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I Want To Thank You
Topic Started: Jun 11 2007, 05:36 PM (174 Views)
GOTHgirl
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you picked me up when i fell
you were the angel saving me from hell
when everyone lied you stayed true
and i just want to thank you
you are my reality you are my dream
but not all dreams are what they seem
everyday i live a life so ordinary
yet with you it becomes extraordinary
you gave me wings and i flew
so i just want to thank you
for being yourself, for being my friend
know you're in my heart till the very end



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I like the rhyming and rhythm. :)

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~ ChipChamp
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That is cool how you wove thanks into a poem. :D
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I really like it. Very beautiful.
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Beautiful I love the messages it sends.
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thank you. this poem means alot to me
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it sounds like it does
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well it is about a certain person but actually i guess it can be seen as my gratitude to all my close friends
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i think it would be cool if you sent our 8th grade teacher a copy of this poem
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ummm...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................no thanks it doesn't really apply to her
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it was just an idea, i think i'm going to make paint her a picture over the summer, to show my gratitude toward her
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oh that's nice of you hope she likes it
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yeah well that depends if i even do it
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you should if you want to....
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