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Topic Started: Jul 16 2007, 08:10 PM (146 Views)
CruelBitterMockingLight
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The Companion Cube Will Never Stab U
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I need you with me now, so I can explain the dark towers,
I havent figured out, why everything moves so slow.

This time its drowning out,
and taking with it all selfish power,

I need you with me now,
so I can explain myself,
again.

I need you with me now, to whisper my darkest secrets,
I havent the right time, nor place to make these mistakes.

This moment wont last long,
To most but my false pretenses,

I need you with me now,
so I can explain myself,
again.

I need you with me now, to take away fear of darkness
I havent any tears ,to shed, another night.

This memory is mine,
tangled in the mouth of harshness.

I need you with me now,
so I can explain myself,
again.
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ChipChamp
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Have fun!
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Pretty good! It sort of sounded like a song, to me. :)

6.5/10

~ ChipChamp
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** Death's servant
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Reflection
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that was artfull usage of repetition
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