few hours later, she awoke in a strange house, which looked more like a log cabin more than a house. W-Where... Where am I...? She thought, still a bit dazed from her slumber since she'd pretty much just woken up as she took a moment to scan her surroundings, T-This... This isn't where I remember... She interrupted herself as she got a glance out one of the windows and her eyes widened, realizing that she was still in the woods, except she wasn't outside anymore. Not wanting to believe anything, she thought, I have to be dreaming... This... This can't be real. Suddenly she heard a door open up and she let out a frightened squeak as she whipped her head in the direction she heard the sound coming from. After she looked in that direction, she saw a purple, shaggy-furred monster coming in. As April examined him, she noticed that his fur was a darker shade of purple from hers, along with his stomach fur and his hair being yellow. She also noticed that he was also very overweight, and she figured that he was her exact species. D-Does he live here!? She thought, looking at him with a confused look, Or d-did someone else live here and he...ate whoever lived here? She was clueless as to which one it was, also thinking about the possibility that he could've chased the original owner out by coming in one day while possibly looking for food. Suddenly at the thought of food, April's stomach growled, and she looked down at it. Well I'm hungry. She thought as she placed a hand on her stomach, Wonder if he has any food here... To be continued... Okay, I had no idea what April should've come to Earth on so I didn't mention it when I wrote the part about her ending up on Earth. Sorry about that...
Edited by Mr. Munch, Jul 5 2017, 11:40 PM.
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| CEC Indiana | Jul 6 2017, 11:11 AM Post #2 |
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Nice story! |
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| Mr. Munch | Jul 6 2017, 07:55 PM Post #3 |
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After hearing April's stomach growl, the monster couldn't help but laugh. “You hungry?” He asked her with a friendly smile. April just nodded shyly, feeling a bit shy because she didn't know the monster too well - heck, she had just met him - and she wasn't sure what kind of monster he was yet. “Well, you wanna...eat something?” The monster then asked her, still smiling his friendly smile. April nodded again. “You don't really speak much, do you?” The monster asked her as he closed his front door behind him, and April shook her head, giving him a shy smile hoping he'd get the hint that she was shy. After a few seconds, she stopped smiling shyly. “Uh, I don't know what that smile means but...” The monster began with a shrug but didn't finish as he went to his fridge to grab some leftover pizza. “I have some leftover pizza if you want it!” He then said as he pulled it out of the fridge. D-Did he make it himself...? April thought, looking at the plate in the monster's hands curiously, Because it does look pretty good... “Oh, I almost forgot to introduce myself!” The monster then spoke as April slowly got up off the couch, “I'm Mr. Munch, but you can just call me Munch, if you prefer.” M-Munch...? April thought as she looked at Munch before looking back at the pizza, Uh, n-nice name... I guess. She then tried to gather the courage to speak as she finally stood up, her stomach growling once again as she continued to look at the pizza, and she could swear her mouth was watering. “Uh, w-what's your name?” Munch asked, giving April a confused look. “I-” April began, trying to force herself to speak, “I-I'm...” Munch waited for her to say her name, as April's hunger for the pizza grew. Munch then suddenly got an idea as he began to smile. “Hey I'll give you the pizza if you tell me your name.” He told her, trying to help her out of her shyness. ...Though even if she doesn't speak I'll still- “April.” He then heard April say, interrupting his thoughts. “April, huh?” Munch then asked, smirking as he slid the plate to the edge of the table, “That's a good name.” “R-Really...?” April asked shyly as Munch nodded his head. “Yeah!” He said, now smiling at April before shrugging, “Heck, it's even better than mine!” April couldn't help but blush, flattered by his compliment. “Uh, t-thanks...” She said before greedily grabbing the plate finally and scarfing it down. Munch was surprised, and his eyes widened to show it. “Whoa, slow down April!” Munch said with a smile before laughing. “Sorry, I'm just hungry!” April said as she came up for a breath, since she was literally digging her face into her pizza as she ate. “Yeah but you don't wanna choke!” Munch told her, trying to hold in another laugh, “Like, jeez!” April giggled before beginning to dig into her pizza again. Suddenly Munch felt as if he were developing feelings for April, but just a tiny bit. She is perfect! Munch thought, giving her a lovestruck smile, She is a true Munch, alright! A few minutes later, April was done devouring her pizza, but her stomach still felt a little empty as she set her plate down, licking the pizza sauce off her face, and placed a hand on her stomach, patting it lightly. “Better now?” Munch asked her with a smile. April shook her head. “No I'm still a little hungry...” She replied, looking back at him with a smile, “Do you have anything else?” “That's all the pizza I had.” Munch said with a shrug before smiling, “But help yourself to whatever's in the fridge if you want!” As he told her to help herself to “whatever's in the fridge”, he held out a hand as if to point to the fridge. April smiled. “Okay thanks!” She said before heading over to the fridge and opening it up, finding food but there wasn't that much. But that was okay to April as she smiled and shrugged before pulling out a cupcake. He likes sweet stuff too? April thought, examining the cupcake as if curious about it, like she didn't know what it was, Wow... Small world, I guess. She then shrugged before taking a bite out of the cupcake, letting the chocolate and vanilla flavors mix and blend on her taste buds, a contented smile on her face and her eyes closed as she could swear the frosting was melting in her mouth. She loved it! “Did you enjoy that cupcake?” Munch asked with a smile as April finished it, finally licking her fingers and lips with a nod. “Yummy!” She replied as she opened her eyes and smiled at him, “This food is amazing!” Munch giggled. “Thanks!” He told her with a smile. Huh, she looks...a bit chubby... Munch thought, a smile still on his face, But she's not as big as me... Well, yet, that is. But I wonder why...? “Oh, if you find another cupcake in there, go ahead and eat it!” Munch then told April, “You go ahead and eat whatever you want, okay?” April just nodded, wondering where Munch found all this food from as she dug into the fridge again. |
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| CEC Indiana | Jul 6 2017, 10:29 PM Post #4 |
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Nice update! |
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| CEC Indiana | Jul 16 2017, 02:42 PM Post #5 |
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Will this be continued? |
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| Mr. Munch | Jul 16 2017, 04:31 PM Post #6 |
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“Where do you find this?” April asked, digging into the fridge, “You know, if you live in the woods...how could you get this food!?” “Well I, uh...” Munch began, rubbing the back of his neck, “You see, I...take it from...a certain restaurant...” He smiled nervously at April as he said that. “You see, I-I sneak into the kitchen and... And try to be as quiet as possible.” “Wow...” April said, her eyes wide-open in amazement, “You really do that? ...But haven't you got caught before??” “Nah, I've been pretty sneaky.” Munch replied with a smile, “Though it is pretty hard, and I almost got caught once since I crashed into these woods about two days ago.” “You were sent to these same woods two days ago?” April asked, amazed, “I-I didn't...know you were sent to Earth too!” “Yeah I was.” Munch said, looking down at the floor, “I was from that pizza planet.” P-Pizza...planet? April thought, her eyes again widening in amazement, I-I'm from that planet too! ...But how did we not know each other? “Surprised?” Munch asked with a giggle, noticing that April was silent upon hearing that fact. “Y-Yeah...” April said, “I-I was from that... That planet too.” “Y-You were!?” Munch asked, his eyes now wide-open in surprise, and some amazement. “Yeah I was!” She said with a giggle, “Can't you tell? I must be your species if we're from the same planet!” “You look like my species...” Munch said, tilting his head as if trying to get a better look at her, “Yeah you look like one of us.” April giggled. “Because I am, silly!” She said, smiling at him, “If we look the same, then yeah!” “This is awesome!” Munch said, smiling back at April, “We're both the same species! ...Well except my cousin Abbey from the North Pole.” “Your...cousin?” April asked, tilting her head in confusion with a confused look on her face to match, “Are they a boy or a girl?” Munch laughed. “It's a boy, silly!” He said, “He's the Abominable Snowman but we call him Abbey, for short.” “Oh...” April said, her mouth in the shape of a small 'o' before she smiled nervously and rubbed the back of her neck, “Sorry about that.” Munch again laughed. “It's okay.” He said, smiling at her, “Most people tend to make that mistake...” Then why's he called 'Abbey' for short if it sounds...like a girl's name? April thought, still confused about it, Well I guess there's no other name to call him by for short, unless they were to use 'Snowy' instead. She then remembered she left the fridge open before glancing at it and quickly shutting it using her foot. She then smiled nervously again at Munch. “Yeah that's okay too.” He said, trying to hold in laughter, “Usually I forget sometimes, too.” Oh, good... April thought, letting out a sigh of relief with a smile, He seems to be pretty carefree. Well, as far as I know... So far... “So you wanna go and sneak some pizza?” Munch asked her witha smile, “I know a great pizza place!” He winked at her as he finished, causing her to blush a bit. “Yeah sure!” She said, smiling back at him, “You lead the way, buddy!” Munch giggled. “Okay!” He said, “Just follow me!” They then left, Munch holding the door open for April as she went through. “Thanks!” She said happily as she went through. To be continued...
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| Mr. Ruxpin | Jul 16 2017, 05:02 PM Post #7 |
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Pizza Planet? It's Planet Purple...according to the recent shows. Are April and Munch from Toy Story? lol
Edited by Mr. Ruxpin, Jul 16 2017, 05:05 PM.
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| CEC Indiana | Jul 16 2017, 06:39 PM Post #8 |
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Nice update! |
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| CEC Indiana | Aug 5 2017, 01:54 AM Post #9 |
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Will this be continued? |
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| Mr. Munch | Aug 5 2017, 03:33 AM Post #10 |
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lol XD No I'm using the old Munch for this, not Rockstar. So they're still from the pizza planet from )![]() Yeah I'll update tomorrow since I have to go to bed. ![]() After reaching the pizza place, April looked at the sign on the front over the door that read: Chuck E. Cheese's Pizza Time Theatre “Uh, a... A pizza place, I'm guessing?” April asked, just staring straight at the sign. “Yeah, but the rat on the sign kinda throws ya off and makes you think, ‘There are rat pizzas?’.” Munch said jokingly. April giggled. “Rat pizzas kinda...sound...unappetizing.” She said with a smile. “I know, right?” Munch agreed, smiling back at her, “So, shall we go in?” “Ready when you are!” April replied, looking back up at the sign. After quietly sneaking into the restaurant, April and Munch both scanned their surroundings before sneaking behind the front counter and heading into the kitchen. Luckily for them, there was no one there at the moment so all the pizzas were out in plain sight. Wow... April thought, eyes wide-open amazed by the sight, That's a lot of pizza... “Well, what are you waiting for?” Munch whispered to her, “Dig in!” “Don't mind if I do!” April said, rubbing her hands together and licking her lips. To be continued...
Edited by Mr. Munch, Aug 5 2017, 09:09 PM.
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| CEC Indiana | Aug 6 2017, 03:11 PM Post #11 |
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Nice update! |
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| Mr. Munch | Aug 22 2017, 12:32 AM Post #12 |
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After getting carried away and eating almost every pizza that was out, they froze when they heard someone talking while walking towards the kitchen. Oh crud... April thought, glancing towards the entrance that led to the showroom, W-We're done for... She then felt a quick nudge on her arm as she glanced over at Munch before seeing him nod his head in the direction of a place they could hide, and they both brought their pizzas with them. “They shouldn't see us under here.” Munch whispered to her, “Hopefully as long as we're under here, we're fine. I-I hope... That is if they don't come in this direction...” Under a break room table is a good place to hide!? April thought, looking at Munch questionably and seeing him shoot her a nervous smile, How is a table in a break room a good place to hide!? I mean, like he said someone could come in this direction and probably use it or whatever! She saw that Munch was now looking at her with a confused stare, or what looked like one anyway. “What?” April whispered, before being quickly shushed by Munch. As they heard talking from someone with an Italian accent, they continued to eat their pizzas to keep themselves quiet. “Mama mia, Chuck E.!” The voice cried, “The pizzas! They're gone!” Uh, that's because... April began to think before looking down at her almost finished pizza, Yeah... We kinda...took them. “What do ya mean, Pasqually?” Another voice - this time with a Jersey accent - asked, Munch and April both hearing footsteps entering the kitchen, “The pizzas can't just disappear outta thin air!” “Yeah, well they did!” Pasqually cried, “I can't turn my back on these pizzas anymore or they just disappear!” “Well someone must be eatin' 'em, and we're gonna find out who.” Munch and April both gulped, fearing that something bad could happen if they were caught. I'm going to Chuck E. Cheese's tomorrow, and I have to be up at 8:00 in the morning to catch the bus there. So I'm going to stop here, and be sure to check my YouTube for more videos tomorrow, too. Hope you enjoyed! P.S. I'm going to try to go to Chuck E. Cheese's at least once a month so I could see the show for that month.
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| CEC Indiana | Aug 22 2017, 03:12 PM Post #13 |
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Nice update! |
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| rolfedewolfe | Aug 22 2017, 10:04 PM Post #14 |
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that mustive been hard work writing all of that, good job! |
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