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Soul Splashes; the rain
Topic Started: Jul 7 2007, 12:27 AM (183 Views)
GOTHgirl
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each drop a memory
each splash a song
wash away my tears
cleanse away the wrong
listen to the thunder
in agony
hear it roar
lightning brighten up my day
so my soul can soar
dance in the rain
kiss in the drops
let it ease my pain
before my life
stops
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ChipChamp
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Pretty good one! I liked some of the rhyming. :D

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Very nice!
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Very Very Very Very good. You could publish this aswell. :D

The imagery was amazing!
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GOTHgirl
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thank you... i think rainstorms are soo powerful i just had to write a poem about it
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Awesome!
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GOTHgirl
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thanks i wrote another one kinda like it but it's sad that but that one's is not as good as this one....in opinion
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I love it!

I can imagine someone dancing in the rain to the poem. And then what it would feel like when the rain did stop, how agonizing that might be.
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thanks yeah it was the first time it rained and it felt so good to just feel the water and i was so down that day but i soaked in the pleaure of the rain and that's what it was all about
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I liked that one.
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