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Uncertainty; on uncertainty. I make my own future.
Topic Started: Jul 3 2007, 11:32 AM (288 Views)
God of The Congo
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Uncertainty

It can kill,
when you think,
"Who am I,
to defy all the odds,
to marry my highschool sweetheart,
to be a falconer,
to run the mile in,
under four minutes,
in under a minute,
to bike the Tour de France,
to play any sport profesionally?"

you are you not to?
How can you leave your dreams behind,
how can you listen when someone says,
you probably won't,
or you can't?
YOU MAKE YOUR OWN FUTURE!!!!
no one else, just
YOU.

So make it,
make it as bright as possible,
be a millionare,
the fastest runner in the world,
the winner of the Tour de France,
the spouse of you highschool sweetheart,
the best professional tennis,
soccer,
basebal,
basketball,
any sport player.

Screw
the odds,
your more than a statistic,
kill them,
the statistics,
you are better than a set of numbers,
you are so much better.

I know that I'm going to,
so why not you too?
Will you join me?
I call you to arms,
do something impossibe,
be the greatest,
you're worth that much,
you are your own master,
with enough will, nothing is impossible.
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Hmm... I don't usually like these types of poems... But I liked this one. :)

6.5/10

~ ChipChamp
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So....deep and insightful c.c. I'm so impressed. You're getting so much better at critiquing. Creativity remember?
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Problem is that I can't think of why I like it (no offense)... Lol. But I do. :) I think I like what you are saying in the poem. :D
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So do I. It was inspired by somethnig someone said, they said that I was too young to marry the one I love when I grow up, so I'm going to beat the odds. I don't like statistics, I'm not average in any way shape or concievable form. I do't really fit into patterns. Most anyway.....
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it was youknowwho wasn't it?
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very true shows a level of wisdom that not many people your age have achieved.
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Him and my mother of all poeple. I asked her though. I make my own future, no one else's oppinion (unless it's directly influencing them, Child, love I mean you) really matters. Thank you Death's, I appreciate that. I'm glad I gave you inspiration Balance, I'm honoured that my work has influenced you in some small way.
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wow you said alot rite there.
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its really good ^_^
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i like it... very inspirational
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Thank you. It was intended to be.
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I know you care about my oppinion, love. But I remember saying this before. Very good point to this poem, one most teens... and some adults... have yet to realize. And you don't fit into patterns, you create them. And that's why I'm here, to break them!
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don't ... me, DS.
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