| Child Of The Dance; A Pantoum about dancing | |
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| + ****+Child of the Night | Jul 7 2007, 12:46 PM Post #1 |
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What is the price of freedom?
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Sit, breathe, wait your turn Move gracefully, the spotlight is yours Fulfil that lifelong yearn And you’re the one everyone adores Move gracefully, the spotlight is yours The object of everyone’s attention And you’re the one everyone adores Let yourself go, the stage won’t darken The object of everyone’s attention A lifelong dance, you’re the star Let yourself go, the stage won’t darken What have you to loose, you’ve come this far A life long dance, you’re the star Promenade, dip, twist, break What have you to loose, you’ve come this far Just keep dancing, the cure for any heartache Promenade, dip, twist, break Doesn’t matter what you do Just keep dancing, the cure for any heartache I’ve been there too Doesn’t matter what you do Just smile and shrug it off I’ve been there too Never let anyone scoff Just smile and shrug it off Your dream is real Never let anyone scoff It’s about what you feel Your dream is real Loose yourself in your partner It’s about what you feel Open up, your senses are clearer Loose yourself in your partner A lifelong bond It’s about what you feel All previous inhibitions, gone A lifelong bond Never been so safe All previous inhibitions, gone The one person your wounds won’t chafe A lifelong bond Fulfil that lifelong yearn All previous inhibitions, gone Sit, breathe, wait your turn |
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| ChipChamp | Jul 7 2007, 12:48 PM Post #2 |
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Have fun!
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I liked it!
:D 7/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| + ****+Child of the Night | Jul 7 2007, 12:50 PM Post #3 |
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What is the price of freedom?
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Wow, I seem to be doing well in the world of Chippy lately |
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| ChipChamp | Jul 7 2007, 12:51 PM Post #4 |
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Have fun!
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Lol.
:) Maybe I'm just in a better mood today. :D Lol |
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| + ****+Child of the Night | Jul 7 2007, 12:52 PM Post #5 |
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What is the price of freedom?
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You still haven't rated Utah Sun. The one poem you haven't done *pokes* |
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| God of The Congo | Jul 11 2007, 04:17 AM Post #6 |
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Dead Poet
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I loved it. I know exactly what you mean. We shall fuflill that yearn. |
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| + ****+Child of the Night | Jul 11 2007, 04:23 AM Post #7 |
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What is the price of freedom?
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it was for you, though obscurly |
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| ** Death's servant | Jul 11 2007, 02:09 PM Post #8 |
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Reflection
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good, I didn't like it as mush as some of your others but it was good. |
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