| Purpose; How I'm feeling right now | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 5 2007, 01:18 AM (192 Views) | |
| God of The Congo | Jul 5 2007, 01:18 AM Post #1 |
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Dead Poet
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I have a purpose, to help, to advise, to confort, I feel as if the world, is unfolded in front of me, I KNOW I will stay with you, my love until the end of time, I know that my friend will find his someone, I know my onther freind will stay with her's. forever, All these things I know, I know that I have helped, one who has helped me, and my love, and I know that I have helped one of my dearest friends, I just need to help my love now. I know that my destiny is, to fulfill the promises I have, made, to everyone, my love, my friends, my family, everyone, So I will, and the most important promise is to you love, forever and a day, forever and forever. Should I put this in love? Please, give me some feedback. |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jul 5 2007, 02:26 AM Post #2 |
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Love is meaningful, isn't it? I liked it, I liked it a lot. |
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| ChipChamp | Jul 5 2007, 11:03 AM Post #3 |
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Have fun!
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I liked this one.
:) I think I liked the change in rhythm that you had, some long lines and some really short lines. 6.5/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| God of The Congo | Jul 5 2007, 12:07 PM Post #4 |
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Thank you. I guess when you love someone as much as I do, it's hard to really right about anything else. |
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| Invisible Dancer | Jul 5 2007, 12:16 PM Post #5 |
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not bad |
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| God of The Congo | Jul 5 2007, 12:20 PM Post #6 |
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Thank you. |
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| Invisible Dancer | Jul 5 2007, 12:20 PM Post #7 |
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Insomniac
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your welcome |
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| + ****+Child of the Night | Jul 6 2007, 03:31 AM Post #8 |
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What is the price of freedom?
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That was a constructive set of posts.... No, I think this should be exactly where it is. It works here... This was quite well written, I very much enjoyed it |
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| ** Death's servant | Jul 11 2007, 02:23 PM Post #9 |
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Reflection
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pretty good it didn't make sense in the middle. |
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