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The Modern Vampire; hibrids
Topic Started: Jul 17 2007, 07:57 PM (793 Views)
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now your infectid idiot! lol.
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I know. But I was bitten by a were-bird, so now I change into a half human half bird. I have wings!.....Oh crud, did I say that out loud?...Forget what I said.
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no you typed it
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Type the next post! I wanna see if I take him home. hehe.
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Wow. This is a beautifully written piece. Excellent writing mate!
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thanks bro I've a surprise with the wearwolf for you linden.
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Correction: I'm a vampire bird with an ecliptical and monanical sense.
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Wow...this was really...creepy. ^_^ I loved the proffesional feel I get from it, i can really get into the character.
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Great story so far DS :up:
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I think Im going to wright the next part after AI get off.
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Balthamos rose to his feet unsteadily and realizing he was still in his wolf form changed back to his more presentable (human) self a tall man with black hair hanging over his green eyes and a long black coat lined with various weapons of iron and steel. He quickly felt his quickly healing cuts and broses as well as more tenderly his broken ribs already almost normal.

You see werewolves heal faster than normal people. They also can resist cold temperature. Despite there extreme resistance most werewolves have very short tempers they also run faster than men can and do not get tired easily. With this information the story must go on.

Balthamos belonged to a pack of 9 wolves they worked for a man whose name none of them knew. The most recent mission they had been given was to kill the two vampires. They had failed so far. The pack leader was named Armand he was shorter than Barthamos but very strong with brown hair and eyes and a temper that never broke, the second was Balthamos and the rest of the pack were equal. The rest of the pack consisted of: Jasper normal height with dark skin and black eyes, Sigmund mysterious and dark the largest of the pack, and three others whom I will not describe at this time.

Now you know a little of werewolves and a little more of vampires and I’m sure you have deduced that they usually keep a good distance from each other.


Winter entered to my resting place three days later just as I had fully recovered from my earlier pains. She had followed the scent she knew so well by night for 8 days before finding me and when we saw each other we were beyond happy our embrace was the most beautiful thing I had felt or would feel in my entire vampire’s life. I don’t know how long we stood there together I only know I wished that it would never end. When we finally pulled away we both sat on the ground beside each other interlocking our unbreakable fingers and leaning our heads against each other we stayed like this till morning’s sunlight forced her to rest in the safety of her “coffin”. I vowed to myself that I would ever let something like this happen to us again.
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*happy dance*

So, he doesn't come home with me? ... but theres more fuzzys, so there's still hope! :D
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fuzzies??? He is not fuzzy I told you that. Amyways he has free will he goes with anyone he wants, The only thing he has no choice in is staying with his pack, that he must do.
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I love it! I love how you ended it!
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its not over...
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