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Topic Started: Oct 3 2007, 10:15 PM (227 Views)
labeaugray
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Her thumb curves into the perfect position,
Her payment for the rent.

She slides into the leather seats,
although she's already spent.

His hand is on her knee,
and she smirks with satisfaction,

For its truth she is not sure,
its only a reaction.

Fear is not an emotion she feels,
atleast not anymore.

She accepts the danger she faces,
the danger for a wh***.
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ChipChamp
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Interesting. :) Still pretty good, and I liked the rhymes! :D

7.5/10

~ ChipChamp
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labeaugray
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Lol. A little harsh, but Im satisfied. thank you ^_^
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ChipChamp
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Have fun!
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Lol, just not really my type of poem. :)
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Ooh Sexy.
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+ *cabecabe4
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Awesome. You are truly gifted.
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Red Love
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The fairest of them all
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:!
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Nice reaction, Red Love.

An interesting look into a life I would despise. Well done
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** Death's servant
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I like your style
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vampire of the night
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IT IS VERRY INTERESTING BUT THAT LIFE IS NOT FOR ME LOL
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** Death's servant
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dude easy on the caps...
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*chuckle* I think that wore off from when I hit the caps button when you were playing GW....
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