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Dreams Set In Stone; by thebalanceiswithin
Topic Started: Jul 3 2007, 01:00 PM (206 Views)
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Dreams Set in Stone


Is it impossible for me to become my wants, and my dreams?

You say it is unlikely, but you see, I am unlikely

Unlikely in every way, because i am not who it seems,

for you believe that these thoughts of success are just wishful thinking,

But i know they are set in stone, within my being

So please keep your negativity away from me, for they just anger me more to succeed, and motivitate me to prove YOU, the negative one, the likely one, that you are wrong in all your premature assumptions.

or maybe you are just jealous

for i am apparently more optimistc,

and you know that you lack in this certain characteristic

so i ask, with all truth,

Who of us will succeed?

you...

or me...




inspired by Uncertainty
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Very cool I like the questions it asks.
I think both can succede.
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I liked the end of it. :)

6.5/10

~ ChipChamp
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i dont think so, unless they change there ways, because who are they to tell me what i can't and can not do, and who are they to tell me that i will not succeed
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Very good. They are no one to tell you what you can or cannot do. I'm glad that I gave you inspiration. I like the feeling of it. I liked it a lot.
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well i was planning on writing this for a while, so maybe it wasn't inspiration but motivation to post it,

thanks god of the congo, for the reply, and the motivation
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Least I can do. Any time.
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i love it!! for some reason by the time i was finished reading it, it switched something on in me... i don't know why but it was some sort of inspiration
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thanks, i just hate it when people tell me that i wont become my future dreams.
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me2 but nowadays i think i'm probably the only one standing in the way of myself
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We all are sometimes, what I do is write a mptivational poem when I'm doubting myself. It helps.
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Recently, something has been switched in me and nothing really phases me anymore... In a way it's quite annoying. When my mum told me they'd put my cat down, I cried for about... ten minutes then I was laughing really hard.... But then God of the Congo was stuttering at me and my sighting of two peregrine falcons, so who can blame me?

Anyway, very good poem (As ususal)
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that didn't make any sence at all child.
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