| Student Vigilants; Taking matters into their own hands.... | |
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| tashfin64 | Jun 21 2012, 09:45 PM Post #1 |
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"Ma'am, I have asked you once, I will NOT repeat myself. Where are you hiding it?" "And my answer is as clear as it was before. I do not know where it is." There was a sickening sound of a taser, and then a dropping body. The footsteps seemed to work it's way to Leroy's class. An eerie silence followed, then "THUD THUD THUD" Leroy cast a glance at his frightened teacher, pitying the old lady who he had loathed most of his year. Wearily, she made her to the door, checked that all her 8th graders were cooped in a corner where they weren't visible, and then slowly opened the door. "Ma-May I help you s-sir?" The oddly dressed soldier didn't even bother acknowledging here, but instead, pulled out his radar and started scanning the room. Leroy's eyes had only wondered a second away to get a good look at the soldier when he realized that his teacher, Mrs. Rosmertta, her face had the defiant look of a lion. Slowly she crept her way to her filing cabinet and pulled on the bottom-most drawer, the one which Leroy noticed she never opened. As she did, it let out a terrible groan. Instinctively, the soldier pulled out his gun and pointed it straight at her, but she had already turned around with a smug expression. In her hands was the most advanced looking laser gun Leroy had ever seen. he had to admit; for an old lady; she had style. "Sonny, I have more than 50 years on you, and my 50 years of experience is telling me that you should drop your gun." "Tell me where the damned headquarters are!" "Drop your weapon or this granny will have to take you down!" "Is that a threat? An old hag like you is gonna take an soldier down like me?" She paused for a second, and then in a malicious tone she said, "As a matter of fact, yes." Leroy knew trouble when he saw it, and before anybody could stop him, he emerged from behind a desk and charged full speed at the soldier, catching him by surprise. His gun missed inches from Mrs. Rosmertta's head, but that didn't seem to discourage her. "Everybody, run!" she screamed. But before anybody could do anything, Leroy got hit in the spine with the butt of the soldiers gun and was pointing it at her. The atmosphere tensed for a second, but that was all Leroy needed as he kicked the soldier in the kneecap, attempting to cause his bullet to fly astray. But it didn't. It hit the gun, square in the power source. Mrs. Rosmertta gave one look of despair to her students. Then, the room exploded. Everything was thrown back from Mrs. Rosmertta position. A searing white flash seemed to linger for the painful moments of the explosion. But, just as quickly as it came, it had gone. Leroy and the Soldier were knocked under a couple of desks, but with his vision blurred, all Leroy could see is Mrs. Rosmertta's last petrified look at him, and the screams of fear and shuffling of feet. All his senses tingling with disbelief and numbness, he looked to his right and found the soldier's forehead bleeding, apparently unconscious. He took his chance of escape immediately, and was soon limping towards the door when he heard a moan from behind. Instantly anger streamed through his blood and before he knew it, he was towering over the soldier's injured body, holding the taser. "Before a shock you, who sent you here?" The soldier meekly grinned, and than spat blood on the floor. In a fading whisper, he said "It's time the government took a step down. Think of us as the Death Eaters, and my leader is Voldemort, you stupid kid." He cackled at his own joke. Leroy cut him short. There was the familiar shocking sound, and then the soldier's body went limp again. |
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| cmarrin1 | Jun 22 2012, 08:23 AM Post #2 |
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Pretty good, but at first I didn't really understand what was going on. Although later, I managed to piece it together. Maybe you could describe the setting better? Overall, it was pretty good. |
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| Chris | Jun 22 2012, 08:35 PM Post #3 |
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Way to hard to follow |
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| tashfin64 | Aug 14 2012, 08:41 PM Post #4 |
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Nice spoiler btw. And yeah, I read it myself and found it really bad. I'm scraping the idea, but I might have another about pirates.... |
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