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Indeed, This Is My First Poem In Meabingful.
Topic Started: Sep 23 2007, 10:25 PM (204 Views)
*Inkheart
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I sat next to you today

At the movies

Life is shining like gems

And as you laugh

As I watch your eyes

I tie the loose ends

And I try to immagine

A world where my passion

Doesn't break me, but mends

I realize

That though I was hurt in the past

Maybe our friendship will last

Maybe our friendship will last

And maybe

I will never tell you good-bye...
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ChipChamp
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Good one! I liked it! :) I also thought that it was a pretty happy poem. :) And... this is your first in meaningful? Wow... you've been here so long... Hmm

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~ ChipChamp
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first of all the poem rocks it flows realy well. second Im glad to see that your takeing a better vew of life. ^_^
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Yeah, we can't all be emo :)

* cuts self*
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