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| Mavrix | Sep 27 2007, 10:03 AM Post #1 |
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Unreal? Why can't you fly in water? Or bring up mountains in dreams? Is your mind the after life? Or do your thoughts just gleam? As waves tumble down Against the tempered hold, In a grand conversation of sorts It tests the mighty stone's fold Ask yourself these majestic questions And inquire it of your holy truth Become more than just a person You can simply fly over the sun ----------------------------------------- Recent....ish, I still need to fix some stanzas. Any comments? |
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| ChipChamp | Sep 27 2007, 03:21 PM Post #2 |
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Have fun!
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You're a really good poet.
:D This one was really good, also! 7.5/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| ** Death's servant | Sep 27 2007, 06:44 PM Post #3 |
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that was cool |
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