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Goodbyes; Another depressing love poem
Topic Started: Oct 11 2007, 10:27 PM (172 Views)
Red Love
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Goodbyes

Our souls become entwined and our minds become one
Everything I ever wanted is contained in that brief moment
Lying in your arms feeling everything and nothing
All the control we thought we had slips away
Your breathing becomes labored and I gasp with pleasure
Neither of us wants more or less than this

But then the world calls us back to tell us we’re wrong
I try to tell you what you mean to me, but I stutter
Then I try to get up but my body responds to your will alone
When I can stand again I make for the door, but our bonds hold me back
My soul is being torn from me as I try to walk away
Stumbling and falling, but you are there to catch me

And when I finally part from you I get into my car
I can barely breathe without you, but I struggle onward
First I drive as slowly as I can to stay close to you
But then anger takes hold and I slam on the gas
Tears run down my cheeks as I fly around a corner
Some day soon we won’t ever say goodbye again

But that day is not today…
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That made my heart hurt... I didn't want you to go.
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Pretty good, and sad...

7/10

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Awesome. Nearly perfect. It touches me so...
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sad........
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cabecabe4
Oct 13 2007, 02:25 PM
Awesome. Nearly perfect. It touches me so...

Thank you very much, there was alot of emotion in this one
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It made me sad... made me relive it *Sigh*
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