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The History Of Karon
Topic Started: Mar 20 2013, 05:52 PM (448 Views)
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Prologue
Setting: Planet Vegeta

We see the landscape of Planet Vegeta, as we then see a Saiyan Attack Pod landing on the planet. The door slowly opens up as a severely injured Bardock falls out of the pod. Bleeding profusely he refuses to stay down, he stands up & starts to fly to a bar to warn the rest of his race.

Meanwhile at the Saiyan castle

Unnamed Saiyan: King Vegeta, we have some news for you. Paragus' son Broly, was born with a power level of 10, 000 he's even stronger than you!

King Vegeta looks down at the Saiyan, pondering what his course of action should be, until he comes up with a decision. He stands up, surveying the kneeling saiyan.

King Vegeta: The boy is too dangerous! Who will know what could happen in the future...with power like that?! He shall be sentenced to death...immediatly!! My mind will NOT be changed on this!!

The saiyan nods his head, and turns to go but the door bursts open as Paragus himself runs into the thrown room, and kneels at King Vegeta's throne.

Paragus: King Vegeta please don't kill my son!! He can be used later on to assist Prince Vegeta! Broly will be an immense use to the royal family.

King Vegeta motions to the guards as they proceed to grab Paragus & hold him as King Vegeta gets up, throwing his cape behind him he walks forwards and places his outstretched hand in front of Paragus' stomach.

King Vegeta: NO!! Your son will die...my word is final!! And...I don't like arguments! YOU'LL DIE WITH HIM!!

King Vegeta then powers up & throws an Execution Beam straight into Paragus' stomach as he flies backwards & crumples in a heap, still alive but very badly injured!

King Vegeta: Now that he's been taken care of, kill his son & throw out the trash!! I have better things to do, like regain my son!

Meanwhile In The Saiyan Bar

We see a bunch of Saiyans relaxing, laughing, some are even sparring, however when the doors are burst open every head turns to look at a very bloody Bardock as he runs into the bar.

Bardock: Listen to me my fellow Saiyans!! Soon enough Frieza will have no more need for us, & will proceed to attack us...with the ultimate fatality being blowing up our dear planet!! I'm recruiting an army of us who will help me defeat Frieza...and take back our planet & our honor!!

The rest of the Saiyans look at Bardock for a second, before everyone of them burst out laughing at Bardock, who just turns on his heel and runs back out of the bar.

Meanwhile in the infirmary

Unnamed Saiyan 2: Look at this kid! Broly was born with a power level of 10, 000...TEN THOUSAND that's on par with Bardock!! He's a lucky one he is!

Unnamed Saiyan 3: Broly makes Bardock's son look weak! With a power level of only 2, I will say however he has the heart of a saiyan!! Just look at him cry! You go kid!

Unnamed Saiyan 2: Look at this! Bardock's son is making Broly cry!

Both of the saiyans laugh before walking out of the infirmary, in the dead of night Broly wakes up and cries out in pain, as a knife is thrust into his stomach. Somehow Broly survives the attack and is thrown into the garbage with his father. Bardock is then seen running to the infirmary as he sees Kakarot's ship being sent to Earth.

Bardock: Kakarot I hope that if I don't finish my job here, that someday you will take Frieza down...my son!

Meanwhile On Frieza's Ship

We see Frieza standing in his throne, across from King Vegeta, behind Frieza are two of his henchman, a very handsome blue alien with long green hair, tied back in a ponytail. His name is Zarbon, the other is a big fat pink spiky alien, this one is named Dodoria. Both of the henchman are wearing Saiyan armour, no doubt provided to Frieza's army by King Vegeta himself!

King Vegeta: Its time Frieza! The saiyan race are done taking your orders! Under my rule we will go back to our old ways!! We've tolerated your abuse long enough! In addition to that I WILL be getting my son back...JUST TRY TO STOP ME FRIEZA!!!

With that Bardock flies towards Frieza, and throws a few punches, all of which Frieza effortlessly dodges, as King Vegeta is tired, gasping for breath Frieza smirks.

Frieza: Its time to die now monkey...

With that Frieza jumps in the air & does a spinning uppercut, killing King Vegeta in a single hit! His body falls down, as right away his eyes blanken. Both Dodoria and Zarbon look a little scared at how easily their master had taken care of King Vegeta, secretly hoping that one day that wouldn't be them.

Frieza: Let this be known to anyone that dare to challenge the mighty Frieza!

Suddenly an explosion is heard as the ship slightly shakes. Zarbon and Dodoria run to the window as they look out to see Bardock flying towards the ship in a blind rage.

Frieza: What the heck was that?! Zarbon?

Zarbon: It was that saiyan Bardock sir, somehow he survived the attack by Dodoria!

Frieza chuckles as Dodoria looks slightly scared at what his potential punishment will be for failing to kill, a low class monkey.

Frieza: Never send a minion to do a master's job!

Bardock: FRIEZA!!!

The doors to the ship open as a bunch of members of Frieza's army fly out of it to ambush Bardock. Bardock attacks a few and keeps flying, as he seems like a man possessed. Eventually a bunch of the army surround him, only for him to channel his energy & push them all away.

Bardock: FRIEZA!!

As he gets closer to the ship, Frieza's throne floats through the open door as he stands up, glaring down at Bardock, a slight smirk on his face.

Frieza: Oh look! This is the lonely saiyan that has enough guts to confront me?! I've already taken down one of you filthy monkeys...NOW FOR YOUR RACE!!

Bardock laughs as he charges up his Final Spirit Cannon

Bardock: For years the Saiyans have toiled under you, conquering planets for you, with the gift of the Kanassan's I have forseen the untimely death of my species...mark my words Frieza I...WILL...CHANGE THE FUTURE!! TAKE THIS!!

With that Bardock throws the Final Spirit Cannon, only for Frieza to raise a finger as a Death Ball begins to form, Frieza starts laughing maniacally as he proceeds to throw the death ball, which consumes the Final Spirit Cannon and plunges towards the planet, killing almost all of his guards as well.

Bardock telepathically to Kakarot: This is it for me son...I have failed! Avenge the Saiyans...defeat Frieza...Goodbye...my son!

The death ball then hits the planet causing it to explode, as Frieza laughs even more maniacally. eventually we see the space pod containing Kakarot as he wakes up...and proceeds to cry. The inside of a much bigger ship is seen as we see some henchman at computers.

Unnamed Henchman: Master Cooler, it seems one saiyan got away! He's heading towards Earth...do you want us to stop him now?

Cooler comes into view, swirling a glass of wine around, before taking a sip. He laughs in a soft low tone.

Cooler: No! This is Frieza's mistake we'll let him handle this...

Meanwhile On Earth

The saiyan attack ball then lands on the planet Earth as we see an old man coming to investigate the source of the crater, he finds the small boy as he takes him out of the pod...only to receive a punch to the face.

Grandpa Gohan: Damn your a feisty kid!! I think I'll call you...Goku!!

Goku continues to punch at Grandpa Gohan, until he accidentally drops him and Goku hits his head on a rock, suffering amnesia.

Announcer: There you have it!! The story has started to come together...what became of Paragus & Broly?! What will happen to Goku?! How will Frieza fix his error?! For the answers to these and more...tune into the next episode of DRAGON BALL Z!!

Power Levels
Bardock: 10, 000
King Vegeta: 10, 500
Broly: 10, 000
Paragus: 7, 000
Frieza: 20, 000
Dodoria: 13, 000
Zarbon: 17, 000
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Karon's History Part 2
Flashback

We see Karon once again pushing himself to Super Saiyan, however each time when it looks as he'll finally accomplish it he drops out of the form. Eventually Karon gives up for the time being and thinks of what he's lost as he drops to his knees, shedding some more tears for the ones he cared about.

Karon: You will all be avenged!! I swear it! Frieza will pay for what he has done, I vow I will NOT let a single member of his army, including the Ginyu Force, if they are summoned...TO LIVE!!

Karon's aura suddenly explodes, as the planet starts to shake, meanwhile rocks around Karon start to rise into the air as the wind also picks up, blowing Karon's hair & clothes.

Karon: NOMORE SAIYAN BLOOD...SHALL BE SHED!!! FRIEZA...YOU WILL BE MINE!!!

Karon's rage takes over his body as a bright flash of gold overtakes the scene for a few seconds, when it fades Karon is slightly more muscular, but the most drastic changes are in his hair, which is now golden and his eyes which have become teal!

Karon: I've done it!! I have ascended!! Bardock would be so happy for me! Its a shame he had to die, so that I could achieve this breakthrough!!

Karon looks around Planet Shikk as there really isn't all that much at the moment. His scouter beeps, revealing a power level causing Karon to smirk as its headed his way...the perfect opportunity to test his new powers!

Karon: So the reports were right, there are some worthless beings on this planet!! Too bad that I have to conquer your planet!!

Shikkian: You can try saiyan, many before you have tried!! All have been defeated!! Wait...I sense something off about you...

Karon laughs as he hovers up in the air with his foot held back, meanwhile the Shikkian looks on nervously wondering what he'll do.

Karon: Oh really better men have tried?! I am a saiyan elite!! Trained by my master, Bardock! I NEVER fail!! And that something off your sensing, is either one of two things...the fact that I have just lost everything I cared about, or...I'M A SUPER SAIYAN!! NOW TAKE THIS!!! I will warn you however that NO ONE has been able to survive this attack...of my creation!!!

Karon raises up a hand pointing at the warrior, before raising his other hand behind him, spreading the fingers on both hands as a large beam of fire forms.

Karon: DUSSENDOW!!

Karon fires the beam at the warrior, as he jumps over it, only for Karon to direct the beam upwards, incinerating the warrior. The last thing we hear is his last dying scream!! Karon laughs as the charred body of the warrior hits the planet with a soft thud.

Karon: One down, now its time to find the rest of this worthless race!!

Karon flies off to conquer the rest of the planet and he does so, within the day. He flies back to his ship Karon presses a button on his remote as the ship's door slowly opens up with a soft whoosh. Karon sets the coordinates to take him back to Frieza's ship as he drops out of Super Saiyan, he doesn't want Frieza or his warriors to know his only trump card against them!!

Karon: Soon it shall be done, soon enough you will all be avenged!! Soon Frieza...will be nomore!!

End Of Flashback

We then see the inside of the ship as everyone is sitting around Karon, intently listening to his story, when he's finished telling his story everyone looks shocked that he could have had such a bad life.


Goku: I'm sorry Karon, I know it must be hard having to live your life without the ones you care about there for you!!

Bardock puts a hand on his son, the other he puts on Karon as he pats Karon warmly on the shoulder. Karon smiles warmly at Bardock, his mentor.

Bardock: Karon I must talk with you later, in your quarters however now is not the time!! Now its time for all of us to train!!

Karon stands up stretching his legs, as a smile comes over his face, he knows just who he wants to face who as Karon nods his head to Bardock.

Karon: Don't worry Bardock there will be plenty of time for that, however first I want us to divide into pairs for our training, we will be starting at 20 times Earth's Gravity!!

Tien: Your crazy Karon!! I mean only you, Bardock and Goku have trained at 20 times gravity!! How are the rest of us going to get used to it?!

Karon teleports behind Tien and backhands him, sending him flying into the wall of the ship, he slides down the wall into a heap before getting back up.

Karon: Tien shut up!! We MUST train this hard right from the start because Frieza and his minions won't be pushovers!! Training at 100 times gravity will help us down the line, however we must work our way up to the 100 times...now if there are nomore interruptions!!

Karon casts a death glare around the room, as everyone except Turles, Bardock and Goku looks down at their feet. The 3 full blooded saiyans on the other hand look ready to go.

Karon: Now, Turles you will be fighting Tien...

Goku: But Karon I wanted to take on Turles!!

Karon quickly teleports and charging up some ki in his hand he punches Goku in the gut, who crumples to a heap, surprisingly Bardock lets it go, as he understands why Karon did that.

Karon: You interrupt me one more time Kakarot and it will be your death!! Your father won't help you because he understands the punishment that you must go through for not showing the proper respect to those who are higher than you!! Now...as I was saying!! Turles, you will instead fight Goku, but be warned killing will NOT be tolerated!! Gohan you will fight Tien, which just leaves Bardock...and myself!!

Bardock and Karon smile at eachother, as they haven't had the opportunity to test their skills against eachother in a long time now.

Karon: You think you can handle this old man?

Bardock: Oh I might be old Karon, but I bet I can still kick your butt!!

Karon: Don't worry I'm sure there will be a bed for you to rest up on after you get the beating of a lifetime!!

Karon laughs as he walks over to the controls, Karon presses the button to set the gravity for 20 times Earth's normal gravity. The effects are felt instantly as everyone except Bardock, Karon and Turles are struggling.

Turles flies at Goku and swats him out of the way as Turles goes immediately on the offensive, Goku is still having trouble getting used to the gravity as Gohan and Tien can barely move. Meanwhile Bardock and Karon are moving at lightning speed's barely visible as their strikes are the only thing you can hear. Tien and Gohan are finally getting used to the gravity as they start, Goku is the fastest to get used to the gravity as he quickly goes on the offensive, however Turles, being the older saiyan still has more experience as he quickly phases behind Goku and hits him in the back with a finger beam, sending Goku into the ground. Meanwhile Gohan seems to be gaining the edge against Tien, his saiyan heritage no doubt helping him to adjust to the gravity better than Tien.

Gohan: Wow your doing really good Mr. Tien!!

Tien smiles at Gohan as he goes to punch Gohan, only for him to phase behind Tien and spin kick him, sending him flying into the wall. Tien quickly recovers and flies back at Gohan, catching him offguard with an uppcercut right to the jaw.

Karon: Alright boys are we ready to kick it up a notch?

Everyone nods, however Karon smiles at each warrior as he must first test them.

Karon: Before we go on though I must first test you to see if your ready for this next stage, now I want all of you to come at me...if you manage to defeat me, or even wound me you are ready!

All of the fighters nod as they fly at Karon, Gohan quickly gets a hit in as he jumps for joy, only to be pounded on mercilessly by Karon, Goku tries to strike Karon only for him to phase out and fire a Dussendow at Goku, setting him on fire. Turles also manages to strike Karon, as he is spared the beating. Bardock is likewise spared the beating after hitting Karon, although its more out of respect than anything.

Karon: Now that just leaves...Tien!!

Tien rushes at Karon, only for him to phase backwards and quickly rush at Tien as he starts to pound into him with punches and kicks, each one stronger than the last as finally, Tien passes out.

Karon: He wasn't ready, Kakarot take Tien to the healing chambers, you will put him in the tank and then heal yourself too for good measure!! Gohan and the rest of us will move on to the next stage...after a gift from Turles.

Goku nods his head as he walks over to Tien and flies with him slung over his shoulder to the healing tanks. Karon nods his head to Turles who pulls out four pieces of fruit. Gohan recognizes the fruit, as the one that Turles ate when he fought his father!! Fruit from the Tree Of Might!! Turles passes around the fruit as the three elder saiyans all eat theirs, instantly feeling a new rush of energy.

Karon: Gohan I know why your hesitating but we will need all the help we can get, Turles here has offered the help of the fruit he's saved to further increase our power!! You want to be strong enough to protect the Earth don't you?

Gohan: Yes Mr. Karon!!

Karon: Then you must eat the fruit, don't worry nothing bad will happen to you!! It will increase your power dramatically to the point that you might even become stronger than your dad, who knows you could even close in on one of us!!

Gohan looks shocked, yet somewhat excited as he eats the fruit. A smile crosses his face when he instantly feels the new surge of energy he gains!

Narrarator: What's awaiting the team on Planet Namek? Will Frieza find the Dragonballs? Will Goku and Tien pass to the next level? For these answers and more tune into the next episode of Dragonball Z!!


Power Levels
Karon: 60,000
Karon (After Fruit): 100,000
Gohan: 20,000
Gohan (After Eating Fruit): 60,000
Turles: 40,000
Turles (After Fruit): 80,000
Bardock: 50,000
Bardock (After Fruit): 90,000
Goku: 30,000
Tien: 25,000
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Halfway To Namek

We see the training station as Goku is watching Gohan fighting Turles, meanwhile Karon spars with Bardock, eventually he sighs before going downstairs to check on Tien.

Goku: How can I join them?! I'm Earth's protector I need to get stronger to defeat Frieza!! However both Karon and my father want to kill him, after all they've had personal experiences with Frieza, maybe its best to just leave him to them!

Meanwhile back on the main floor we see the four saiyans still training, eventually they stop and all head downstairs to grab something to eat.

Karon: Good job guys!! I can feel you getting even stronger Bardock! If we keep this up, we might be able to beat Frieza!

Gohan: What about me Mr Karon?

Karon laughs as he pats Gohan on the head, Gohan looking up at him, and smiling a warm smile.

Karon: You? Well Gohan I was just about to say that you've become even stronger than your dad! Which is actually my next plan, I want to put you in a spar against your father!! Don't worry if either one of you gets injured too badly we can always heal you!

Karon leads the way into the kitchen and sits down at the head of the long table, Bardock sits down to Karon's left, as Turles sits down to Karon's right. Gohan is just about to sit down when Karon gestures to him to approach him.

Karon: Gohan my boy, can you go get your father? Since he's behind all of us I thought I'd give him a little present now...trust me he'll need it later!

Gohan: Yes Mr. Karon I'll be right back!!

Gohan flies out of the room and finds his dad still in the healing room, he doesn't seem too happy that he's finally one of the weakest on the team! He's so used to being the strongest, that finally being one of the weakest is so new to him, he doesn't know how to cope.

Gohan: Daddy, we're going to eat now! Mr. Karon wanted you to come into the kitchen! He also says that he has a present for you.

Goku: Alright Gohan I'll be there soon!!

Gohan nods his head and walks out of the room, when he notices Gohan is gone he punches the wall of the ship, creating a dent in the wall. The sound of the noise however awakens Tien who is now fully healed as the water in the tank starts to drain.

Tien: Hey Goku so what did I miss? Thanks for healing me up by the way!

Goku smiles at his good friend as he walks over and presses a button on the console, opening up the tank so he can get out.

Goku: No problem buddy!! I have to get going though Karon wants me in the kitchen, you should come too when your ready!! Your clothes are in the locker against the wall!

With that Goku flies out of the room towards the kitchen, Tien hurries up and gets changed before he too flies off towards the kitchen where he sees everyone else seated at the table.

Karon: Ah good to see your finally awake Tien! We've been waiting for you so sit down, and then we can start eating!! I know that some of you are already hungry but since we've still got a bunch of the fruit, we'll each have three pieces!! Trust me, we'll need all the help we can get against Frieza!

Everyone nods their heads as Tien sits down, Turles stands up and phases over to get the fruits, he then phases back as he puts 3 pieces of fruit in front of everyone, before sitting back down at his seat.

Karon: Now before we eat everyone I'd just like to inform you that after our meal, we will be going to our quarters for some time to ourselves!! Bardock I want to see you in my quarters before you report back to yours however!

Bardock nods his head and picks up his fruit, but before he can eat it Karon speaks up again.

Karon: I also wanted to inform you all that after we get the rest periods we will all go back to training, except this time the gravity will be cranked up to fifty times Earth's!!

Everyone nods their heads before finally starting to eat their fruits. After they are finished they all head in different directions, Karon gets back to his quarters first and sits down behind his desk. A soft knock is heard before the door slides upwards as Bardock walks in.

Bardock: Now Karon I know that you and I both have bad experiences with Frieza, however I want to be the one to kill him!! If not we can always work together to take him down!

Karon laughs as he expected this was what Bardock wanted to talk to him about. Karon leans back in his chair, putting his feet up on the desk.

Karon: Now Bardock I just want to thank you for helping me through all this, however you see that part doesn't fit into my plans!! I will be the one to kill Frieza!! He might have destroyed our race...however he killed my pregnant wife!! You lost your friends because of Dodoria...I lost my FAMILY!!

At being denied what he thinks he rightfully deserves Bardock quickly turns Super Saiyan, somewhat shocking Karon who proceeds to laugh it off before standing up slowly.

Karon: Really Bardock, I respect you but are you sure this is what you want? Because if it is...

Karon puts his arms out to the side and charges up his energy, its so much it causes the ship to slightly shake as his hair turns gold, however instead of stopping it grows a little longer as well as becomes a bit spikier,, meanwhile small crackles of electricity are seen around Karon's body as Bardock looks on in shock. Seeing the shocked look on Bardock's face Karon tilts his head back and lets out an icy laugh, causing the hairs on Bardock's neck to stand up slightly.

Bardock: What the?! What have you done Karon?!

Before he can answer the door opens as everyone else runs in, before getting blown backwards out of the door by Karon's power. They pick themselves up before heading back in, the other saiyans staring in shock at Karon. Karon extends his arms to the side and bows slightly, a cocky smirk on his face.

Karon: To answer your question Bardock, I have asceneded beyond a Super Saiyan!! I have kicked it up to the next level! This level that you see me in now, is known as a Super Saiyan 2!! I've been able to transform like this for awhile now, I wanted to show you this personally!!

Karon stands up straight smiling at Bardock, who recovers from his shock and walks up to Karon before putting a hand on his student's shoulder.

Bardock: Fine Karon, you win!! You've proven to me that you will be the one to destroy Frieza! However I want to fight him first!

Karon backs up, smiling at Bardock who smiles back warmly at him, Goku and Gohan finally get over their initial shock too as Turles seems to be the only one who isn't shocked in the least by the new unveiled transformation.

Karon: Fine Bardock, I will let you fight Frieza first, however if it looks like you start to struggle...and you will! I'm taking over!

Bardock and Karon nod their heads and shake hands as everyone looks on. Suddenly the ship's alarm starts beeping as Karon phases to the main floor.

Karon: Crap!! We've entered a magnetic storm! The only way for you guys to survive is to stay downstairs, Bardock, Turles and myself can handle this gravity!!

Suddenly the gravity shifts to 100 times Earth's as everyone except the 3 elder saiyans falls to the ground, with a loud thud. Turles picks up Tien and phases downstairs, meanwhile Bardock picks up his son, and grandson and copies Turles, before phasing back upstairs to try to weather the storm!!

Narrarator: Oh no!! Our heroes have just been dealt a possible death!! What will happen? How soon will they get to Planet Namek? Will Super Saiyan 2 Karon be able to beat Frieza? For the answers to these questions and more...tune into the next episode of Dragonball Z!!





Power Levels
Karon (After dinner)-400,000
Karon (Super Saiyan 2)-40,000,000
Gohan (After Fruit)-90,000
Bardock (After Fruit)-90,300
Bardock (Super Saiyan)-9,030,000
Goku (After Fruit)- 60,000
Tien (After Fruit)-50,000
Turles (After Fruit)-24,000,000
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