| Goodbyes; Another depressing love poem | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Oct 11 2007, 10:27 PM (172 Views) | |
| Red Love | Oct 11 2007, 10:27 PM Post #1 |
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The fairest of them all
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Goodbyes Our souls become entwined and our minds become one Everything I ever wanted is contained in that brief moment Lying in your arms feeling everything and nothing All the control we thought we had slips away Your breathing becomes labored and I gasp with pleasure Neither of us wants more or less than this But then the world calls us back to tell us we’re wrong I try to tell you what you mean to me, but I stutter Then I try to get up but my body responds to your will alone When I can stand again I make for the door, but our bonds hold me back My soul is being torn from me as I try to walk away Stumbling and falling, but you are there to catch me And when I finally part from you I get into my car I can barely breathe without you, but I struggle onward First I drive as slowly as I can to stay close to you But then anger takes hold and I slam on the gas Tears run down my cheeks as I fly around a corner Some day soon we won’t ever say goodbye again But that day is not today… |
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| + ****+Child of the Night | Oct 11 2007, 10:34 PM Post #2 |
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What is the price of freedom?
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That made my heart hurt... I didn't want you to go. |
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| ChipChamp | Oct 12 2007, 02:58 PM Post #3 |
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Have fun!
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Pretty good, and sad... 7/10 ~ ChipChamp |
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| + *cabecabe4 | Oct 13 2007, 02:25 PM Post #4 |
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PLEASE DELETE THIS ACCOUNT
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Awesome. Nearly perfect. It touches me so... |
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| ** Death's servant | Oct 14 2007, 03:49 PM Post #5 |
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Reflection
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sad........ |
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| Red Love | Oct 15 2007, 07:15 PM Post #6 |
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The fairest of them all
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Thank you very much, there was alot of emotion in this one |
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| + ****+Child of the Night | Oct 15 2007, 07:17 PM Post #7 |
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What is the price of freedom?
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It made me sad... made me relive it *Sigh* |
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