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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 7 2007, 12:27 AM (183 Views) | |
| GOTHgirl | Jul 7 2007, 12:27 AM Post #1 |
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each drop a memory each splash a song wash away my tears cleanse away the wrong listen to the thunder in agony hear it roar lightning brighten up my day so my soul can soar dance in the rain kiss in the drops let it ease my pain before my life stops |
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| ChipChamp | Jul 7 2007, 12:33 AM Post #2 |
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Have fun!
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Pretty good one! I liked some of the rhyming.
:D 6.5/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| + ****+Child of the Night | Jul 7 2007, 12:36 AM Post #3 |
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What is the price of freedom?
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Very nice! |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jul 7 2007, 02:11 AM Post #4 |
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Very Very Very Very good. You could publish this aswell.
:D The imagery was amazing! |
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| GOTHgirl | Jul 7 2007, 11:00 AM Post #5 |
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thank you... i think rainstorms are soo powerful i just had to write a poem about it |
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| + *cabecabe4 | Jul 7 2007, 11:24 AM Post #6 |
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PLEASE DELETE THIS ACCOUNT
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Awesome! |
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| GOTHgirl | Jul 8 2007, 08:31 AM Post #7 |
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thanks i wrote another one kinda like it but it's sad that but that one's is not as good as this one....in opinion |
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| +Linden | Jul 8 2007, 02:34 PM Post #8 |
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awesomesauce
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I love it! I can imagine someone dancing in the rain to the poem. And then what it would feel like when the rain did stop, how agonizing that might be. |
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| GOTHgirl | Jul 9 2007, 12:39 AM Post #9 |
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thanks yeah it was the first time it rained and it felt so good to just feel the water and i was so down that day but i soaked in the pleaure of the rain and that's what it was all about |
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| ** Death's servant | Jul 11 2007, 02:11 PM Post #10 |
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Reflection
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I liked that one. |
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