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| CruelBitterMockingLight | Sep 29 2007, 12:28 AM Post #1 |
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The Companion Cube Will Never Stab U
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We passed the carcus as if it were nothing. A pile of bones and rotting meat. It rank of death and old age. It reminded me breifly of the turkey my grandmother had made last Christmas. She had refused company, and so their was too much food for a frail woman like herself. It sat on the dinner table for two weeks without recognition; when we finally went to check on her the smell was so hideous that it took double the rotting period to get rid of it. He pulled it out, blue and glass and beautiful. A small bottle of green leafs chopped into fine grains and packed into the hole at the top. He pressed it to my lips, a smirk on his as he lit the leaves with the akward purple lighter. I inhaled and the fire burning in the back of my throat indicated the calming effect it would have on my body. I handed the pipe back to him and blew the smoke out slowly, watching the white clouds meld into the wind and blow away. I refused to cough, it was weak and so i chugged his water while in a fit of giggles. His eye brows rose and he took a hit himself, letting the smoke out with skill. I envied him. "Silly Freshman" he stated, and passed me the pipe. I eyed it slowly and then took the lighter, lighting the leaves myself and inhaling slowly. This time I let it out my nose, and it burned. My eyes watered slightly and I choked a little, handing it back to him. We stayed like that for a long while, I stared at him, and he stared at something in the distance. The world was nice, and he seemed more of a blessing than ever. Then his girlfriend called. |
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| + *cabecabe4 | Sep 29 2007, 08:34 AM Post #2 |
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PLEASE DELETE THIS ACCOUNT
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Uh-oh. Something's not going to go well... Great beginning! |
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| *Inkheart | Sep 29 2007, 09:35 AM Post #3 |
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whatcha talkin about? tea 13 is a soul cleanser, legal pretty much everywhere else except for america. things are, in fact, going great for the two of them. except the girlfriend calling. anyways, great story! |
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| +Linden | Sep 29 2007, 08:01 PM Post #4 |
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awesomesauce
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I love the pace you have when writing stories. There's this softness about it (which is the best I can describe it) and the feeling of want that gets in touch with the audience, or at least this reader. I want more! |
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| CruelBitterMockingLight | Oct 2 2007, 08:20 PM Post #5 |
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The Companion Cube Will Never Stab U
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We quickly strolled back onto campes, grinning with the remaining effects of the drug, "Well Freshman, this is were we say goodbye" His arms encircled my waist and pulled me closer, resting his head ontop of mine. I gasped with the suddeness of the act and barely had time to hug back before he left. I stood, shifting in the gravel and watching his retreating back, feeling lonely and spent. Rara sat in her car, glaring with harsh intensity. I knew we hadn't done anything, but the simple fact that we looked into each others eyes with passion was enough to make me feel guilty. 700 miles away Mike sat with his many troubles, we had not talked for a week and I had sat in a forest smoking pot with an old crush..a crush who kept his hands warm in my pants. |
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| Anonymous | Oct 2 2007, 08:27 PM Post #6 |
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* Five year old voice* I don't get it. |
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| +Linden | Oct 2 2007, 08:27 PM Post #7 |
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awesomesauce
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three words: duh duh duuuhh!! |
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| Anonymous | Oct 2 2007, 08:30 PM Post #8 |
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Wha-? |
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| ChipChamp | Oct 2 2007, 08:35 PM Post #9 |
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Have fun!
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Hmm... Mozarts fifth? Cause that's duh duh duh DUHHHH Lol |
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| +Linden | Oct 2 2007, 08:36 PM Post #10 |
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awesomesauce
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just my drama-sense is tingling thats all. |
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| ChipChamp | Oct 2 2007, 08:40 PM Post #11 |
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Have fun!
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Lol |
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| Anonymous | Oct 2 2007, 08:43 PM Post #12 |
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I still don't get IT |
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