| Indeed, This Is My First Poem In Meabingful. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Sep 23 2007, 10:25 PM (204 Views) | |
| *Inkheart | Sep 23 2007, 10:25 PM Post #1 |
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I sat next to you today At the movies Life is shining like gems And as you laugh As I watch your eyes I tie the loose ends And I try to immagine A world where my passion Doesn't break me, but mends I realize That though I was hurt in the past Maybe our friendship will last Maybe our friendship will last And maybe I will never tell you good-bye... |
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| ChipChamp | Sep 23 2007, 10:47 PM Post #2 |
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Have fun!
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Good one! I liked it!
:) I also thought that it was a pretty happy poem.
:) And... this is your first in meaningful? Wow... you've been here so long... Hmm 7.5/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| ** Death's servant | Sep 24 2007, 03:50 PM Post #3 |
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first of all the poem rocks it flows realy well. second Im glad to see that your takeing a better vew of life.
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| Anonymous | Sep 24 2007, 04:07 PM Post #4 |
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Yeah, we can't all be emo
:) * cuts self* |
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