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| Joe Liquori | Feb 10 2014, 05:16 PM Post #1 |
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Name: Joe Liquori Age: 15 Date of Birth: February 8 Appearance: Joe is about 5' 10" and keeps his dark brown hair short to medium in length. He has brown eyes as well and is not the toughest looking fellow only weighing at about 130 lbs. He dresses simply in casual clothes such as a hoodie and sweatpants as comfortably>"swag". He also wears glasses to see further but are not necessary in combat since they would probably fall off. Personality: Joe is a laid back person who always wants the energy in the room to be high, lots of jokes and happiness none of that drama/boring stuff. He himself though can get lonely when not around other people and gets down and sees things in a more depressing light. He cares greatly for his friends and stick up for them/those who can't for themselves. He is very basic and does not like complicated things. History: Joe grew up in the Nahani Village his whole life as a fisherman under his father. Joe enjoyed the simple life, he woke up, went to school, did his work, went fishing, came home, and repeated. At school he had no problem with the other kids as the village is tight knit and one looks over another as they know of the dangers that was posed with the Shade. He excelled in his studies and enjoyed history the most, the battles that took place while mankind was still growing and the tactics the generals and leaders used to win battles. At home he was respectful of his father and mother but mostly looked out for his little sister, Joy, who had health issues. Joy was sick most of the time and he would run errands to fetch her medicine or play with her to get her spirits up. Due to this, he learned to be protective of his family and possessions and only wishes that life would run smoothly with no problems. Growing up was fun for Joe, but he knew the fishing life was not for him as he yearned to play out the scenes he learned through history class. As Joe's fifteenth birthday crept closer, he knew he wanted to join up in arms at the Guard and protect more than his family. Joe plans on joining training soon and is excited to meet people from the cities. Strengths: Joe is great at keeping morale high and is a supporting person. He looks out for people and helps people out with problems. When he is around, the energy in the room is high. He is also capable of taking hits and dealing hits at precise times. He is also a good tactician as long as he has sufficient information of the enemy/situation. Weaknesses: Joe relies on the enemies weakness which at times might seem the enemy might not have. He is not the strongest physically but is both mentally and physically capable of taking hits for the group he is with to survive or continue. Also, when alone Joe tends to second guess himself and make the wrong decisions. Weapon: A Shield in the right arm and a Gauntlet in the left. Primary Form/Function: The shield allows Joe to keep the attention on him and absorb incoming hits from any source. He is also able to bash enemies when they are open to get them on the ground where he can kill them with his gauntlet. Edited by Joe Liquori, Feb 10 2014, 06:13 PM.
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| @Koala | Feb 10 2014, 05:23 PM Post #2 |
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I don't see anything really wrong with this character, but it does need more detail (i.e. where was he born, where does he live now, etc.). Keep in mind that fifteen-year-olds don't typically have combat training, since training starts at 17. If you want that, you have to write that in to the history. |
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| @TheSadOnion | Feb 10 2014, 06:04 PM Post #3 |
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I agree with Koala, you need more detail. Especially the history, I don't feel like I understand your character as much as I do with the other characters that have been posted. If you could update that, then I would have no problem approving your character. |
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| @Koala | Feb 10 2014, 06:19 PM Post #4 |
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Approved 1/2 |
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| @Xero | Feb 10 2014, 09:47 PM Post #5 |
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Approved and moved |
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