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A Purpose Realized; by thebalanceiswithin
Topic Started: Jul 5 2007, 02:23 AM (254 Views)
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A Purpose Realized

Will I become who i strive to be?
A person wise, thoughtful, loved, selfless, and always improving.

its almost as if, in the last year, i have found a map within the stars,
A costalation of my life to come...

Through it i have found purpose, and created paths of truth, in which i will forever follow.

Paths that i will walk along untill i die...

In this astronomical journey, i have changed, i have labeled my decissions as my own, and made them with great surety.

I have decided to help people in need of me, even if we don't get
along.

And after thinking long and hard, I have decided to sacrifice my own happiness to restore others.

A theropist some say i should be, but the fact is, i already am...

Some people may not realise, but i sence your feelings, i know how you feel... and through experience i can help you with your problems.

For i would rather do that than experienceing you pain, along with mine...

I have also realised, that my opinion is mine, and mine alone, and that, with an open mind, i can accept others with no objection

And become wiser thus...

I have come to believe, that in this journey i have improved in every way, and as i think, i know i have no regrets, for the experiences i have walked through, the paths i have taken, have done nothing less than make me a wiser, more thoughtful, loved, selfless, and more improved person

And in the future, i intend to still,

advise,
help,
comfort,
and love, all the people i can

And thus, become the happiest, most content, and perfect person i can be...




Please comment and tell me what you thought.
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ChipChamp
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This is one of your better ones! I really liked it. :)

7/10

~ ChipChamp
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Very very good. You are finding yourself.
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thank you, i think so too.
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very good i like it it seemed more kinda like a story or a vow or pledge sort of
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That was amazing, as usual. Very well written, very strong feel to it. Don't give up! Don't let anyone pull you down
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thanks, i think this is one of my best, and to tell the truth i realy do feel this way.

some of you say its more of a story, your entirely correct! But when you accually pause at the parts that imply temperary silence, it does sound much like a poem.
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i liked it ^_^
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that was deep...
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I wish i still felt that way..
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