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Today Is Gone
Topic Started: Jun 6 2007, 04:59 PM (278 Views)
GOTHgirl
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i've given up living in today's company
because today has nothing to give to me
i'd rather be lost in time and space
i'd rather be with you away from this place
but i'm living my life and you yours
i'm lost in this hallway with so many shut doors
if i open this one where will i go
but for now today is gone and the past is all i know

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Your a good poet. I think there is still good in this world though no matter how little.
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DS is right



You are an awesome poet!
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God of The Congo
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very good. I believe that there is always hope, always. Nevertheless, an excellent poem.
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perhaps i'm being misunderstood honestly i have not given up total hope just so caught up in the future i sometimes give up thinking that today will be as great as my hopes for tomorrow
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Wow. your poetry reminds me of marilyn manson.
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wow thanks his music is so b****in' i was just listening to him a few mins ago
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What songs ya got!?
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GOTHgirl
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not many..... but i'm listening to disturbed now
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disturbed isn't my favorite Their lyrics arn't musical to me anymore.
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they're lyrics never really appealed to me either but they're beat was what i got so attracted to
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...LP is good so is marilyn manson. I like a lot of music those are just two artists that came to mind.
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Pretty good one. :)

7/10

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c.c.'s famus 7/10 which he gives to almost every poem. lol
hes like "this is one of your best...hhhmmm......7/10"
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Lol
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