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Topic Started: Jun 16 2007, 07:54 PM (201 Views)
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What is the price of freedom?
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I sat in the dark today
All alone, but for the
Fake glow of my laptop screen
Too scared to turn on a light

An uncontrollable urge
To do something stupid
Filled me to the brim
Almost over flowing

I almost took out
My fear on my arms
But the trilling of
My cell phone stopped me

I sat in the dark today
Feeling all alone and hopeless
But then you came
And made everything light

It was still dark
I was still afraid
But I wasn’t alone
And you didn’t let me forget

I was warm in the dark
For almost two hours
Knowing I was cared for
And you wouldn’t leave me

I sat in the dark today
Cold, cramped and apathetic
Staring at my computer screen
Hoping I wouldn’t be alone

So many people
Tried to speak to me
I only had the energy for a few
And I only had the motivation for you

And then there you were,
Never failing to hold me up
Listening to ghostly music
Sharing a common love

I sat in the dark today
Alone and afraid
Then I gathered my courage
And turned on a light
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Very good progresion
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What is the price of freedom?
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Best part about it, is that it was true. I sat in the dark for about 5 hours, just flipping out then I gathered my nerve and there we go
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Have fun!
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Pretty good! :)
6.5/10

~ ChipChamp
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What is the price of freedom?
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Is that all you say?
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ChipChamp
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Have fun!
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Usually
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What is the price of freedom?
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That's not very creative
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ChipChamp
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Have fun!
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I usually have a lot of stuff to do on here... So... I don't talk that much. Lol
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I remeber that. Glad I could be of service love.
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I'm sure you do. That was NOT a fun night
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No, one of the few that wasn't. I guess just talking to you makes me have fun. Laughing at one a.m. every morning. Well, I was...now I'm just missing you at one in te morning.
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At least I got to see you before you left and you were laughing at 1 in the morning, I might point out...
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huh.
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I guess we're going to have to stop laughing at 1 am... at least not together
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