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The Imperial Soljit Republic
Topic Started: Mar 26 2014, 03:40 PM (116 Views)
Sol Dianar Turissmont
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-Basics-
Name of Nation:The Imperial Soljit Republic
Type of Government:Constitutional Monarchy
Political Leaders: The ruling family and the three house leaders

Population: 31,743,591,286,047,529(last census
Population Composition (the numbers or percentiles of various species in your borders as citizens):40%Soldiaura, 25%Cernine, 20%Mutherian, 10%Human, 5%other
Unique Species: (A biological summary of the species native to your nation, add more as you add more species to your nation through whatever means you use.) Not availible

Major Cultures: bowing is a greeting, handshakes are for friends and equals, sharing is a meh, share what you like, and kneeling is submittance. The clothing worn is either casual shirts and pants which you will see cernines, humans, and most minorities, Dress and tuxedo,which everyone wears in military style, or fancy picture/occasion style. Theres a futuristic robe style clothing, which this kind of clothing mainly soldiaura and mutherians wear usually. The dinnertabble also changes wherever in the isr you go. Soldiauras, humans and most minorities eat at a table like im pretty sure alot of other cultures do. Cernines eat sitting on the floor with a table mat to eat off of. And mutherians eat upsidedown from a nectar container, because thats what they like to do besides eat your gardens all day.
Major Religions: (How many virgins are sacrificed to the Great Mighty MonkeyLord of Tau Ceti V? Why are they sacrificed? Etc, but suiting your religion(s) obviously.)Soljit transcendentalism

Civil Service: (Healthcare! Orphanages! Welfare! All the fun things to burn! How much of that does your government support with tax dollars?) It puts a reasonable amount of tax jits in, but we openly put in volunteers for fire departmants, Orphanages, home building for the poor, and organized public events. Welfare is also mailed by volunteers.
Policing: (Describe how policing works in your nation, whether there are simple slaps on the wrist or if public floggings are regular. Also how much of a panopticon your nation is; are there secret police watching the police while they watch the people?)only one secret military police, the rest are like the high tech police youd see in the future with their fabcy suits and neat looking cars that they drive in. Its not easy becoming a policeman in the ISR though as the academy for it is brutal.
Justice: (Describe your judicial system works, such as whether you have juries or not or if you let local lords handle all matters of justice.)lower level, courts are mainly jury only unless in the mutherian areas, thats where a semi artificial intelligence jury of sorts, intermediate is a jurry and judge whicch is a decent education level, where a degree in law is required to serve upon, supreme is a team of judges and the supreme justice which require the highest education to serve.

-Economy-
Focus: (Heavy Industry, Consumer, Services, etc) intelligent usage focused, leave nothing wasted
Major exports:precious gems, food, money, technology, and other fancy stuff
Major imports: indentured servants, which in fact are immigrants that are working to pay off a travel debt ehen the came into the country, And whatever else there may be that we may recieve from trade deals.

Currency:Jit
Official Language(s): Soljit, cernine, mutherit, and globian(english)
Trade Procedure:barter and money, pending situation
Misc Information: we have a crap ton of stuff.

-Society-
Social Leanings: (Do your people want change or are they happy with how things are?) Mixed pending species mainly. The soldiaura tend to be libritarian, the cernines, liberals, the mutherians are rather conservative, and humans along with minorities tend to have different leanings pending where they live in the ISR.
Economic Leanings: (How much government intervention do your people want) capitalism, with the Soldiaura wanting the p eople to run the businesses with mild government asistance. Humans are ironically the same way, except they want it more in the sense where the union controls the business. Cernines would rather gave the government have a leash on the businesses to protect them from corporate "slimeballs". Mutherians abd most minorities prefer a hands off aproach to business so the economy "runs at full sream"
Democratic Leanings: The soldiaura really love their democracy, but in similar style respect the royal family as a role model to society. The cernines dont particularly care for the royal family, mainly due to theur desire to fet to the high sests of piwer and change things to the way they see fit. Humans beleave in a dair democracy where anyone can change the nation for the better in office, if they can Get the Office that is. Mutherians tend to think of democracy as a time wasting element of govetnment, and only participate in in hopes to taje over the isr govetnment at some point. Minorities then to think like the soldiaura.
Wealth Disparity: (Is everyone living arm in arm in a marxist utopia or are the masses told to eat cake? Describe the wealth divide between the rich and poor in your nation.)more equalized than most other nations, mainly because the rich are actually taxed more than the poor, while the poor get tax breaks. Wee smart economists.
Desired Effectiveness of Government: the people are rather trusting of tge governmentvwith rax dolars becayse the government literally comes up with multiple budget plans and puts them out for the people to vote upon in a referendum style budget election.
Activism/Engagement: (How often do occupy movements get peppersprayed) protests happen regularly in the isr governmental centers. And are only detained if violence breaks out physically. If the protests remain only verbal snd physicslly peadeful, then they may go on without disturbance.
Multicultural: (How accepting of differing cultures is your national establishment and corporate laws) rather accepting with all of the minorities around
Religiousness: (The degree of faith and fundamentalism, or the lack thereof, in your nation) religious being we just agree to disagree on beliefs
Mass Media Addiction: (To what degree are children raised by the TV set?) We have some great internet service. Cutizens here can watch entertsining, and educational stuff that goesvalong with the entertainment, so uf you only readvbooks in the usr, you may be Missing out on entertainment and education too.
General Public Health: (Do your people have all their limbs/tentacles/eyestalks? How are prosthetics, cloned organs, mechanical replacements, or wooden pegs? Etc) its rather well, despite a panvedy, which is a viral plague out break once every 200 years which wens the population a bit pending medicinal breakthroughs.
Unrest: (Are people apathetic/complacent or do they think that your national leader would look far better with the Dullahan style?) They are satisfied, though actively criticise when they can.

-Military-
National Service: (does your nation have the draft, volunteers only, or perhaps a caste system? What is the length of service for new recruits? Are there battlefield commissions, what are the requirements for becoming an officer? Elaborate.) Mostly volunteer, drafts are for desperate times. Officers need alot of training and smarts for their positions.
Quality and Quantity: (What is your nations stance? Do they take pride and care to make every ship and soldier a singularly powerful warmachine, or do they see quantity as a quality all its own?) Sort of a balance, get them through, but dont cut corners, they need to withstand those railguns.

Orbital Bombardment Capability: very capable

-Technology-

FTL: (Describe your FTL, its upsides and downsides, and how it functions in general as well as a rough estimation of how fast it can move things from point A to point B. Faster typically means you are going to need more of a downside.) Its sort of more covenant and unsc mix, the traveltimes end up being rather shorter thann their predictions
Technology: (Describe your technology in general, if you have any particular focus(es), and any details you feel are pertinent. You will be asked about what you have in here, and more depth is better. This is not just for military tech, as civilian tech is just as important.)very far into space operagrade, AIs last about a decade to 15 years, fastest internet so far, and many types of clean energy are around. We very heavily focused on making it better with the newer, glitchier stuff rolling in.
-History-
What is your nations history? (Note: please get in contact with other nations whom are near where you are on the map to figure out common past events) not availible

-Relations to other nations-
How does your government and people feel and interact with other nations? Not availible
Edited by Sol Dianar Turissmont, Mar 29 2014, 08:47 AM.
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QUEUE THE RED TEXT.

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Population: 52,000,000,000,000(rough estimate)


Rough estimates are nice, but rarely would there be so many zeroes. Translation there: Try to mix it up a bit with numbers. Also, given the size of the ISR, they must be packed in on more or less eucumenopolis type worlds.

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Major Cultures: (Is bowing a custom? Does shaking hands mean something lewd to your people? Is sharing looked down upon? etc.)bowing is a greeting, handshakes are for friends and equals, sharing is a meh, share what you like, and kneeling is submittance. Other than that its an American, German, Russian, and Japanese style culture


>American
>German
>Russian
>Japanese

Remember these sheets are supposed to be at least slightly in-character thing. I don't generally draw comparisons to actual cultures. By drawing the real comparison, you restrict yourself to that counterpart. It's more enjoyable to take things from each (which I know you do) and then build something without identifying it as its source. Nitpicky on my part, but it's useful.

Also, quit answering just the things mentioned. Expand on it. Explain the culture. That's what the 'etc.' is for after those things. It's meant as a place to start in writing up a summary of the culture.


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Civil Service: (Healthcare! Orphanages! Welfare! All the fun things to burn! How much of that does your government support with tax dollars?) It puts a reasonable amount of tax jits in, but we openly put in volunteers


This tells me nothing regarding the extent of civil service and the government safety nets. You just put in money. So does almost every government. What sets it apart?

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Policing: (Describe how policing works in your nation, whether there are simple slaps on the wrist or if public floggings are regular. Also how much of a panopticon your nation is; are there secret police watching the police while they watch the people?)only one secret military police, the rest are like the high tech police youd see in the future.


IC sheets. This is the future. Setting wise at least. And you're doing what I mentioned before about only answering what's mentioned, and not expanding.

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Justice: (Describe your judicial system works, such as whether you have juries or not or if you let local lords handle all matters of justice.)lower level, justic is volunteer jury only, intermediate is a jurry and judge, supreme is a team of judges and the supreme justice


Expand on this more. Also, jury only is going to be a clusterfuck. The average person (no matter the species) is going to be stupid and should have no right to render judgment on anyone. Still, expand and explain. And for the love of the gods, get rid of the parentheses parts. They're meant to explain the section for those filling out the sheet, not to be left there.

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Major imports: indentured servants


Nothing like outright admitting to buying slaves.

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Social Leanings: (Do your people want change or are they happy with how things are?) Mixed pending species mainly


THEN EXPLAIN THE SPECIES VIEWS. Fuck, it's only a few extra minutes of writing.

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Economic Leanings: (How much government intervention do your people want) capitalism, with the businesses and government seperated.


I am going to be fair and assume that the people would be capitalist aligned, but bare in mind that the society section is the people's views, not the government's views.

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Democratic Leanings: (Where your population stands on the sliding scale of OORAH DEMOCRAZY vs DAS FUHRER)OORAH DEMOCRAZY, with hail to the royal family.


Sliding. Scale. Democracy at one end and Autocracy at the other. Quit being lazy and just using what is in the sheet for the sake of being lazy without outright writing the actual thing. Also, it's what the people support. The people might not support the monarchy.

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Wealth Disparity: (Is everyone living arm in arm in a marxist utopia or are the masses told to eat cake? Describe the wealth divide between the rich and poor in your nation.)more equalized than America, the rich are actually taxed more than the poor.


What's an America? Remember, IC sheets.

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Desired Effectiveness of Government: (How apathetic are your people as to where their tax dollars go) rather pleased because they get to vote on budget options. Its a way of saying hey! Whats important to the people?


You did this section wrong. Also lazy. Again. How effective do the people want the government to be? Expand on it. Stop using just what's on the sheet.

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Activism/Engagement: (How often do occupy movements get peppersprayed) only the violent ones are detained, peaceful shouting may go on though


Wrong. Again. How active and engaged is the populace is what this means. Also lazy in a less obvious way again. High activity and engagement would be similar to the 1960s. What is the ISR like in this sense?

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Mass Media Addiction: (To what degree are children raised by the TV set?) We have some of the best internet service, what do you think?


This is what I think.

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General Public Health: (Do your people have all their limbs/tentacles/eyestalks? How are prosthetics, cloned organs, mechanical replacements, or wooden pegs? Etc) its rather well, despite a panvedy out break once every 200 years.


This is where OOC footnotes are useful. What's a panvedy? You know, of course, but no one else would reading through it. Also, lazy, again. How is health in society? Are people overall rather healthy? Are there issues? Expand on it.

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Orbital Bombardment Capability: very capable


HOW INFORMATIVE.

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FTL: (Describe your FTL, its upsides and downsides, and how it functions in general as well as a rough estimation of how fast it can move things from point A to point B. Faster typically means you are going to need more of a downside.) Its sort of more covenant and unsc mix, the traveltimes end up being rather shorter thann their predictions


Let me highlight one word you seemed to overlook: downside.

Also, IC sheets. What's a Covenant? What's a UNSC? Getting it yet? Give me downsides. Actual downsides that won't require me to go to other sites to figure things out. Pointing at other things for your things is just lazy when you could just write it out.


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Technology: (Describe your technology in general, if you have any particular focus(es), and any details you feel are pertinent. You will be asked about what you have in here, and more depth is better. This is not just for military tech, as civilian tech is just as important.)very far into space operagrade, AIs last about a decade to 15 years, fastest internet so far, and many types of clean energy are around. We very heavily focused on making it better with the newer, glitchier stuff rolling in.


>Fastest Internet

I hate people claiming to be best in anything. Because then someone will come along with something better and then the person that was here first will bitch about not being the best anymore. Yes, this has happened. No, I won't let it happen again. Just change the wording.

>very far into space operagrade

What's a Space Opera? Remember, the actual levels were removed in favor of actually describing things and writing it out. Laziness earns no points with me.

>many types of clean energy

Welcome to the future.

From the parentheses: You will be asked about what you have in here, and more depth is better.

Translation: WRITE IT OUT. DETAIL. I don't ask much out of you.
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