| My Colored Memories; by thebalanceiswithin | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 29 2007, 02:36 AM (263 Views) | |
| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jun 29 2007, 02:36 AM Post #1 |
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My Colored Memories Within Me there is a place, of many memories, diverse, and numerous in these memories, so vivid, so clear, are bottled emotions, of every kind, and every color they describe stories, many of sarrow, and many of death these stories are the strongest in color, and the strongest in pigment. they are also the most powerful, and the most remembered happy memories stand along side these, they are filled with joy, and happy moments, their color is less intence, and less Recognizable they are remember the least of all... |
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| ** Death's servant | Jun 29 2007, 06:35 PM Post #2 |
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Reflection
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I like it. |
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| ChipChamp | Jun 29 2007, 06:48 PM Post #3 |
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Have fun!
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Pretty good!
:) 6.5/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| CruelBitterMockingLight | Jun 29 2007, 08:17 PM Post #4 |
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The Companion Cube Will Never Stab U
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Wow, I REALLY loved the imagry and word choice in the poem. It seemed rather dark, but I could see how it would fit with love. You are truly talented. Good work ^_^ |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jul 1 2007, 09:41 AM Post #5 |
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thank you, i wanted to put it in meaningful at the beginning, didn't realize that i put it in love, but now its in meaningful :D |
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| God of The Congo | Jul 1 2007, 11:05 AM Post #6 |
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Very good. I would disagree with the idea, I remember the happy one more, but each to his own. Still liked the poetry. |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jul 3 2007, 01:03 PM Post #7 |
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this poem is not about everyone elses idea of there memories, it is about mine. |
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| God of The Congo | Jul 3 2007, 02:52 PM Post #8 |
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That's true. I was simply voicing my opinion, I wasn't trying to change your's. |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Aug 4 2007, 04:23 PM Post #9 |
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i know |
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