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EM Being:
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Name: Pain Gender: None Theme: Description: A faceless, soundless humanoid figure, Pain's appearance defies most logical description. When you look directly at it, Pain appears to be a rapidly twitching human whose skin has been ripped off. There is no fat to speak of; entirely made from blood-drenched muscle and bleached bone, Pain appears never to be able to stand completely still. However, when viewed in the periphery of vision, Pain seems to change poses dramatically, contorting into positions that strike chords within the psyche of all sentient beings. Appears slightly differently to each and every individual observing it; the twitches and shaking isn't quite the same as seen by you as someone else. When the EM being is visible, recording devices cannot capture it in a single state. A computer will not recognise it as an entity, and two individual, sentient (not necessarily sapient) beings will observe two different interpretations of Pain, and in addition, this changes every time they review the recording. Most of the time, this simply relates to contortion, but sightings of Pain with limbs ripped off, bleeding copiously, or only half of Pain's entire body being visible have been reported, if in tiny numbers. While completely silent, Pain can still communicate if it wishes to; rather than using something as base as speaking, it appears to "telepathically" communicate with an individual or individuals, exploiting the electromagnetic field given off by brains and electromagnetic beings to be interpreted as "speech", despite all such "listeners" recognising the ethereality of the communication. Its natural voice is bizarre and is harder to describe than its appearance. For the most part, a voice like silk flowing over dry ice is used, but this appears to be a voice put on to prevent the subjects from panicking, and despite how quietly hissing it is, it rings as clear as a bell and is never misheard or drowned out. Pain's natural voice, however, is a blood curdling shriek that, despite its wordlessness, seems to convey the exact meaning across perfectly, after a fashion.
Personality: Pain is an odd soul. Focused on the concept of sensation and feeling, it has little to no patience for considering emotions. The only sort of emotion it might have is sadism, sadism so great that Beckett, usually a rational and agnostic character, once described Pain's mentality as "the closest to the God of Pain as has ever been recorded by living man." Highly reckless with a twisted passion for experience, Pain will scream for blood and would instil fear in all those whom it hates. However, whenever commanded by Beckett, the personality is turned on its head; while the sadism and lust for pain still manifests itself, Pain is submissive and will obey commands as long as they are logically reasoned, and with Beckett, they almost always are. It has become more sedate and reasonable in speech recently, mostly due to Beckett's influence.
Biography: There would be a lot of controversy over Pain's origin were it not for the fact that the majority of people wish to forget about it. There was tell amongst both AMians and FMians of an FMian who, like many others, for example, Awe, chose to associate itself with an emotion, but Pain fell just on the outskirts of this general pattern. It came to be on the Earth when Matthew Beckett experienced the intense pain shortly after he infused himself with a chemical brain of his own creation; this second brain's outwardly pumping electromagnetic energy became one with Dolores and Dolores temporarily lost physical (as far as an electromagnetic being can be physical) form. After a few days, Dolores managed to reassert its form, coming to terms with its reliance upon Beckett.
Wave Conversion: Pain and Matthew Beckett
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Name: Dolores Element: Elec Sub Element: Dark Gender: None, but usually treated as male Theme: Description: A muscular, humanoid figure, Dolores appears to show characteristics of Pain showing through its body's composition. Cardinally in the form of a knight in slim-fitting, burnished metal armour, the plate appears to be embedded in bloodied muscle. In addition, the plate armour appears to be serrated and torn, shredded, broken and shorn. Simply, it is painful to look at. Blood (if that is what it is; it appears to be more like fiery lava, or reddened, electrified water) runs over the muscles, though none seems to drip from Dolores onto surfaces. Dolores never naturally bleeds. The head is covered by a twisted helm whose spikes and plating looks different every time an individual directly observes it, though it never seems to change shape normally. No two people see the helm in the same shape. If recorded visually, a computer would not recognise there is a head at all. Two people viewing it would see differently-shaped sets of metal plates, but constant are the two bottomless black pits for eyes. Pointing lasers into them results in no response at all; it is as if all light is absorbed, and none scattered. Its characteristics are a mixture of both its human host and Pain itself.
Strengths: -Intuitive; Highly logical mind leading to clear and decisive deduction. The mental processes occur ridiculously quickly, and "gut instincts" tend to be reasoned judgements that have been processed at insane speeds. [Beckett trait] -Map to Terrain; Can translate mental thoughts and considerations into action remarkably quickly and usually does the right thing at the right time and incredibly quickly. While normally not the first to strike a blow, Dolores will often show decisiveness that belies authority in favour of pragmatism. [Combination of Pain and Beckett traits] -Tolerance; Pain threshold is considerably higher than others', and will usually make Dolores' system more active in trying to fix himself. While in battle, this is negligible, overall, Dolores is able to live through any amount of pain and suffering. [Pain trait]
Weaknesses: -Stress; When stressed by multiple mental requirements, is incredibly difficult to work with and is prone to making mistakes. [Beckett trait] -Recklessness; Overreliance on the usually intelligent mind will sometimes lead to reckless and stupid errors of judgement that are generally far greater in terms of repercussions than normal mistakes. [Combination of Pain and Beckett traits] -Underestimation: Often, the high pain threshold leads to a misunderstanding of personal capabilities and may lead to life-threatening situations. While Dolores is not necessarily affected, the human is. If the human's psyche is strong enough at the point of subsidence, Dolores will also collapse as an entity and the human will recover. If not, the EM being will abandon the human and seek out another; whether or not the human recovers is down to chance and is not affected in any way by the reversion. [Pain trait] -Ravenous: When not in combat and given the opportunity to eat, Dolores can quite easily demolish a meal for several on its own through a strange void that opens up in its helmet. This is due to the ridiculous energy required for its body's metabolism. It has been known to eat human flesh, but so far, accounts have only indicated that it consumes the flesh of the dead.
Weapon 1
Weapon Name: Edged Gauntlets Weapon Description: A pair of indestructible, burnt metal gauntlets that appear never to take damage. It isn't as if you could tell anyway; they appear to be made from scraps of metal plastered one on top of another, edges leading backwards, and each rough edge is sharp enough to cut paper. Both have a chain attached to them which may be attached to a hand-held weapon or left loose. Both also have a number of blades growing from them; they can be flexed and moved by specialised (albeit abnormal to normal human physiology) muscles.
1. Attack Name: Strike Element: Dark Description: A solid punch thrown at a force to reckon with. The gauntlet used appears to give off a black glow as it moves. This attack can be used twice in a turn, but if it is, it cannot be used at all for the next three turns, regardless of the number of hits landed with this attack. If used once in a turn, the cooldown does not take effect. Damage: Moderate
2. Attack Name: Electrified Blade Throw Element: Elec Description: A blade from the side of a gauntlet is electrified by an enzyme converting the change in voltage due to ion movement in neurones in contact with the blade. The muscles holding the blade relax and the forearm is whipped across Dolores' front, flicking the blade at an opponent. Another blade is then rapidly regrown to replace the one lost by throwing. Damage: Moderate
Weapon 2
Weapon Name: Malleus Dolor Weapon Description: A 1.3m tall hammer with a head that weighs about twenty kilograms, this weapon appears to be made from blackened, solid, indestructible, and somewhat twisted metal. Similar to Dolores' helm, its surface shape changes whenever it isn't being observed. It has a faint golden-red glow, and on its base, it has a chain that can be hooked and attached to a gauntlet.
1. Attack Name: Slam Element: Null Description: A swing of the hammer in any direction to hit an enemy, knocking them back up to a metre. Damage: Modest
2. Attack Name: Hammer Throw Element: Null Description: The Malleus Dolor is flung straight and true at an opponent. The chain appears to impossibly lengthen, and upon a sharp pull, the hammer is brought back to Dolores to catch it. The chain appears to contract as this happens. This attack has a range of eight metres. The chain is indestructible. Damage: Moderate
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Beckett and Pain
Human: Matthew Beckett Wizard: Pain Conversion: Dolores Element: Elec Sub Element: Dark Weapon 1: Edged Gauntlets Description: A pair of indestructible, burnt metal gauntlets that appear never to take damage. It isn't as if you could tell anyway; they appear to be made from scraps of metal plastered one on top of another, edges leading backwards, and each rough edge is sharp enough to cut paper. Both have a chain attached to them which may be attached to a hand-held weapon or left loose. Both also have a number of blades growing from them; they can be flexed and moved by specialised (albeit abnormal to normal human physiology) muscles. Weapon 2: Malleus Dolor Description: A 1.3m tall hammer with a head that weighs about twenty kilograms and measures 28cm head to tail and with a square face at 12cm a side, this weapon appears to be made from blackened, solid, indestructible, and somewhat twisted metal and is carried in one hand by Dolores. Similar to Dolores' helm, its surface shape changes whenever it isn't being observed. It has a faint golden-red glow, and on its base, it has a chain that can be hooked and attached to a gauntlet.
Name: Voltaic Body Description: Once per Custom, the user can make one Elec attack inflict Paralysis. LP Cost: 0 Name: Light Defense Description: All Light attacks against the user deal one less damage level than normal to a minimum of Pathetic. LP Cost: 100
Battle Cards
Cannon Air Spread 1 Gatling 1 Mad Vulcan 1 Mini Grenade 1 Power Bomb 1 Sword Long Sword Wide Sword Sync Hook 1 Big Ax 1 Jack Corvus Scythe 1 Fire Dance 1 Fokx-Fu 3 Paralyze Plus Attack +10 Guard Junk Cube 1 Divide Line Moai Fall 1 Mop Lance 1 Heat Upper 1 Fire Bazooka 1 Piranha Kiss 1 Voltic Eye 1 Jumbo Hammer 1 Chain Bubble 1 Plasma Gun 1 Flicker Kick 1 Ice Meteor 1 Jack Corvus Arach Attack 1 Recover 50
Fiennes and Steel
Human: Jack Fiennes Wizard: Steel Conversion: Carius Ekes Element: Null Sub Element: Breaking Weapon 1: Bo Staff Description: A simple, black baton-like device measuring 61cm from head to tail seems rather disappointing until a quick twist snaps out two metal arms from either end, forming a metal bo staff of 1.818m for use offensively and defensively. The ends each have a single, 8mm diameter black hole in them. Weapon 2: Short Blade Description: A dark silver blade of length 0.5m (including the handle) with two wickedly sharp edges, one of which is slightly darker. Its hilt is made from a strange undulating material that comfortably seems to wrap around the fingers rather than the other way round. The pommel is an elaborate affair that prevents the hand from slipping off the handle if the grip fails.
Name: Null Affinity Description: All Null attacks by the user that deal Low or more damage deal one more damage level than normal. Only boosts Standard Cards and Character Weapons. LP Cost: 0 Name: Break Plus Description: Once per Custom, the user can make one attack Break. LP Cost: 100
Battle Cards
Cannon Air Spread 1 Gatling 1 Mad Vulcan 1 Mini Grenade 1 Power Bomb 1 Sword Long Sword Wide Sword Sync Hook 1 Big Ax 1 Scythe 1 Fire Dance 1 Paralyze Plus Attack +10 Guard Junk Cube 1 Divide Line Moai Fall 1 Mop Lance 1 Heat Upper 1 Fire Bazooka 1 Piranha Kiss 1 Voltic Eye 1 Jumbo Hammer 1 Chain Bubble 1 Plasma Gun 1 Flicker Kick 1 Ice Meteor 1 Arach Attack 1 Recover 50
Alrighty, well. As I've said already I'm just hesitant about the level or morbidity overall here. Personally I want to let it slide but the site is in fact PG-13. I'm inclined not to make you tone this down in the profile itself, but you're gonna have to go easier on the details when you actually RP these.
As for the shape changing part, you're gonna have to reword this some way or another. Regardless of whatever changes are happening to Pain, they need to be within reason and more importantly he needs to be easily recognizable to anything and anyone observing him. Furthermore I don't know what you mean by having his appearance inflict a psychological impact but at the same time affect recording machines. I'm gonna say no to the latter, there's no real reason this should affect machinery in such a way, nothing logical comes to mind at least. Also realize characters with a more calm or even apathetic mind, to name a few traits, won't be nearly as affected by the chills Pain gives off, so to speak.
The bio is fine and dandy, but as a note if you're going to reference Dabir's character you'll need his express permission, which I doubt you'll have trouble getting if you haven't already.
Again, you're gonna have to ease up on the ever-shifting thing. If it's always changing, that's fine. But if any two people or machines are observing it at the same time, it should look the same and change the same. I don't see any reason for it to do otherwise, the psychological effect won't affect everyone, and certainly not machines.
Strengths are fine, though just be sure you realize that even if you describe his abilities as remarkable the effect of them in battle will all be negligible. Weaknesses also seem to balance to me. Though Ravenous almost sounds like a skill more than a Weakness, it's fine as an RP Weakness.
Strike is actually a bit UP if I read it right. It's fine if you have the possibility of using this thrice in a turn, and without CoolDown. The base cost of such flexibility is a damage level, so a Moderate CQC attack is fine for use twice a turn. This is assuming you know each punch will take up an action. If you meant this to be all one action if used twice, then another damage level of drawbacks would be needed.
EBT is fine, though I'd like you to specify the length of the blade, baseline is .5m of course.
Slam is going to need some nerfing, though the good news is you can bump the knock-back effect up to 2m back. The effect is worth two damage levels, so you'll need another damage level of drawbacks on this as well. I assume the hammer requires two hands to wield though, so I'll need you to state that as well.
For Hammer Throw, first I'll need you to specify the size of the hammer head, just for the record. Second you'll have to slap about 2 turns of CoolDown on this attack if you want to keep the 8m length of the chain, since baseline is 5m.
Ace Program Element: Electric Description: User gains a big spike on each shoulder. The user's helmet also gains a spike that looks much like a horn. Vibrant Noise: User color theme becomes yellow. Their right arm turns black, and their left turns white. Form Abilities: Standard cards with Elec as their Main Element gain a Low damage boost, while a Standard card's Sub Element with Elec gains a Pitiful boost. Twice per custom, the user may add a one use Paralysis effect on one of their Sword cards. Only affects 2 swords. Vibrant Noise Ability: The user gains a Tag Slot in their Custom to load another card. The Tagged Card must be declared as a pair with one other card in your Custom, and can only be used in a chain with the selected card. The Tagged Card cannot be used by itself under any circumstances. Multi Use cards in the Tag Slot become One Use. Color Out Weapon: Rocket Knuckle The user launches their right hand like a rocket. The fist extends out 5 meters before returning back to the user. This attack overrides any weapon that is currently in that user's hand. Deals Low Elec damage. Paralyzes for the first hit of a custom only.
Joker Program Element: Breaking Description: User gains a roman style helmet and plated style shoulder pads. Vibrant Noise: Helmet, shoulder armor and other main armor pieces turn gold or have the appearance of gold. The rest turns purple. Also gains gold plated armor on the rest of body. Form Out Abilities: Standard cards with Break or Summon as the main element gain Pitiful damage, while Standard cards with the same elements as a Sub Element gain Pathetic damage. Vibrant Noise Ability: Gladiator Armor: All attacks that hit are reduced by pitiful to a minimum of pathetic. Color Out Weapon: Break Army: A row of troops appear, the row having 3 troops, which charge straight at individual targets as the user sees fit in an formation or strategy(three way attack, straight out charge etc). Each little troop deals low damage. Troops are destructible, have low health and are Breaking element. At the end of the attack, all surviving soldiers disappear.
Favorites: Silver Meteor, Striker Edge, Gatling 3, Anti Sword
Ability Waves
Null Affinity Sword Affinity HP +500
Fuoco Form
Ace Program Element: Fire Description: The user gains spikes straight up. In the center of their chest they gain a colorless diamond. Vibrant Noise: The user's armor turns red and the diamond turns the main color of the user. Form Abilities: Super armor Vibrant Noise Ability: Another Side (Side Select) Color Out Weapon: Synchro The user gains an extra slot in their custom. In this slot they can slot in an fire element card. This card must be multi-use and then is synched with the user. The user gains the indication of the weapon around their wrist. If the weapon is a sword card it appears across their back. This card can be used through out the custom. The user uses the card the same as they normally would; however, this card can be unequipped and used again. The card slotted in has its damage reduced by one level to a minimum of pathetic. Cards with pathetic default damage can not be used. If the weapon causes a status effect (ie: paralyze or blind) it only affects the first use of the weapon..
Cannon PlusCannon PlasmaGun1 Air Spread IceMeteor1 Sword Wide Sword Long Sword PowerBomb1 SyncHook1 RadarMissile1 FireBazooka1 ChainBubble1 JumboHammer1 FlickerKick1 BigAx1 JunkCube1 MoaiFall1 Barrier Power Song Paralyze Plus x2 Attack +10 Guard ====Purchases/Acquisitions==== Berserk Sword3 Tidal Edge Voltic Eye2 Voltic Eye3 Stun Knuckle Recover 150 Drill Arm2 Noise Wizard 1 Buki 2 Break Sabre Silver Meteor Striker Edge Radar Missile3 Gatling3 Cycle 2+ Chaos Card x2 AntiSword Fokx Fu 1 Brave Sword3 Cancer Bubble Bombalizer Warrior Soul Piranha Kiss3 Big Drop1 Green Ink Ice Spin1 Kung Foo Kid White Meteor Quake Song Pegasus Magic Black Hole 2 Winy Attack 2 Rogue Plesio Surf Buki 3 Flash Strike 3 Invisible Recover 300 Guard Recover 100 Barrier 100 Guardian
Quotes from 'Round the Board
Omega: SFRP, the only place you can deny Cancer.
Ryuu: I beat up babies by punching pregnant women. I tie the tails of animals together to make improvised nunchucks that I dispose of in a wood chipper after each use. I burn down cities for fuel to keep trees warm in the fire.
Ryuu: The three P's this place runs on: Patience, pricks, and pride.
Ryuu: You MAY not like them, but some people enjoy puns. ANGUS what I'm one of those people. Is this a NIGHTMARE for you? Are you oKAI? Are these puns getting TEDDIEous? I'll stop KAZUMI-n a lot to me. Nah I'm just JOSHING. That didn't work, no DAISUKE?
Ryuu and/or Van: That was my favorite pun, ANGUS what I'm using it. Yes that was totally PUNintentional. We better stop or we'll give him NIGHTMARES. AY,LEX stop before Torch really goes insane. U-B making too many puns and E-B freaking out over them. True, this could be a MAJOR problem. Aw, MAN,AM-I gonna regret this? ZUHAL had us worried. If anyone else had made that pun I would be pissed, but it's ok because ATRUS you. This list of puns truly is a COLOSSUS. I hope you MAY forgive me. ANGUS I'll go post now. Well, Kira's and trouble. I'll hafta DEFENDER at all costs. You know that list is just so great, I think I'll CELLION eBay. COLOSSUS if you need anything. Torchman: *goes to corner, assumes the fetal position and rocks back and forth in insanity*
Van:This ain't Yu-gi-oh, you don't automatically lose when you run out of cards. Never running out helps though.
Name: Pain Gender: None Description: A faceless, soundless humanoid figure, Pain's appearance defies most logical description. When you look directly at it, Pain appears to be a rapidly twitching human whose skin has been ripped off. There is no fat to speak of; entirely made from blood-drenched muscle and bleached bone, Pain appears never to be able to stand completely still. However, when viewed in the periphery of vision, Pain seems to change poses dramatically, contorting into positions that would make a direct observer wince in pain. This only occurs when there is no sentient being observing Pain in a visible state. When the EM being is visible, recording devices capture a strange static-filled humanoid shape whose details cannot be perfectly ascertained and motions and movements appear to be mostly normal, though contortions and so on still seem to be captured. However, this static and lack of detail in themselves indicate that it is indeed Pain itself being recorded, suggesting the being is somehow broadcasting an illusory image of morbid things. Most of the time, this morbidity simply relates to contortion, but sightings of Pain with limbs ripped off, bleeding copiously, or only half of Pain's entire body being visible have been reported, if in tiny numbers. While completely silent, Pain can still communicate if it wishes to; rather than using something as base as speaking, it appears to "telepathically" communicate with an individual or individuals, exploiting the electromagnetic field given off by brains and electromagnetic beings to be interpreted as "speech", despite all such "listeners" recognising the ethereality of the communication. Its natural voice is bizarre and is harder to describe than its appearance. For the most part, a voice like silk flowing over dry ice is used, but this appears to be a voice put on to prevent the subjects from panicking, and despite how quietly hissing it is, it rings as clear as a bell and is never misheard or drowned out. Pain's natural voice, however, is a blood curdling shriek that, despite its wordlessness, seems to convey the exact meaning across perfectly, after a fashion. Personality: Pain is an odd soul. Focused on the concept of sensation and feeling, it has little to no patience for considering emotions. The only sort of emotion it might have is sadism, sadism so great that Beckett, usually a rational and agnostic character, once described Pain's mentality as "the closest to the God of Pain as has ever been recorded by living man." Highly reckless with a twisted passion for experience, Pain will scream for blood and would instil fear in all those whom it hates. However, whenever commanded by Beckett, the personality is turned on its head; while the sadism and lust for pain still manifests itself, Pain is submissive and will obey commands as long as they are logically reasoned, and with Beckett, they almost always are. Biography: There would be a lot of controversy over Pain's origin were it not for the fact that the majority of people wish to forget about it. There was tell amongst both AMians and FMians of an FMian who, like many others, for example, Awe, chose to associate itself with an emotion, but Pain fell just on the outskirts of this general pattern. It came to be on the Earth when Matthew Beckett experienced the intense pain shortly after he infused himself with the chemical brain; the second brain's outwardly pumping electromagnetic energy became one with Dolores and Dolores temporarily lost physical (as far as an electromagnetic being can be physical) form. After a few days, Dolores managed to reassert its form, coming to terms with its reliance upon Beckett.
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Name: Dolores Element: Elec Sub Element: Dark Gender: None, but usually treated as male Description: A muscular, humanoid figure, Dolores appears to show characteristics of Pain showing through its body's composition. Cardinally in the form of a knight in slim-fitting, burnished metal armour, the plate appears to be embedded in bloodied muscle. In addition, the plate armour appears to be serrated and torn, shredded, broken and shorn. Simply, it is painful to look at. Blood (if that is what it is; it appears to be more like fiery lava, or reddened, electrified water) runs over the muscles, though none seems to drip from Dolores onto surfaces. Dolores never naturally bleeds. The head is covered by a twisted helm whose spikes and plating looks different every time an individual directly observes it, though it never seems to change shape normally. All of these changes occur every time the helm is not being directly observed; viewed in the periphery of vision, the changes can be seen, but the moment it is stared it, the changing ceases. If recorded visually, a computer would not recognise there is a helmet at all, instead displaying a static-filled head shape. Constant throughout the changes are the two bottomless black pits for eyes. Pointing lasers into them results in no response at all; it is as if all light is absorbed, and none scattered. Its characteristics are a mixture of both its human host and Pain itself. Strengths: -Intuitive; Highly logical mind leading to clear and decisive deduction. The mental processes occur ridiculously quickly, and "gut instincts" tend to be reasoned judgements that have been processed at insane speeds. [Beckett trait] -Map to Terrain; Can translate mental thoughts and considerations into action remarkably quickly and usually does the right thing at the right time and incredibly quickly. While normally not the first to strike a blow, Dolores will often show decisiveness that belies authority in favour of pragmatism. [Combination of Pain and Beckett traits] -Tolerance; Pain threshold is considerably higher than others', and will usually make Dolores' system more active in trying to fix himself. While in battle, this is negligible, overall, Dolores is able to live through any amount of pain and suffering. [Pain trait] Weaknesses: -Stress; When stressed by multiple mental requirements, is incredibly difficult to work with and is prone to making mistakes. [Beckett trait] -Recklessness; Overreliance on the usually intelligent mind will sometimes lead to reckless and stupid errors of judgement that are generally far greater in terms of repercussions than normal mistakes. [Combination of Pain and Beckett traits] -Underestimation: Often, the high pain threshold leads to a misunderstanding of personal capabilities and may lead to life-threatening situations. While Dolores is not necessarily affected, the human is. If the human's psyche is strong enough at the point of subsidence, Dolores will also collapse as an entity and the human will recover. If not, the EM being will abandon the human and seek out another; whether or not the human recovers is down to chance and is not affected in any way by the reversion. [Pain trait] -Ravenous: When not in combat and given the opportunity to eat, Dolores can quite easily demolish a meal for six on its own through a strange void that opens up in its helmet. This is due to the ridiculous energy required for its body's metabolism.
Weapon 1
Weapon Name: Edged Gauntlets Weapon Description: A pair of indestructible, burnt metal gauntlets that appear never to take damage. It isn't as if you could tell anyway; they appear to be made from scraps of metal plastered one on top of another, edges leading backwards, and each rough edge is sharp enough to cut paper. Both have a chain attached to them which may be attached to a hand-held weapon or left loose. Both also have a number of blades growing from them; they can be flexed and moved by specialised (albeit abnormal to normal human physiology) muscles.
1. Attack Name: Strike Element: Dark Description: A solid punch thrown at a force to reckon with. The gauntlet used appears to give off a black glow as it moves. This attack can be used up to three times in a turn as separate attacks. Damage: Moderate
2. Attack Name: Electrified Blade Throw Element: Elec Description: A 15cm blade from the side of a gauntlet is electrified by an enzyme converting the change in voltage due to ion movement in neurones in contact with the blade. The muscles holding the blade relax and the forearm is whipped across Dolores' front, flicking the blade at an opponent at blisteringly high speed. Another blade is then rapidly regrown to replace the one lost by throwing. Damage: Moderate
Weapon 2
Weapon Name: Malleus Dolor Weapon Description: A 1.3m tall hammer with a head that weighs about twenty kilograms and measures 28cm head to tail and with a square face at 12cm a side, this weapon appears to be made from blackened, solid, indestructible, and somewhat twisted metal and is carried in one hand by Dolores. Similar to Dolores' helm, its surface shape changes whenever it isn't being observed. It has a faint golden-red glow, and on its base, it has a chain that can be hooked and attached to a gauntlet.
1. Attack Name: Slam Element: Null Description: A swing of the hammer in any direction to hit an enemy. Damage: Modest
2. Attack Name: Hammer Throw Element: Null Description: The Malleus Dolor is flung straight and true at an opponent. The chain appears to impossibly lengthen, and upon a sharp pull, the hammer is brought back to Dolores to catch it. The chain appears to contract as this happens. This attack has a range of five metres. The chain is indestructible. Damage: Moderate
CHANGES: Pain Profile From: "However, when viewed in the periphery of vision, Pain seems to change poses dramatically, contorting into positions that strike chords within the psyche of all sentient beings. Appears slightly differently to each and every individual observing it; the twitches and shaking isn't quite the same as seen by you as someone else. When the EM being is visible, recording devices cannot capture it in a single state. A computer will not recognise it as an entity, and two individual, sentient (not necessarily sapient) beings will observe two different interpretations of Pain, and in addition, this changes every time they review the recording." To: "...into positions that would make a direct observer wince in pain. This only occurs when there is no sentient being observing Pain in a visible state. When the EM being is visible, recording devices capture a strange static-filled humanoid shape whose details cannot be perfectly ascertained and motions and movements appear to be mostly normal, though contortions and so on still seem to be captured. However, this static and lack of detail in themselves indicate that it is indeed Pain itself being recorded, suggesting the being is somehow broadcasting an illusory image of morbid things. "
Dolores Profile From: "The head is covered by a twisted helm whose spikes and plating looks different every time an individual directly observes it, though it never seems to change shape normally. No two people see the helm in the same shape. If recorded visually, a computer would not recognise there is a head at all. Two people viewing it would see differently-shaped sets of metal plates, but constant are..." To: "All of these changes occur every time the helm is not being directly observed; viewed in the periphery of vision, the changes can be seen, but the moment it is stared it, the changing ceases. If recorded visually, a computer would not recognise there is a helmet at all, instead displaying a static-filled head shape."
Weapons Strike possible uses in one turn upped to three, cooldown removed. Each strike is a separate attack, and each counts towards the three per turn (as was previously implied). Electrified Blade Throw blade length specified as 0.15m; as a tradeoff for the small size, they are now loosed at high speed. Slam knockback removed. Hammer Throw radius shortened to 5m.
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Beckett and Pain
Human: Matthew Beckett Wizard: Pain Conversion: Dolores Element: Elec Sub Element: Dark Weapon 1: Edged Gauntlets Description: A pair of indestructible, burnt metal gauntlets that appear never to take damage. It isn't as if you could tell anyway; they appear to be made from scraps of metal plastered one on top of another, edges leading backwards, and each rough edge is sharp enough to cut paper. Both have a chain attached to them which may be attached to a hand-held weapon or left loose. Both also have a number of blades growing from them; they can be flexed and moved by specialised (albeit abnormal to normal human physiology) muscles. Weapon 2: Malleus Dolor Description: A 1.3m tall hammer with a head that weighs about twenty kilograms and measures 28cm head to tail and with a square face at 12cm a side, this weapon appears to be made from blackened, solid, indestructible, and somewhat twisted metal and is carried in one hand by Dolores. Similar to Dolores' helm, its surface shape changes whenever it isn't being observed. It has a faint golden-red glow, and on its base, it has a chain that can be hooked and attached to a gauntlet.
Name: Voltaic Body Description: Once per Custom, the user can make one Elec attack inflict Paralysis. LP Cost: 0 Name: Light Defense Description: All Light attacks against the user deal one less damage level than normal to a minimum of Pathetic. LP Cost: 100
Battle Cards
Cannon Air Spread 1 Gatling 1 Mad Vulcan 1 Mini Grenade 1 Power Bomb 1 Sword Long Sword Wide Sword Sync Hook 1 Big Ax 1 Jack Corvus Scythe 1 Fire Dance 1 Fokx-Fu 3 Paralyze Plus Attack +10 Guard Junk Cube 1 Divide Line Moai Fall 1 Mop Lance 1 Heat Upper 1 Fire Bazooka 1 Piranha Kiss 1 Voltic Eye 1 Jumbo Hammer 1 Chain Bubble 1 Plasma Gun 1 Flicker Kick 1 Ice Meteor 1 Jack Corvus Arach Attack 1 Recover 50
Fiennes and Steel
Human: Jack Fiennes Wizard: Steel Conversion: Carius Ekes Element: Null Sub Element: Breaking Weapon 1: Bo Staff Description: A simple, black baton-like device measuring 61cm from head to tail seems rather disappointing until a quick twist snaps out two metal arms from either end, forming a metal bo staff of 1.818m for use offensively and defensively. The ends each have a single, 8mm diameter black hole in them. Weapon 2: Short Blade Description: A dark silver blade of length 0.5m (including the handle) with two wickedly sharp edges, one of which is slightly darker. Its hilt is made from a strange undulating material that comfortably seems to wrap around the fingers rather than the other way round. The pommel is an elaborate affair that prevents the hand from slipping off the handle if the grip fails.
Name: Null Affinity Description: All Null attacks by the user that deal Low or more damage deal one more damage level than normal. Only boosts Standard Cards and Character Weapons. LP Cost: 0 Name: Break Plus Description: Once per Custom, the user can make one attack Break. LP Cost: 100
Battle Cards
Cannon Air Spread 1 Gatling 1 Mad Vulcan 1 Mini Grenade 1 Power Bomb 1 Sword Long Sword Wide Sword Sync Hook 1 Big Ax 1 Scythe 1 Fire Dance 1 Paralyze Plus Attack +10 Guard Junk Cube 1 Divide Line Moai Fall 1 Mop Lance 1 Heat Upper 1 Fire Bazooka 1 Piranha Kiss 1 Voltic Eye 1 Jumbo Hammer 1 Chain Bubble 1 Plasma Gun 1 Flicker Kick 1 Ice Meteor 1 Arach Attack 1 Recover 50
Ok then, a few things to address, though the profile is good to go. First off you don't have to re post the whole profile each time your revise it, just editing the first post is fine, that's where we'd look first anyways.
The revisions to it's appearance look good, if I'm reading it all correctly.
If I can get you to change attacks to actions in the description of strike as a technicality, that'd be best.
And lastly I should not any projectile smaller than .5m is not worth drawbacks at all. Besides this though I've no reason not to allow the knife to be flung quickly, so long as it's speed is within reason. I'd imagine not quite so fast as a bullet and still very detectable by the human eye.
Being these are all nit picks, this is good to go by me.
Approved. You can pick up Elemental Benefits and post the profile as a whole in the PC profiles section... once Beckett himself see's another approval. I think A-Coya was still waiting for you to tone down the religious parts in it or clarify something or another ;>_>
Ace Program Element: Electric Description: User gains a big spike on each shoulder. The user's helmet also gains a spike that looks much like a horn. Vibrant Noise: User color theme becomes yellow. Their right arm turns black, and their left turns white. Form Abilities: Standard cards with Elec as their Main Element gain a Low damage boost, while a Standard card's Sub Element with Elec gains a Pitiful boost. Twice per custom, the user may add a one use Paralysis effect on one of their Sword cards. Only affects 2 swords. Vibrant Noise Ability: The user gains a Tag Slot in their Custom to load another card. The Tagged Card must be declared as a pair with one other card in your Custom, and can only be used in a chain with the selected card. The Tagged Card cannot be used by itself under any circumstances. Multi Use cards in the Tag Slot become One Use. Color Out Weapon: Rocket Knuckle The user launches their right hand like a rocket. The fist extends out 5 meters before returning back to the user. This attack overrides any weapon that is currently in that user's hand. Deals Low Elec damage. Paralyzes for the first hit of a custom only.
Joker Program Element: Breaking Description: User gains a roman style helmet and plated style shoulder pads. Vibrant Noise: Helmet, shoulder armor and other main armor pieces turn gold or have the appearance of gold. The rest turns purple. Also gains gold plated armor on the rest of body. Form Out Abilities: Standard cards with Break or Summon as the main element gain Pitiful damage, while Standard cards with the same elements as a Sub Element gain Pathetic damage. Vibrant Noise Ability: Gladiator Armor: All attacks that hit are reduced by pitiful to a minimum of pathetic. Color Out Weapon: Break Army: A row of troops appear, the row having 3 troops, which charge straight at individual targets as the user sees fit in an formation or strategy(three way attack, straight out charge etc). Each little troop deals low damage. Troops are destructible, have low health and are Breaking element. At the end of the attack, all surviving soldiers disappear.
Favorites: Silver Meteor, Striker Edge, Gatling 3, Anti Sword
Ability Waves
Null Affinity Sword Affinity HP +500
Fuoco Form
Ace Program Element: Fire Description: The user gains spikes straight up. In the center of their chest they gain a colorless diamond. Vibrant Noise: The user's armor turns red and the diamond turns the main color of the user. Form Abilities: Super armor Vibrant Noise Ability: Another Side (Side Select) Color Out Weapon: Synchro The user gains an extra slot in their custom. In this slot they can slot in an fire element card. This card must be multi-use and then is synched with the user. The user gains the indication of the weapon around their wrist. If the weapon is a sword card it appears across their back. This card can be used through out the custom. The user uses the card the same as they normally would; however, this card can be unequipped and used again. The card slotted in has its damage reduced by one level to a minimum of pathetic. Cards with pathetic default damage can not be used. If the weapon causes a status effect (ie: paralyze or blind) it only affects the first use of the weapon..
Cannon PlusCannon PlasmaGun1 Air Spread IceMeteor1 Sword Wide Sword Long Sword PowerBomb1 SyncHook1 RadarMissile1 FireBazooka1 ChainBubble1 JumboHammer1 FlickerKick1 BigAx1 JunkCube1 MoaiFall1 Barrier Power Song Paralyze Plus x2 Attack +10 Guard ====Purchases/Acquisitions==== Berserk Sword3 Tidal Edge Voltic Eye2 Voltic Eye3 Stun Knuckle Recover 150 Drill Arm2 Noise Wizard 1 Buki 2 Break Sabre Silver Meteor Striker Edge Radar Missile3 Gatling3 Cycle 2+ Chaos Card x2 AntiSword Fokx Fu 1 Brave Sword3 Cancer Bubble Bombalizer Warrior Soul Piranha Kiss3 Big Drop1 Green Ink Ice Spin1 Kung Foo Kid White Meteor Quake Song Pegasus Magic Black Hole 2 Winy Attack 2 Rogue Plesio Surf Buki 3 Flash Strike 3 Invisible Recover 300 Guard Recover 100 Barrier 100 Guardian
Quotes from 'Round the Board
Omega: SFRP, the only place you can deny Cancer.
Ryuu: I beat up babies by punching pregnant women. I tie the tails of animals together to make improvised nunchucks that I dispose of in a wood chipper after each use. I burn down cities for fuel to keep trees warm in the fire.
Ryuu: The three P's this place runs on: Patience, pricks, and pride.
Ryuu: You MAY not like them, but some people enjoy puns. ANGUS what I'm one of those people. Is this a NIGHTMARE for you? Are you oKAI? Are these puns getting TEDDIEous? I'll stop KAZUMI-n a lot to me. Nah I'm just JOSHING. That didn't work, no DAISUKE?
Ryuu and/or Van: That was my favorite pun, ANGUS what I'm using it. Yes that was totally PUNintentional. We better stop or we'll give him NIGHTMARES. AY,LEX stop before Torch really goes insane. U-B making too many puns and E-B freaking out over them. True, this could be a MAJOR problem. Aw, MAN,AM-I gonna regret this? ZUHAL had us worried. If anyone else had made that pun I would be pissed, but it's ok because ATRUS you. This list of puns truly is a COLOSSUS. I hope you MAY forgive me. ANGUS I'll go post now. Well, Kira's and trouble. I'll hafta DEFENDER at all costs. You know that list is just so great, I think I'll CELLION eBay. COLOSSUS if you need anything. Torchman: *goes to corner, assumes the fetal position and rocks back and forth in insanity*
Van:This ain't Yu-gi-oh, you don't automatically lose when you run out of cards. Never running out helps though.
Leo Kingdom Main Element: Fire Sub Element: Breaking Abilities: - Fire Affinity - Super Armor - Para Body - Poison Body
Tribe On
Wood Ninja Main Element: Wood Sub Element: Shadow Abilities: Body Double:Once per custom, user may replace themselves with a dummy to negate a single hit, and warp in front of the foe to slash at them with a shinai for Moderate Wood/Shadow damage. Wood +20: All Wood Battle Cards gain a Pitiful damage boost. Card Charge- Auto-Lock: User can charge an unused Standard Card without attacking to warp in front of the foe the next turn and attack with that Card. This may only be used once per custom.
Noise
Name: Joker Progream Description: Allows the user to harness the power of Noise! LP Cost: 0
Name: Ace Program Description: Allows the user to harness the power of Noise! LP Cost: 0
Noise Form: Auriga Noise
Battle Cards
Cannon Air Spread Gatling 1 Mad Vulcan 1 Mini Grenade 1 Power Bomb 1 Sword Long Sword Wide Sword Sync Hook 1 Big Ax 1 Scythe 1 Paralyze Plus Attack +10 Guard *2 Junk Cube 1 Divide Line Moai Fall 1 *2 Mop Lance 1 Heat Upper 1 Fire Bazooka 1 Fire Dance 1 Piranha Kiss 1 Voltic Eye 1 Jumbo Hammer 1 Chain Bubble 1 Plasma Shot 1 Flicker Kick 1 Ice Meteor 1 Arach Attack 1 Recovery 50 ----------------- Drill Arm 1*2 Radar Missle 1 Windy Attack 1 Skull Arrow 1 Buki Hammer 1 Shark Attack 1 Noise Wizard 1 Mini Grenade 2 Bushido 2 Beserk Sword 2 Brave Sword 2 Buzz Saw 2 Gaitling Gun 2 Plasma Gun 2 Dance Fire 2 x2 Boo Hat 2 Needle Attack 2 Gatling Gun 3 x2 Drill Arm 3 Shuriken 3 x2 Flash Strike 3 Power Bomb 3 Mech Flame 3 Pollen Shot 3 Berserk Sword 3 Heavy Cannon Ice Grenade Blue Ink Poison Knuckle Typhoon Dance Blazing Edge Tidal Edge Striker Edge Arbo Edge Break Sabre Guardian x2 Recovery 100 Recovery 150 Recovery 300 Barrier 100 Anti Sword Holy Panel ------------------ Queen Ophiuca Crown Thunder Phantom Black General Auriga Apollo Flame Spade Magnes Dia Iceburn Jack Corvus SSRockman Ryuu Sigma Acid Arrest Pegasus Magic [May] Leo Kingdon EX [Angus] ------------------ Dopple Mirror Gemini Thunder ------------------ Fighter Sword 1 Destroy Upper Unless stated there is only one copy of the card
Shared Ability Waves
Name: Side Select Description: The user may slot in one extra Card per Custom as long as this Ability Wave is equipped. LP Cost: 300
Name: Quick Load Description: The loading period of the user's first Custom is skipped (A turn does not need to go by before using cards). ONLY applies to the first Custom of a battle. LP Cost: 50
Name: HP +200 Description: The user's health is boosted by an Immense amount while this Ability Wave is equipped. LP Cost: 140
HP +500 Description: The user's health is boosted by an Outstanding amount while this Ability Wave is equipped. LP Cost: 320
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