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| Post #1 Sep 13 2013, 02:33 AM | Altivarde |
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So I have a little thing in mind... I used to make a fangame, and let's not delve too much at something that I found to be really flawed. So this time, I'm thinking of making something on range of 500 years after Ar Ciel's restoration. Do note that I tends to make nonsensical stories, so please slap me before I'm straying too far. So here what I have in mind: 1: In range of 250 years, it would be possible for Ar Ciel to create new land. The new land where basically it's yet to be 'tamed'. With Saki or Ieeya's speed, somehow I'm thinking that maybe it's already filled with all things yet to be studied. (As in, the monsters are native to that land). Hence the number 2: 2: Creation of new server. The miniserver is basically an advanced Infel Phira. You might ask, what the need for another server if you just can go satellite relay it? In few years, Sasha already completed a 30% relay of Infel Phira, and then on At III alone she already completed something much higher percentage than that. Let's say 'we already created enough relay, why not going a server while at it?' And thus, the test, yet full fledged server 'Alteuge' is created. It's to be a landmark for new land, while at the same time creating native reyvateils for the land. Alteuge works in a sense that while a 3rd gen doesn't have hymn code, in Alteuge, be it 3rd gen or beta or anything, they're classified into nine categories and nine levels of authorities. The number 1 is the 'Queen Candidate' or 'Queen' while number 9 is the most standard of all. It follows the principle where a queen can use all hymns registered in Alteuge, a lv 9 could barely use an extract. The other thing is the CLASS, where reyvateils are divided based in her themes. Some songs are effective for a class, but not so with the other, some are effective only for one, and such. The classes are based on Muses. For example, an individual named Scarlet have authority level of 3. Her theme revolves around tragedy and noble sacrifices. According to classing, she falls into 'Melpomene' class. Hence, her hymn code is SCARLET_MELPOMENE:CLASS=HALYOS_ALTEUGE/. Alteuge uses the extension code ORATORIO, and it also have it's own dialect. It can emulates Standard and Pastalie to certain extent. The focus of the dialect, rather than to 'express own's emotion' is 'to call oneself's out'. 3: The raise of negative groups, such as what I have in mind is, human females with so many reyvateils would feel that they'll soon be replaced by reyvateils (But this apparently only false worries. It's just that there're charismatic provocator behind them). They then create an organization that rejects Reyvateils, and their extremist are basically aim to genocides reyvateil. The expedition to new land and the new server is considered 'very potential' for their use. These groups would raid Diquility factories and such, only to wipe out third genes. However, of course they still need reyvateils to hack to Alteuge (because they can use Alteuge's mode change to bombards let's say Infel Phira or Ar tonelico (and if they lose Alteuge, it's just Alteuge, they still can resume their attacks)) despite they can use viruses or other data lifeform. Reyvateils are far more potent, yet because of creating a level 1 is pain, they only can attack in minor scales, such as bombing of mostly reyvateil-populated city. Their activities concentrated on the new land. |
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| Post #2 Sep 13 2013, 02:57 AM | Altivarde |
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About the land: The new land is located relatively closer to Cluster than other area. The size is not at all big, probably on size twice or one-half of Wing of Horus. It's capital city is named 'Lantis', and is located on center of the continent, protected by dome similar to Prome Wall. While it's seem that the capital is safe, Reyvateils inside basically fear the outside worlds. They want to get out, but they can't. They want to travel, but they just simply trapped. They could be victims on any attacks done by reyvateil hating group. However, since 150 years ago, that all changed. The Queen requested for other countries to send vanguards to accompany reyvateils that wishes to get out from Lantis, giving them chance to travel around the world or applies as special reyvateil squad to lessen the attacks done on the capitals. Not to mention, the Queen needs to get out from the capital now and then to rule more efficiently. About three months before the start of the game, 17th Queen Istoria ambushed by the terrorists party. Her husband severely injured (which mean the Queen's vanguard losing the core of the team, it's captain). Because of this, she resorts to calling back her son who just freshly graduated from Platina kight academy. (Do note that it's impossible for natives of that land to be picked as vanguard due to increasing worries of the reyvateils toward the vanguard from that land to be a terrorist party who did extreme measures. True that the terrorists aren't just in that land, but also in other places, but with the terrorists concentrated in that new land, the just want to decrease the chance.) |
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| Post #3 Sep 13 2013, 04:56 AM | Altivarde |
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Regarding the Main Character: Name: Raid Rho Rasthyt (He uses the name Raid Ainzes on his enrollment form) Age: 19 Height: 188 cm Weight: 79 kg Occupation: Queen's Vanguard (newly graduated knight of Platina) Weapon of choice: Multi use sword with chain attached. Born to Queen of Alteuge, Istoria and her husband Regel, Raid basically grown accustomed to the terror behind life of royals, especially as the son of the queen. He's trained from very young age at martial arts, just in case while his bodyguard staffs are competent in weeding nuisance, there could be a moment of miss. As a child, he already know the taste of being used by many political leaders that want to pair him with their children. Because of this, Raid already took a rather non-trusting personality. At thirteen, he departed to Sol Ciel to enter Platina Knight Academy. To be the next vanguard of the future queen is one of his 'mission' that already put in stone, just like his father to his mother. In that academy, he met a reyvateil from Lantis, Scarlet Rogue, who becomes his close friend. In the Academy, Raid is known for his really stubborn side. He doesn't want to be paired with any reyvateils, rejecting them at the first sight. Even when Scarlet, his only close friend offered to be his reyvateil partner, he rejected her immediately. His reasoning is 'he want to be strong enough without the need of reyvateil'. However, the truth is, as a Queen Candidate's Future Vanguard, Reyvateil of Raid's choice would only be pulled to his cycle of responsibility. He doesn't want his partner to face same stress as his beloved mother. Not only that, his position as a queen's vanguard is already 'set on stone'. Bullying and assault is not far off from reality. |
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| Post #4 Sep 13 2013, 07:09 AM | Palsa |
It seems like an interesting concept. ![]() Unfortunately I can't comment in reference to the differences between this and the original Ar tonelico, on the grounds that I've only finished the first game, and have barely started the second. A couple of ideas: 1: Since there is an anti Reyvateil group (Ar tonelico's version of the KKK? ) I recommend having certain areas where that faction has so much power, that their activities are not only legal, but they can enter a person's home without proper warrant, and in the dead of night.2: Based on the above: I recommend having checkpoints in 'Non-Reyvateil' regions, and if a Reyvateil is caught going through one of those checkpoints, they could be deported from the area, or far worse. 3: Based on the above: I also suggest adding a plot twist, by making the leader of the anti Reyvateil faction's daughter a Reyvateil, though she would try to keep this information secret, especially from her parents (perhaps she runs away after finding out?). Anyway, those a just my thoughts. Edited by Palsa, Sep 13 2013, 07:11 AM.
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| Post #5 Sep 13 2013, 10:00 AM | Altivarde |
Thank you very much for your input ![]() First and second, regarding the checkpoint and regarding the power of a group, I might reconsider it. One because before Istoria, all reyvateil queens are adamant in their position of never acknowledging the terrorists group. Some queens are also extremist, purging an entire city where 50% of it's inhabitant are terrorists. Istoria tends to be more peace loving. In short, she's Arshtat of the game, minus the craze. However, the thing is, Istoria know if they're given chance, they'll use her mercy to do something she hates most: To assault her kin. This what made her felt so conflicted. Mainly because the party itself composed into three groups (I just think it's better to divide them into three): The peace seeking but reyvateil rejecting (they just don't want to be replaced by reyvateils) (this type is the one most likely to be allowed to have no 1 and no 2 idea you propose) The anarchists that attacks and kill reyvateil at sight (but spares human) and finally The most extreme of the group that hacks the server just to shut it down so all reyvateil would go down, and that doesn't care about sacrifices at all. That means all the bombing and stuff is the work of the third party of the group. As for the third, it's staple thing =w= |
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| Post #6 Sep 13 2013, 09:30 PM | Palsa |
Three is always a good number, and is as deeply associated with the Muse as the number nine. Here are a few resources that you might want to look through as a work reference: Charites: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charis Spoiler: click to toggle Horae: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Horae Moirai: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moirai This is where Revo of Sound Horizon got his inspiration for the play Moira. Erinyes: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Erinyes Hecate: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hecate Spoiler: click to toggle Triple Goddess head: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Triple_deity I hope these are helpful.
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| Post #7 Sep 14 2013, 02:30 AM | Altivarde |
Thank you very much for those! ![]() I'll be studying about them more. I'm sure somewhere a trio would fit the group |
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| Post #8 Sep 14 2013, 03:31 AM | asa+kari |
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This premise sounds very interesting so far! oAo I look forward to hearing more about it. In particular, I'm interested with the 9 CLASSes that are assigned to Alteuge's region of reyvateils and how they're inspired by muses. *u* It makes me wonder how the social structure (apart from the Queen) works over there. This is unrelated.. but reading this reminds me how little I've dabbled into developing my reyvateils over the years orz. |
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| Post #9 Sep 14 2013, 04:32 AM | Altivarde |
Ahaha, thank you very much! ![]() Good luck for your reyvateil, too I've made the MC design a bit over here http://fav.me/d6m40mz warning: a bit NSFW if you consider topless as nsfw Then I made his ORATORIO over here. It also show how Alteuge's conlang looks like =w= http://fav.me/d6m4k0c About New Land Government: While Reyvateils circles under Queen, each of the Nine Classes reyvateil will send one representative to advise the Queen. Before the ascension of the 8th Queen Neisara, the reyvateil class which the Queen comes from will generally more prosperous. Like that, the capital city of Lantis is divided into nine parts (like Midgard's sector). However, when Queen Neisara ascend, she requests equality of all Classes, thus breaking the walls among sectors. In 13th Queen Annabeth's reigning period, she also add a rule where a prince will then becomes the strongest candidate of the main vanguard of the queen. 14th Queen Yulla added that the king (if he can) is symbol of unity of the non-reyvateil group of the country. Therefore, the King is also a part that is needed most to 'glue' the minorities, or in other words, the human and terus. 16th Queen Junos, to not make a 'King' nor the 'Queen' too centered around Reyvateil or Minorities, made sort of Parliament (which includes the nine representatives, or the 'Muses'). Regarding the Queen: To begin with, ascension of a daughter after a mother is very rare, because a level 1 mother would very very very rarely gave birth to a level 1 daughter also. Hence, generally from all nine classes, each one of them will pick all level 1 reyvateils in their group. All the level 1 then filtered, until each group have 1 reyvateil that suited to become the next queen. The queen candidates then filtered once again based on their personality, their way of ruling and many more. Three queen candidates left from the initial nine. The three then will learn from the current queen about their future duties should they're picked. The three will then treated as 'the Queen's Daughter'. After another filtering, one of them will be picked as the queen, where she hold the highest position in the country. |
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| Post #10 Sep 16 2013, 04:27 AM | Altivarde |
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About Nine Muses: Each Muses are picked by the Queen, but also work under parliament's watchful eyes. If the Muses doesn't really represents their reyvateil side, the Muses will be deemed 'failure'. Generally, the Muses picked are the fallen candidate of the queens that bore no ill-will toward the queen's ascension. Another is to pick the Muses from the level 5-1 that really care about the reyvateil side of peoples. It's better if they also care about the human side (which is preferable anytime) The Muses that picked must be one from each class. They have authorities like sub-administrator, which mean, something akin to 'Moderator'. The Muses are 'sisters' to the queen, and generally is very tightly knit to her. However, it doesn't really mean that nepotism running there... Muses roles involves: 1: Owning one of nine muses-only ORATORIO hymn which is their specific song to protect the capital, or bestow some drastic abilities. Doing this needs permission of the queen. Coincidentally, a prince or a king also may give them authentication. 2: Advising the queen regarding reyvateil side 3: Picking assistants About the Prince and Princess Generally, in royal palaces, the most likely to born is a prince, not a princess. This is due to specific medicine that the queen would generally take. A queen may have up to three princes, where she can allocate each of them to one queen candidate. (Raid also born to family of three children) However, in case a princess is born, sadly, she have to understand that she won't likely become a queen, and being a Muse alone is already the highest likely position she can get. Due to bloodshed that a princess might trigger if she's too focused on the throne, most queens won't take the risk of having a daughter. In Lantis, the image of a prince isn't handsome boys that ready to woo girls, but those of their strongest human vanguard, not rare with battle scars on their bodies as proof of their strength trial. Prior to their trip to their respective area of training, they have to be trained to control their reyvateil gene (...if you don't catch it, their border disease, I mean), or in other word taught how to stabilize their emotions so their border disease won't manifests. Of course sometime it doesn't work. At that time, temporary re-routing will be addressed to the queen's address. They'll be re-addressed to partner later. About the Border Disease: Alteuge area, where peoples are more likely descended from Cluster area rather than simply coming out of nowhere, have higher border disease chance is very likely. Not to mention, Lantisian government, under direct strict supervision of the queen (although Istoria herself personally said: she don't want to have anyone, her children included, to be afflicted with this disease) would replicate this disease specifically for military purpose. However, while Istoria is powerless over the raising needs of 'super' vanguard, the same way the terrorist do to their pawns, so far has many time offered her own address to be rerouted on. However, the queen is thought to be too rash on her decision. The temporary rerouting is only until the said vanguard developed a reyvateil partner, but nevertheless, to have her heart able to be read by other peoples, despite temporary is her greatest flaw. Muses that know this has put two solution: Istoria to be demoted Or she let other reyvateils to substitute her. The second side is pretty much like imposing a position of a star singer on a passing reyvateil: It's brutal and cruel. Not only they're forced to suddenly have a person that is not their partner to be rerouted to them, but also to have all of their emotions read by that person. In a sense, the vanguard is luckier (according to one of the old queen), because in that new land, not limited to Lantis, nearly all people that developed this disease doesn't have second chance. A queen can halt the deletion process of 'faulty' address with a special hymn, which is special to Alteuge. This is a measurement to make sure that peoples are rerouted before the server deletes their address. Currently, a way to 'create' the border disease humans is studied upon, on which a way to allocate the border patients on the 'correct' server address, and enforcing a way so that the server doesn't delete their addresses. |
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| Post #11 Sep 16 2013, 06:39 AM | Altivarde |
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Human, Teru and Reyvateil Interaction Despite the fact that Lantis reyvateils have huge fear of terrorists among humans, on the lower ground cities where reyvateils community is not as huge as in Lantis, they are less than worried and prepared to live with humans despite knowing the risk. To live with fear would drive them crazy, so they'd rather have a 'just do it' view. Still, as precaution, they uses blocking device that doesn't gives their reyvateil signal. Only when they find their correct person that they reveal their identity to them. The fondness of the land's reyvateil to Teru is really great because they deem 'Teru is safer than human'. The number of the reyvateil and Teru offspring made 30% of the population half Teru breed or descendant of Teru Teru are really well received in this country, and even, there's a special city for Teru made. Their role are generally to operate dive machine like At 2, or to do other things like become vanguard of a reyvateil Problems of Queens: It's known fact that a 3rd gen would only live up to 40 years, which mean, on course of 250 years, ascensions of the queens would be way too rapid. Even the youngest queen that reigned since 18 would be so near to her death to get new generation of 20 years old reyvateil to pass the baton to. Several methods are proposed, where a beta specifically made to be a queen. However, this results clash. The peoples need reyvateils that have quality of a queen, and is a bridge for peoples. A pure reyvateil queen would enrage the terrorists group. Another involves creation of Harvestasya-like AI or new origin, but both are deemed 'absurd', especially the 'Origin' part. Another method involving revamping the diquilities, specifically for queens to extend the three months period into three years. The mechanism has extended the limit of 40 years to 60 years generally. Queen generally retires at 50. |
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| Post #12 Sep 16 2013, 05:52 PM | Altivarde |
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| Post #13 Sep 17 2013, 06:16 AM | Altivarde |
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Alright, I need an input of which of these reyvateils would be Raid's three partners, and which on all nine will be the three princesses (only one from Raid's team would end up become a princess) CALLIOPE CLASS Luno Apherial Age: 15 As a Calliope, Luno is a strong attacker, but mediocre in another. As a background, she's a reyvateil that lives in village of Half Teru, but isn't one herself. Luno basically lives a carefree life, although in her mind, she wants to experience thrill for once, being a travelling maiden like her mother. Her weakness is the fact that she's still young, and therefore childish. She can't tolerate any harm befall herself (be it physically or mentally), and is generally easy to be swayed. Still, outside the flaw, she's very sympathetic and actually quite sensitive to situation. She's a fast learner, but ill at doing something herself. Her overall role is 'Dreamer that will face reality'. CLIO CLASS Io Sayaka Age: 18 Librarian of thousand histories and knowledge. Io is rather eccentric with her airhead personality and rather sleepy demeanor. While it sounds like she's not interested in anything but her books, Io actually quite an adventurous soul and social, just her ill defense and rather fragile health doesn't permit her to. Song magic wise, Io is the best among the nine in supportive, third best in healing, and second to worst in red magic. Io's problem revolves around the fact that she's sickly, always confined inside her library. Another flaw is culture shock that she might experience a lot, thinking several things as 'abnormal'. She also have huge fear of death, so much that she subconsciously focus her arsenal in healing and supportive. Despite so, if she could be help for the party, she'd take step forward. Her role is 'Butterfly that about to face harsh world' ERATO CLASS Kitara Lu Salka Age: 20 The travelling musician. Kitara is a half teru reyvateil, often carrying her beloved namesake instrument. Currently, she travels with her cousin, a male Teru vanguard named Altos. As an Erato, she's very dreamy and wide-hearted (so she said, although does this mean she's very tolerating or accepting is unknown). Despite so, Kitara, for her age, is very uninterested in relationship due to many failed relationships. She for one, is very distrusting toward a male's advance and would swat them politely. Like most woman, she would really love to be 'the one'. Even so, on the course of the story, she also one with least attachment with her vanguards Magic wise, she's all well balanced, with above average healing Her overall role is 'The poet that can't help falling in love' EUTERPE CLASS Karen Sigl Rasthyt Age: 17 Raid's adoptive sister and far cousin. Her mother is the late Euterpe Muse Leiah. Despite they're adoptive brother and sister, Raid and Karen acts different from one. She calls Raid 'Ray' affectionately. Karen lives in palace, and as a princess, she's especially very outside-fearing. Karen's issues involves her laments that somewhere out there, her biological father still alive. She wants to meet him, and if that means to get out of there to the street, as a princess or as a reyvateil. Despite so, she's still so hesitant because of her fear and the fact that compared to her brother, she's more of a priority in eyes of terrorists. Song magic wise, she's well balanced, with her healing being the best among nine. Her other status is mediocre if not lower than average. Her overall theme is 'The Maiden that want to hug the moon'. MELPOMENE CLASS Scarlet Rogue Age: 19 Raid's best friend (more like, his only). One of the fighting reyvateil in Platina Knight Academy. Scarlet is the best in attacking, but ill in other two. Scarlet's problem revolves around her hatred of being protected, and want to do the protecting instead. Despite so, it's not helping that she's always partnered with one of the ace of the academy (Raid) in their mission. Her problem also revolves around how she felt useless and her envy to her partner (Raid) She's determined and a bit rash, but also rather cowardly when needing to be leader. While she's perceptive to Raid, she's ill at understanding the other. Her role is 'Accepting destiny' POLYHYMNIA CLASS Azure Rouge Age: 17 Scarlet's younger sister. Contrary to her sister, Azure is supportive of anything her vanguard do. The blue haired reyvateil is a mayor's assistant, who actually is her mother. In that town, a lot of attack has crippled it to the point of peoples hiding themselves in their houses. The hostility to outsider is so great. Azure's problem revolving around her too tolerating attitude, where she seem doesn't mind anything. But this in fact a shroud, a lie. She's like that due to her fear of being rejected. Her father is a human, and so on her mother, but when both of her and her sister born reyvateil (she's the first to awaken), her father left her mother. She strives to be 'pleasing' to the others Her role is 'To find real self' TERPSICHORE CLASS Ada Jilvas Age: 18 'Dancing Reyvateil', captain of third division Lantisian Reyvateil brigade. Ada is cold and generally considered to be 'efficiency seeking'. While she holds the princes in highest regard due to they won her awe (for their strength), Ada does not respect the other human that much. In her mind, there are only two places: Human and Reyvateil. Human is 'just another people that doesn't need your care, only the strong of the human deserve to be acknowledged', and therefore 'human is simply lower species'. Reyvateil on the other hand is 'higher being that deserve to be acknowledged no matter how insignificant they are in human's eyes'. Her problem revolves of how to accept the other side, and not everything is black and white like she thought. THALIA CLASS Ophelia Age: 17 Fun loving drama player. She often plays different roles and do her roles perfectly. Ophelia might not be her real name, but she prefer to be addressed as so. Ophelia seem born to high class family, or just simply well mannered, because a lot has pointed her high class aura Her problems seems to be masked by her comedic behavior, or she's forcing her partner to understand her through very vague hints that she scatters around her cosmosphere. Her role is 'Laughing Fool' URANIA CLASS Serges Alluniar Age: 16 The uncaring reyvateil noble. She would do anything she simply likes, and doesn't do anything she doesn't like. Her ignorance might irked many, but that's just how she is. She basically a pampered girl that need to be spanked for once. Still, under that 'I do what I like' personality is actually a side where she doesn't want to do something because she hates to fail. She simply does stuff full of repetition because she felt secure in doing that. When tossed in world of uncertainty, want it or not, she have to adapt. She might be a bit aloof, but she also holds mischievous side. Her theme is 'To see outside the frame'. |
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| Post #14 Sep 17 2013, 12:14 PM | Altivarde |
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Alright, apparently there's a little error on the poll... Let's just post your opinion on the thread, sorry :< So, current vote Luno: 1 Io: 3 Kitara: 3 Karen: 0 Scarlet: 3 Azure: 2 Ada: 1 Ophelia: 5 Serges: 3 |
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| Post #15 Sep 18 2013, 12:48 AM | Palsa |
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I think that all of them would be great to have in a supporting role, so I'm going to focus on the three partners. 1: Scarlet Rogue. As a close friend of the main character, I think it would be best to include her in the line up; plus, she seems to me as a great choice for the leading lady role. 2: Luno Apherial. I can easily see her in a role similar to that of Misha or Cocona. 3: Karen Sigl Rasthyt. She is already close to Raid, so not having her as a major character in the story would probably be a mistake, though she could be either playable or an important NPC. Personal suggestion: When I read her description, I couldn't help but feel that she lives under a certain level of peer pressure. Seeing as Raid is adamant about excepting certain responsibilities, I think it would be a good move to make Karen part of his reasoning. For an example: since Karen was adopted into the family, you could have it so that the parents have 'arranged' for the two to be married, but Raid doesn't except the arrangement, and that in turn could create a wall between the two. Another reason for the arrangement could be do to his refusal in excepting any Reyvateil partners (if you don't choose a partner yourself, then will choose one for you). I think that it would also be a good move to make her a little intimidated by the other Reyvateil that get close to Raid, especially Scarlet. Last suggestion: Since she is adapted, and her parents, or at least father is unknown, I recommend making her an Origin; though that fact may be unknown to the majority of the cast, I think that she could play the third Reyvateil role (the ones that Noriko Mitose always sings for). Just a couple of thoughts. Serges Alluniar and Ophelia could also work, but I'd recommend creating a strong rivalry between the two, as they strike me as the type that would clash whenever they come into contact with each other. Or you could have Serges as Scarlet's rival. Ada Jilvas: 18 seems a bit young for a captain (ignoring Teletha Testarossa, who was 16), I recommend adjusting it up, say: 20-23. As for the rest of the other Reyvateil, if you want to include any of them as a part of the party, then I recommend making them an optional path that the player would decide to take, but the above three are my main suggestion (Scarlet, Luno, Karen). Edited by Palsa, Sep 18 2013, 12:56 AM.
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| Post #16 Sep 18 2013, 05:54 AM | Altivarde |
Thank you for your input ![]() So currently Luno: 2 Io: 3 Kitara: 3 Karen: 1 Scarlet: 4 Azure: 2 Ada: 1 Ophelia: 5 Serges: 3 Because Ophelia have reached 5 votes, I shall design her appearance first =w= ---- Speaking of which, regarding Karen, having her close to Raid while having that kind of wall is sort of odd. I'd rather have Raid rejects all other due to other reason. Karen is definitely a level 1 if considering her position. Sure, Istoria might accept Karen just because she's Leiah daughter, while Leiah herself is Istoria's cousin. However, her husband definitely won't. Having Karen just 'freeload' in the palace would make the poor girl even more hated by peers, that is what her husband thinking. But if she's level 1... no one would question it that much. Perhaps, even, Raid know that chance of him becoming Karen's partner is like 1/3, or maybe more, like 1/300. The reasoning is because prince are to be paired with princess, but Raid also have an older brother and a younger brother. With Karen he might be less rejecting, if only he doesn't have older brother and younger brother. Having them to be paired with Karen while they're closer than 'just best friend' would ruin it all. Therefore, until the clarification on queen's side, Karen and Raid promised to not be more than 'just a sibling'. However, he also don't want to give up on hope, so that consolidate his rejecting personality. What do you think? Of course, it's yet to be final. |
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| Post #17 Sep 18 2013, 08:11 AM | Palsa |
That works, and I'm looking forward to seeing how the Ophelia drawing comes out.
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| Post #18 Sep 18 2013, 11:44 AM | Altivarde |
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So current vote: Luno: 2 Io: 4 Kitara: 3 Karen: 1 Scarlet: 4 Azure: 2 Ada: 2 Ophelia: 6 Serges: 3 Ophelia sure is popular as a Thalia XD I better create a really nice story for her. Speaking of which, now for Raid's sprite update... ![]() Also if I were to add my own voice, it'll be like this: Luno: 2 Io: 5 Kitara: 3 Karen: 2 Scarlet: 5 Azure: 2 Ada: 2 Ophelia: 6 Serges: 3 /shot Also regarding Ada, there's reason for that age, and I can't say it's simply because professionalism. |
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http://sysvarda.deviantart.com/art/CLASS-THALIA-Reyvateil-Ophelia-401058595 There you go. |
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| Post #20 Sep 18 2013, 02:21 PM | Altivarde |
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http://sysvarda.deviantart.com/art/CLASS-THALIA-Reyvateil-Ophelia-401058595 There you go. |
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) I recommend having certain areas where that faction has so much power, that their activities are not only legal, but they can enter a person's home without proper warrant, and in the dead of night.








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