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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jan 7 2007, 07:32 PM Post #1 |
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please read and reply. THE DOVE by thebalanceiswithin As i sit here, in the shaddow of the famous, scanning the scrolls of wisdom and understanding i see a beam of light, so golden so bright, unraveling its smooth tectured strand of optical string accross the floor of this ancient, historic library, and as i look up i see the portal from wence this beam has entered, 'tis a stain glass window of a gracefull dove, shining so bright, that i can sence its powerfull color grazing my brow i squint my eyes, almost shielding them from this portals great heavenly power, a power so intrancing that i cant seem to turn away from what used to just be a silohwet of an unknown figure But now the silohwet is gone, replaced with a flying god, starring me down with its small beedy eyes And then, like a calling from the skys, its real animal counterpart lands on a window-sill behind my right sholder, and i see.... I see how magical this library is, with the symbol of the dove constantly reminding...reminding whoever comes within its walls about our history, and of those who labored in there own sweat to send accross the message the message i will never forget That knowledge and wisdom is EVERYTHING.... THE END |
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| ChipChamp | Jan 7 2007, 07:41 PM Post #2 |
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Have fun!
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Very, very good one! I really liked this one, and your choice of words! Poem: 7/10 Story: 6/10 Creativity: 7.5/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jan 7 2007, 07:46 PM Post #3 |
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thanks dude |
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| ChipChamp | Jan 7 2007, 07:47 PM Post #4 |
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Have fun!
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You're welcome, it deserves it! :) |
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| ** Death's servant | Jan 7 2007, 08:42 PM Post #5 |
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good one |
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| *YouKnowWho | Jan 8 2007, 11:47 AM Post #6 |
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I likes it :lol: |
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| God of The Congo | Jan 9 2007, 05:53 PM Post #7 |
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Totally sweet. |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jan 10 2007, 03:48 PM Post #8 |
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thanks i like your avatar |
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| Dahomey | Jan 10 2007, 04:13 PM Post #9 |
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LOL |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jan 10 2007, 04:16 PM Post #10 |
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B) |
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| *CALI GRL | Jan 10 2007, 07:42 PM Post #11 |
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that's deep ,what inspired you? |
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| Dahomey | Jan 11 2007, 04:47 PM Post #12 |
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cool |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jan 11 2007, 06:45 PM Post #13 |
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well i really built this poem from scrate, first thinking to do it about a dove, and it rose from that point on B) |
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| darkcity | Jan 17 2007, 12:04 PM Post #14 |
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cool man! |
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| God of The Congo | Jan 17 2007, 05:34 PM Post #15 |
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What's with the vomiting smily? |
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