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Carter Frost; Finnished (And Ready for Revising)
Topic Started: Apr 15 2012, 09:26 PM (143 Views)
Carter
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Primary Color: Silver


Secondary Color: Black


Name: Carter Frost


Race: Elf


Ocupation: Hunter


Weapon:
Carter's Bow



Main Spell: Water


Character Description: Carter is an Elf with a gray-ish tent to his skin and long Silver hair. He is around 5'9 and moderatly built. His eyes from birth were a deep Ice blue, this is were his unual Last name. He wears an multi-peace armor suit that incoperates Self made leather, Human forged Steel, and elvish metals.


Fighting Style: Carter's fighting style is based on power and speed, If he can't take you out with his bow at mid or long range he'll get close and personal with blades on the ends of his bow. For Carter, Magic is for tough or special occasion.


RP Sample: Carter sits in a tree in the forest watching as a deer walks by, unaware of his presents. As Carter notches an arrow, he loses footing because of the moss that covered the limb he was purched on. He manges to land on his feet seemingly unharmed be the deer who had hear the disturbance begain darting into the woods. Carter steadys himself and begains running after it at full speed. After about five and a half miles of running Carter manges to trap the deer in a cave, but unfortunitly Carter and the deer weren't the only one's in the cave.
As Carter notches another arrow, from the corner of his eye he spots a massive brown bear still asleep. In his mind Carter was quickly going over different out comes of this situation and found that the only way for him to leave this cave alive was to first kill the bear while it was still asleep and then go after the deer. Carter takes aim and manges to take out the sleeping bear with a shot to the head and then did the same to the cornered deer. Carter then returns home after selling the animals for their hide and meat at different shops.
Edited by Carter, May 18 2012, 07:34 PM.
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Your application is nearly completed. There are but a few thinga yiu have to edit though::

1. The fighting style is a bit lacking. Every Elf, believe it or not, has different aspects. Give your character a bit more unique qualities.

2. I personally am not getting a good idea of your character. Please either put a picture into it or describe a bit more.

3. Elves start off with a simple spell or two. I would go with Duem(Vine) or maybe Bege(Water). But be mindful on how you pick and what you pick.

4. The bow is great and all, but give a description to your characters arrows. Are they supplied or are they gained eventually. ease note though: You cannot use magic to make an arrow. That requires to much energy.

5. The Rp Sample stuck out the most, its to short. Keep going it the story abd dont be afraid to describe the little things.

6. If your character has Icy Blue eyes, dont you think the avi should too?
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Accepted! Welcome to the site.

Please make sure that you start your storyline inside the Elven Kingdom.




A side note: Try to remember that you may have more than one spell to start of with. And if you ever need a spell to be translated, ask.
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