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The Dove; what is knowledge
Topic Started: Jan 7 2007, 07:32 PM (472 Views)
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please read and reply.



THE DOVE by thebalanceiswithin



As i sit here, in the shaddow of the famous,
scanning the scrolls of wisdom and understanding

i see a beam of light, so golden so bright, unraveling its smooth tectured strand of optical string accross the floor of this ancient, historic library,

and as i look up i see the portal from wence this beam has entered, 'tis a stain glass window of a gracefull dove, shining so bright, that i can sence its powerfull color grazing my brow

i squint my eyes, almost shielding them from this portals great heavenly power, a power so intrancing that i cant seem to turn away from what used to just be a silohwet of an unknown figure

But now the silohwet is gone, replaced with a flying god, starring me down with its small beedy eyes

And then, like a calling from the skys, its real animal counterpart lands on a window-sill behind my right sholder, and i see....

I see how magical this library is, with the symbol of the dove constantly reminding...reminding whoever comes within its walls about our history,

and of those who labored in there own sweat to send accross the message

the message i will never forget

That knowledge and wisdom is EVERYTHING....


THE END
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Very, very good one! I really liked this one, and your choice of words!

Poem: 7/10
Story: 6/10
Creativity: 7.5/10

~ ChipChamp
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thanks dude
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You're welcome, it deserves it! :)
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good one
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I likes it :lol:
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Totally sweet.
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thanks i like your avatar
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LOL
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B)
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that's deep ,what inspired you?
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cool
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well i really built this poem from scrate, first thinking to do it about a dove, and it rose from that point on B)
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cool man!
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What's with the vomiting smily?
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