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What Are We Thinking?
Topic Started: Oct 10 2007, 08:36 PM (127 Views)
vampire of the night
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We are burning the life of our alredy dieing planet.we reap the harvest of another nations crops. We lie and we steel to get what we want. we never try to ask politly. we are the tinder box for one act of arsony after another. do we ask when we invade, NO! stop it now! I cant take it any more! WE ARE LEIS WE ARE MANKIND!
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Pretty good again! Just one tip: It makes it easier to read if you put them in stanzas, or put each line on a new line. (In my opinion)

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~ ChipChamp
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vampire of the night
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ok i'll do that from now on
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I agree with chip
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+ *cabecabe4
PLEASE DELETE THIS ACCOUNT
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Diddo. Nice, though.
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nice poem.
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