| A Purpose Realized; by thebalanceiswithin | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 5 2007, 02:23 AM (254 Views) | |
| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jul 5 2007, 02:23 AM Post #1 |
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A Purpose Realized Will I become who i strive to be? A person wise, thoughtful, loved, selfless, and always improving. its almost as if, in the last year, i have found a map within the stars, A costalation of my life to come... Through it i have found purpose, and created paths of truth, in which i will forever follow. Paths that i will walk along untill i die... In this astronomical journey, i have changed, i have labeled my decissions as my own, and made them with great surety. I have decided to help people in need of me, even if we don't get along. And after thinking long and hard, I have decided to sacrifice my own happiness to restore others. A theropist some say i should be, but the fact is, i already am... Some people may not realise, but i sence your feelings, i know how you feel... and through experience i can help you with your problems. For i would rather do that than experienceing you pain, along with mine... I have also realised, that my opinion is mine, and mine alone, and that, with an open mind, i can accept others with no objection And become wiser thus... I have come to believe, that in this journey i have improved in every way, and as i think, i know i have no regrets, for the experiences i have walked through, the paths i have taken, have done nothing less than make me a wiser, more thoughtful, loved, selfless, and more improved person And in the future, i intend to still, advise, help, comfort, and love, all the people i can And thus, become the happiest, most content, and perfect person i can be... Please comment and tell me what you thought. |
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| ChipChamp | Jul 5 2007, 11:05 AM Post #2 |
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Have fun!
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This is one of your better ones! I really liked it.
:) 7/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| God of The Congo | Jul 5 2007, 12:05 PM Post #3 |
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Very very good. You are finding yourself. |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jul 5 2007, 04:38 PM Post #4 |
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thank you, i think so too. |
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| GOTHgirl | Jul 5 2007, 09:40 PM Post #5 |
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very good i like it it seemed more kinda like a story or a vow or pledge sort of |
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| + ****+Child of the Night | Jul 6 2007, 03:33 AM Post #6 |
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What is the price of freedom?
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That was amazing, as usual. Very well written, very strong feel to it. Don't give up! Don't let anyone pull you down |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jul 7 2007, 05:38 PM Post #7 |
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thanks, i think this is one of my best, and to tell the truth i realy do feel this way. some of you say its more of a story, your entirely correct! But when you accually pause at the parts that imply temperary silence, it does sound much like a poem. |
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| Invisible Dancer | Jul 7 2007, 08:05 PM Post #8 |
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i liked it ^_^ |
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| ** Death's servant | Jul 11 2007, 02:17 PM Post #9 |
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that was deep... |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Sep 3 2007, 10:59 AM Post #10 |
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I wish i still felt that way.. |
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