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| Mavrix | Sep 27 2007, 10:01 AM Post #1 |
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Reckoning Lands Everyone in their holy quest To be the first alone To find the only ambition Or just to be displayed and shown Although Dria has given her gifts Everyone seems to be unique We all endeavor to find our place Our status among the fleet Why is it that all must fall? And have a dying day? Why is it that none see this? And just go along their way. It's time to change The reckoning is on our land Realize your bleak position And stop competing for the right hand ----------------------------------------- This was a nice one. I would relay what I had in mind, but that'd ruin it, aye? |
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| ChipChamp | Sep 27 2007, 03:20 PM Post #2 |
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Have fun!
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Wow! I liked it a lot!
:D Really good, I liked the rhymes a lot too.
XD 8/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| ** Death's servant | Sep 27 2007, 06:48 PM Post #3 |
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another good one. |
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