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| Post #1 Mar 15 2017, 03:22 AM | Crowwy |
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Hello, hello, new member here! After playing AT2 I felt a bit miffed at how there was barely any development for some characters like Shun and Frelia, especially Frelia since she's the Origin of Metafalss and all, and her apparent ability to keep things materialized to a greater extent than Shurelia and Tyria. And then I thought, why not be kinda radical and write a story involving canon characters? I don't have all of the characters plotted out yet, but here are the characters I have so far, and a brief plot summary. In short, a group of human radicals from Clustania have escaped from the government and managed to hide in Metafalss, where they discovered Frelia's ability to create and sustain land. They then got it into their heads to kidnap her and use her to create a land for themselves where they can be free. Through the technological expertise of one of the radicals who was a scientist working for Archia before he made a break for it, they manage to temporarily disable the security systems of the Tower - including Shun who has his data stored in the Tower - and kidnap Frelia who is still recovering from the events of AT2. They had managed to invent a machine which works something like a proxy to access a Reyvateil's SH Server and execute Song Magic with it, without her conscious knowledge aside from feeling fatigued. When Shun comes to, he realizes that he's become human again, most likely because Frelia turned him back into one before she was knocked out. His human body is 'fake' though, and merely houses the data of his consciousness. Enraged and in despair at his inability to save her, he then goes off on a quest to save her with the help of some people he meets on the way. protagonist Shun (Enja) (now) human 748 years old (biologically ~20) Was originally a human-turned-digital-lifeform, and was then turned into a human again after Frelia disappeared. Swore loyalty to Frelia and is in love with her, as is she. Is on a quest to find her and bring her back to Sol Marta. Uses claws in battle. reyvateil 1 Yamato_ux.Transport.Clare=Gigeadeth 山兎_ux.移種クラレ.ギガディス Beta-type Pureblooded YAMATO_FEHU_TILIA_HARVESTASYA 20 years old Specialty - Stronger Song Magic by virtue of being a beta-type Reyvateil. As a Clustanian Reyvateil she is also more physically hardy and can fight for herself where needed, but is still unable to fully harness her physical or magical prowess if she has to multi-task. Personality - Default as Yamato: brusque and terribly blunt, constantly sour-faced at something or the other. somewhat calculating, but at the same time generally apathetic to things which don’t interest her, so she could also just brush aside people speaking ill of her simply because she doesn’t care. Has a very high capacity to care for others however, and makes it a point to watch out for the people she has decided to care for - in her surly way. Is very confident in herself and her abilities, and hates it when people underestimate her. As a natural consequence of caring very much when she decides to, she is also extremely stubborn and clings (without sounding clingy of course) to others - her pride and attachment issues are a central theme in her cosmosphere. Self-centered, or selfless? Personae are unusable in battle - Yamato knows how to use FLIPSPHERE and other FLIP-extension songs, but she won’t ever use them because they would cause her Telomere count to decrease too much. Only seen in her Cosmosphere. As Usa-san: A very sweet, motherly persona who represents the care Yamato feels for her loved ones. Can be rather...smothering. As Mayoi: A little girl who gets attached to people very quickly, calling them ‘big sis’ or ‘big bro’ within minutes of meeting them. Represents the side of Yamato who craves affection - can be...a bit creepy. As Hagane: A very proper samurai-like character who speaks formally all the time, but says not-very-polite things. Represents Yamato’s emotional repression, and her desire to always be the ‘dependable one’. Bio - A traveling Reyvateil mercenary from Sol Cluster who grew up very independent, partly due to being a beta Reyvateil, partly by nature being a rather unfriendly sort and partly because her 'family' (her mother) was rather distant from her, being a Clustanian soldier who was basically married to her work. Came to Metafalss for work, and ended up sticking around with Shun as she is in massive debt. The Big Money used to pay for the ride to Metafalss from Sol Cluster was supposed to be funded by her contractor, but he skipped out and is nowhere to be found. Not actually related to the overarching plot, but her involvement with Shun gets her into trouble anyway. reyvateil 2 Lucia Weiss 3rd Generation Infel Phira Dependent (IPD) 19 years old Specialty - Able to copy/replicate any other song magic within her ability, and able to ‘create’ less powerful versions of them to allow her to handle the power. The emulation capabilities of Infel Phira allow her to sing in any dialect, but she's still best with New Testament of Pastalie. Personality - Very optimistic and friendly, but also polite and sweet. Seems to change the way she acts subtly to best suit the person shes speaking with e.g acting more submissive around Yamato so she lets her guard down around her, acts more reserved around Shun because he’s not very friendly. Is actually lowkey a sociopath who has issues with connecting to people beyond the level of ‘safe’ and ‘unsafe’, or ‘useful’ and ‘not useful’, keeping a distance from them at all times. Has very high ability to read others and figure out what they want from there. bio - A young IPD from Rakshek who was raised by her father as her mother died trying to calm down one of her friends who had an outbreak. She had gone through her own outbreak as a child, and badly injured her father as a result before he managed to knock her out in time for a Dive Therapist to help her recover. Because of these terrible experiences with IPDs, her father developed a phobia of them however and tended to keep his distance from her after her outbreak. Unfortunately this is in large part the root of her sociopathic tendencies as she saw this as a form of betrayal, and believes that she cannot trust anyone and must act agreeable at all times in order to prevent people from turning against her. She carries a fair bit of self-loathing which tends to manifest in self-deprecating jokes. Is the Reyvateil whose SH server is being copied for use by the Clustanian refugees, due to her relatively unique ‘talent’ for song replication. reyvateil 3 (secret) Frelia Origin FRELIA_ANSUL_SOL=MARTA 741 years old (biologically ~18) After she is rescued from the Clustanian refugees she can be unlocked for use by diving into her in order to wake her up from the cold sleep they put her into so she wouldn’t resist. This is the only way to progress into Phase 3, as otherwise she will be left in cold sleep and Shun will either decide to stay with her in Sol Marta or leave her in the care of Raki and live with Yamato or Lucia. Once she is awoken the party chases after the refugees who are now after the Heart of the Land of Metafalss, realizing that they require it to create a new Heart of the Land for themselves. Otherwise the refugees will be killed by Raki on Shun’s command at the end of Phase 2. If Phase 3 is started, the party will fight the refugees and can choose whether to kill them themselves or allow them to live in Metafalica with everyone else where there will be no conflict. It should be noted that Yamato and Lucia are not considered the 'canon paths' for this story, in that while Shun could get romantically involved with them it would not be the True End of the story. While he can dive into their Cosmospheres until the end, it would be in the capacity of a dear friend as opposed to a life partner, because friendship does exist. Edited by Crowwy, Mar 20 2017, 05:58 AM.
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| Post #2 Mar 20 2017, 05:59 AM | Crowwy |
| Would appreciate some input here especially on the more iffy details regarding the world! I won't profess to be an expert ^^;; |
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| [hymmnos]yor na rana[/hymmnos] | |
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