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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 11 2007, 05:36 PM (174 Views) | |
| GOTHgirl | Jun 11 2007, 05:36 PM Post #1 |
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you picked me up when i fell you were the angel saving me from hell when everyone lied you stayed true and i just want to thank you you are my reality you are my dream but not all dreams are what they seem everyday i live a life so ordinary yet with you it becomes extraordinary you gave me wings and i flew so i just want to thank you for being yourself, for being my friend know you're in my heart till the very end |
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| ChipChamp | Jun 11 2007, 05:37 PM Post #2 |
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Have fun!
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I like the rhyming and rhythm.
:) 7/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| + *cabecabe4 | Jun 11 2007, 05:39 PM Post #3 |
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PLEASE DELETE THIS ACCOUNT
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That is cool how you wove thanks into a poem. :D |
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| God of The Congo | Jun 11 2007, 07:59 PM Post #4 |
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I really like it. Very beautiful. |
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| ** Death's servant | Jun 12 2007, 09:56 AM Post #5 |
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Beautiful I love the messages it sends. |
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| GOTHgirl | Jun 12 2007, 11:19 PM Post #6 |
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thank you. this poem means alot to me |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jun 15 2007, 01:40 AM Post #7 |
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it sounds like it does |
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| GOTHgirl | Jun 15 2007, 01:48 AM Post #8 |
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well it is about a certain person but actually i guess it can be seen as my gratitude to all my close friends |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jun 15 2007, 01:51 AM Post #9 |
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i think it would be cool if you sent our 8th grade teacher a copy of this poem |
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| GOTHgirl | Jun 15 2007, 01:57 AM Post #10 |
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ummm...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................no thanks it doesn't really apply to her |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jun 15 2007, 02:00 AM Post #11 |
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it was just an idea, i think i'm going to make paint her a picture over the summer, to show my gratitude toward her |
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| GOTHgirl | Jun 15 2007, 02:03 AM Post #12 |
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oh that's nice of you hope she likes it |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jun 15 2007, 02:09 AM Post #13 |
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yeah well that depends if i even do it |
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| GOTHgirl | Jun 15 2007, 02:21 AM Post #14 |
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you should if you want to.... |
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