| If Only; By thebalanceiswithin | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 8 2007, 08:50 PM (171 Views) | |
| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jul 8 2007, 08:50 PM Post #1 |
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If Only If only it was easier for you to see, These memories of mine, Some about what I wanted to be If only I could transfer my memories, Into a pool of color, So you could jump in and see, My memories of my mother If only that was possible, So every memory of mine could be understood, I would have better friends, And a life the way it should But no, no one could ever see my memories with such an ease, So I suspect they will just be forgotten, Floating in the breeze... |
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| + *cabecabe4 | Jul 8 2007, 08:57 PM Post #2 |
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PLEASE DELETE THIS ACCOUNT
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Very deep. It inspires me. |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jul 8 2007, 09:14 PM Post #3 |
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Thank you Cabe. |
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| ChipChamp | Jul 8 2007, 09:26 PM Post #4 |
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Have fun!
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I liked it!
:) 7/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jul 8 2007, 10:36 PM Post #5 |
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two 7s in a row, i think i'm doing good |
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| ** Death's servant | Jul 11 2007, 02:15 PM Post #6 |
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Reflection
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You are an awsome writer. |
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| + *thebalanceiswithin | Jul 16 2007, 04:38 PM Post #7 |
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thanks, you too DS |
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