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| CruelBitterMockingLight | Jul 16 2007, 08:10 PM Post #1 |
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The Companion Cube Will Never Stab U
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I need you with me now, so I can explain the dark towers, I havent figured out, why everything moves so slow. This time its drowning out, and taking with it all selfish power, I need you with me now, so I can explain myself, again. I need you with me now, to whisper my darkest secrets, I havent the right time, nor place to make these mistakes. This moment wont last long, To most but my false pretenses, I need you with me now, so I can explain myself, again. I need you with me now, to take away fear of darkness I havent any tears ,to shed, another night. This memory is mine, tangled in the mouth of harshness. I need you with me now, so I can explain myself, again. |
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| ChipChamp | Jul 16 2007, 08:26 PM Post #2 |
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Have fun!
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Pretty good! It sort of sounded like a song, to me.
:) 6.5/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| ** Death's servant | Jul 16 2007, 08:31 PM Post #3 |
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Reflection
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that was artfull usage of repetition |
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