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| + ****+Child of the Night | Jun 16 2007, 07:54 PM Post #1 |
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What is the price of freedom?
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I sat in the dark today All alone, but for the Fake glow of my laptop screen Too scared to turn on a light An uncontrollable urge To do something stupid Filled me to the brim Almost over flowing I almost took out My fear on my arms But the trilling of My cell phone stopped me I sat in the dark today Feeling all alone and hopeless But then you came And made everything light It was still dark I was still afraid But I wasn’t alone And you didn’t let me forget I was warm in the dark For almost two hours Knowing I was cared for And you wouldn’t leave me I sat in the dark today Cold, cramped and apathetic Staring at my computer screen Hoping I wouldn’t be alone So many people Tried to speak to me I only had the energy for a few And I only had the motivation for you And then there you were, Never failing to hold me up Listening to ghostly music Sharing a common love I sat in the dark today Alone and afraid Then I gathered my courage And turned on a light |
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| ** Death's servant | Jun 16 2007, 08:38 PM Post #2 |
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Reflection
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Very good progresion |
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| + ****+Child of the Night | Jun 16 2007, 09:02 PM Post #3 |
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What is the price of freedom?
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Best part about it, is that it was true. I sat in the dark for about 5 hours, just flipping out then I gathered my nerve and there we go |
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| ChipChamp | Jun 16 2007, 11:12 PM Post #4 |
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Have fun!
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Pretty good!
:) 6.5/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| + ****+Child of the Night | Jun 16 2007, 11:15 PM Post #5 |
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What is the price of freedom?
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Is that all you say? |
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| ChipChamp | Jun 16 2007, 11:24 PM Post #6 |
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Have fun!
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Usually |
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| + ****+Child of the Night | Jun 16 2007, 11:26 PM Post #7 |
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What is the price of freedom?
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That's not very creative |
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| ChipChamp | Jun 16 2007, 11:37 PM Post #8 |
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Have fun!
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I usually have a lot of stuff to do on here... So... I don't talk that much. Lol |
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| God of The Congo | Jun 20 2007, 05:06 PM Post #9 |
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Dead Poet
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I remeber that. Glad I could be of service love. |
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| + ****+Child of the Night | Jun 20 2007, 06:07 PM Post #10 |
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What is the price of freedom?
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I'm sure you do. That was NOT a fun night |
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| God of The Congo | Jul 3 2007, 03:25 PM Post #11 |
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Dead Poet
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No, one of the few that wasn't. I guess just talking to you makes me have fun. Laughing at one a.m. every morning. Well, I was...now I'm just missing you at one in te morning. |
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| + ****+Child of the Night | Jul 6 2007, 03:24 AM Post #12 |
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What is the price of freedom?
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At least I got to see you before you left and you were laughing at 1 in the morning, I might point out... |
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| ** Death's servant | Jul 11 2007, 02:25 PM Post #13 |
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Reflection
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huh. |
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| + ****+Child of the Night | Jul 12 2007, 04:14 PM Post #14 |
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What is the price of freedom?
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I guess we're going to have to stop laughing at 1 am... at least not together |
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