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My Colored Memories; by thebalanceiswithin
Topic Started: Jun 29 2007, 02:36 AM (263 Views)
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My Colored Memories

Within Me
there is a place,
of many memories,
diverse, and numerous

in these memories,
so vivid,
so clear,
are bottled emotions,
of every kind,
and every color

they describe stories,
many of sarrow,
and many of death

these stories are the strongest in color,
and the strongest in pigment.

they are also the most powerful,
and the most remembered

happy memories stand along side these,
they are filled with joy, and happy moments,

their color is less intence,
and less Recognizable

they are remember the least of all...



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I like it.
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Pretty good! :)

6.5/10

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Wow, I REALLY loved the imagry and word choice in the poem. It seemed rather dark, but I could see how it would fit with love. You are truly talented. Good work ^_^
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thank you, i wanted to put it in meaningful at the beginning, didn't realize that i put it in love, but now its in meaningful :D
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Very good. I would disagree with the idea, I remember the happy one more, but each to his own. Still liked the poetry.
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this poem is not about everyone elses idea of there memories, it is about mine.
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That's true. I was simply voicing my opinion, I wasn't trying to change your's.
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i know
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