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Reckoning Lands
Topic Started: Sep 27 2007, 10:01 AM (90 Views)
Mavrix
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Reckoning Lands

Everyone in their holy quest
To be the first alone
To find the only ambition
Or just to be displayed and shown
Although Dria has given her gifts
Everyone seems to be unique
We all endeavor to find our place
Our status among the fleet
Why is it that all must fall?
And have a dying day?
Why is it that none see this?
And just go along their way.
It's time to change
The reckoning is on our land
Realize your bleak position
And stop competing for the right hand

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This was a nice one. I would relay what I had in mind, but that'd ruin it, aye?
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Wow! I liked it a lot! :D Really good, I liked the rhymes a lot too. XD

8/10

~ ChipChamp
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another good one.
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