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| The Diet; Munch and April try to stick to a diet but they end up failing. Will they eventually be successful or will it end in failure? | |
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| Mr. Munch | Oct 29 2017, 12:02 AM Post #1 |
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This story features Brannan's Munch. “Munch! April!” Pasqually called from the kitchen before exiting it, “Your pizzas are done!” As both monsters heard this, they immediately turned their attention towards him. “Ooh...” Both monsters said as they noticed Pasqually carrying a stack of extra cheesy pizzas, the cheese from the pizzas oozing onto the other pizzas beneath them, while a pizza pan was used to hold the pizzas so the cheese wouldn't get on the floor. However, this caused whatever cheese had oozed off the pizzas to form a gooey, cheesy puddle around the bottom pizza. “I decided to make them extra cheesy for you guys, like more cheesy than an extra cheesy pizza.” Pasqually explained as he set the pizzas down on the table, “I guess what caused me to do that was accidentally adding just slightly more cheese than I would on a regular extra cheesy pizza, so I just decided to spoil you guys by adding a little bit more cheese after my mistake, since it gave me this idea!” “Ooh... Mouth-wateringly cheesy and risky!” Munch said with a big grin, “I like it!” “Well it is risky since you could probably get a heart attack from this.” April explained before smiling, “But we're Munches, and we were born to eat, so I say bring it!” “Yeah!” Munch agreed before he and April began to wolf down all the pizza, not even bothering to take the slices and put them on their plates. It's weird how Munch says something about losing weight but then he forgets when it comes to pizza. Pasqually thought with a small chuckle, And it's the opposite with April. She says she'll help him and when it comes to eating pizza with him, it's like it doesn't matter anymore! ...Unless she forgets too. After the pizzas, Munch and April were satisfied from their hunger. “I think I'm going to take a nap.” Munch said, sliding down a bit lower in his seat as he rested a hand on his stomach and gently rubbed it, “What do you think April?” April just nodded in agreement before getting up and moving to where she was next to Munch before getting in the same position he was in. “So?” Pasqually asked them with a smile, “What did you think?” “That was the best, extra cheesiest pizza we've ever had!” Munch said with a smile before he noticed himself feeling a bit sleepy. “Yeah, you really outdid yourself today.” April said with a smile as she nuzzled into Munch. “Are you guys going to finish the cheese at the bottom of the pizza pan?” Pasqually asked them, using his eyes to gesture to the cheese in the pan. “Not now.” Munch said, “Besides, I'm stuffed!” “I'll finish it.” April said as she stuck her face in the pan and began eating it, noticing that some of the cheese was burnt onto the pan due to the toasty cheese flavor she got when her teeth touched the bottom of the pan and scraped some of the toasted cheese off. Oh my gosh... April thought at the taste of the toasted cheese, Munch is missing out if he loves the taste of cheese that ends up toasted on the bottom of the pan... But oh well! After eating the cheese, she lifted her head up away from the pan and licked the gooey cheese from her face, smiling as she let herself sink into the seat in the booth. “Now I'm stuffed for real this time.” April said as she nuzzled back into Munch's warm, cozy fur. They both then slowly drifted off to sleep. To be continued...
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| CEC Indiana | Nov 4 2017, 04:08 PM Post #2 |
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Nice story! |
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| Mr. Ruxpin | Nov 5 2017, 05:13 PM Post #3 |
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Just a weird question...how come these stories are usually about weight? I noticed that that's been an unusually recurring theme in your recent stories... |
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| Mr. Munch | Nov 6 2017, 04:38 AM Post #4 |
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Uh... It's kinda hard to explain... I think the stories having to do with weight are just ideas that pop into my head, either from actual parts of showtapes I've seen on YT (like the CEC TV News: Protesting skit for example), or they're just random ideas that come up... I guess I just wanna make a story but I have nothing for an idea... So I just think of something and go with it...? It's kinda hard to explain... But I should stop on the weight subjects and just start writing down a story and go from there... Besides, before joining this forum I would be on Quotev (link is in my profile on here) and when I would write Despicable Me fanfics, if I had no ideas, I would just start writing and I would just come up with a pretty good story. ...Or something like that. But for this story it was originally going to be Munch and April being turned into babies (kinda like my Little Monster, Big World fanfic but not exactly like it) but I just came up with this instead while I wrote, and so I guess I decided to go with it. Besides, I decided that I should have Munch and April try - or decide (or whatever) - to go on a diet later in this. I don't really remember right now, but it was something like that... Unless it was that. Also in the past (like somewhere in the 90's) Munch had mentioned something about losing weight a couple times. Like in the CEC TV News: Protesting skit (where he mentions that he can't touch his toes and mentions something about going to an exercise club), and he mentions going to the gym before Muncho Man. But I really should make a thread asking for ideas, and see if anyone has any they want me to write up.
Edited by Mr. Munch, Nov 6 2017, 04:41 AM.
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4:59 AM Jul 11
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It's kinda hard to explain...
I think the stories having to do with weight are just ideas that pop into my head, either from actual parts of showtapes I've seen on YT (like the CEC TV News: Protesting skit for example), or they're just random ideas that come up...
I guess I just wanna make a story but I have nothing for an idea...
But I should stop on the weight subjects and just start writing down a story and go from there...
Besides, before joining this forum I would be on Quotev (link is in my profile on here) and when I would write Despicable Me fanfics, if I had no ideas, I would just start writing and I would just come up with a pretty good story.
...Or something like that.
Besides, I decided that I should have Munch and April try - or decide (or whatever) - to go on a diet later in this. I don't really remember right now, but it was something like that...
But I really should make a thread asking for ideas, and see if anyone has any they want me to write up. 
4:59 AM Jul 11
