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Unreal?
Topic Started: Sep 27 2007, 10:03 AM (82 Views)
Mavrix
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Unreal?

Why can't you fly in water?
Or bring up mountains in dreams?
Is your mind the after life?
Or do your thoughts just gleam?
As waves tumble down 
Against the tempered hold,
In a grand conversation of sorts
It tests the mighty stone's fold
Ask yourself these majestic questions
And inquire it of your holy truth
Become more than just a person
You can simply fly over the sun

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Recent....ish, I still need to fix some stanzas. Any comments?
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You're a really good poet. :D This one was really good, also!

7.5/10

~ ChipChamp
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that was cool
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