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| +Linden | Aug 1 2009, 04:44 PM Post #16 |
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Thanks. I think you'll like Brion (I'm gunna stop with the Mr. Ainsworth stuff now. lol.) even more later. :) I was researching ballroom dancing a little and on youtube I came across vintage waltzes. To write this I really needed something to look at, so I used these as my basis: When I got to this scene, I told myself screw historical accuracy and morphed the two videos. :P I liked that the second video went in a circle but disliked how they never met their original partner - which was something I needed. I liked the second one because they met again but disliked the little square dancing bit (I know it's not square dancing, but I don't know what to call it) in there. I took most of the posture from the first video. And, of course, any more insight is welcome. |
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| kelseyyy. | Aug 3 2009, 12:30 AM Post #17 |
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Set down your eyes for a moment and breathe.
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hmm. i like this, it's quite intriguing. although you said you'd like more advice, i have none. i'm quite hopeless when it comes to trying to revise something--i always think it's better all coming from the same person. which really does nothing to help you here. haha, sorry =P. keep writing, i can't wait for the next bit=] |
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| +Linden | Aug 3 2009, 12:34 AM Post #18 |
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Lol. It's okay. I still appreciate you reading it though. :) EDIT: I have updated the very ending. I made it stronger and more cyclic. yay! Edited by Linden, Aug 3 2009, 01:47 AM.
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| Anomy | Aug 6 2009, 06:25 AM Post #19 |
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*giggles* yay!! I read it!!! YAY I LOVE IT! X3 I can't wait for more. |
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